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Hi every1, how r u guys, i hv not been very active these days, but now i hv the time to update my ff. So here goes...

After arjun leaves for the office, bhavri goes straight to baisa's room. Over there, she meets baisa and they have a conversation abt S-M.

Bhavri: baisa…
Baisa: haan bhoomi, bolo kaise aana huwa?
Bhavri: baisa, ab to hum jaante hai ke suraj bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi ek doosre ke liye kya mehsoos karte hai. (Baisa nods in agreement) aap ko nahi lagta ke hamara kaam ab aur mushkil ho gaya hai?
Baisa: mujhe aisa nahi lagta… ab to kaam aur bhi aasan ho gaya hai!
Bhavri: nahi baisa, mera ishaara suraj bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi ki taraf nahi tha, main kakasaheb ki baat kar rahi hoon…
Baisa: haan bhoomi, yeh baat to hai. Mansen ko jab iss baat ka pata chalega to who kya karega, yeh koi nahi janta!
(All this time, suraj has been listening to what they were talking. Now, when bhavri turns around, she sees suraj there)
Bhavri: suraj bhaiya, aap yaha?
S: haan bhoomi, im sorry, lekin, main apne aap ko rok nahi paaya…
Baisa: koi baat nahi suraj beta, waise, tumne to suna ke hum log kya baatein kar rahe the… tumhe kya lagta hai, hame kya karna chahiye?
S: main khud iss baat ko lekar pareshan hoon baisa…
Bhavri: mujhe to bohot darr lag raha hai baisa… kahin suraj bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi alag ho gaye to? (when bhavri says this, suraj's face lits up, n he smiles)
S: yes, yes, yes… thanks a lot bhoomi! Tumne mujhe ek bohot hi accha idea diya hai!
Bhavri: KYA??? Aap ka matlab aap manasvi bhabhi se alag ho jayenge? Aap aisa nahi kar sakte hai bhaiya!
S: bhoomi… main pagal nahi ho gaya hoon… bas ab tum dekhti jao ke main kya karta hoon…
Saying this, he dials a number on his phone, and before speaking, he leaves a shocked bhavri and baisa in the room.

Bhavri leaves baisa's room and hurries to her room, where she calls up arjun.
A: hello bhavriji! Itni jaldi aap ko hamari yaad aa gayi? Kya baat hai! Waise hamara impression kaafi accha hai logo par!
B: bas bas… bohot bolte ho tum arjun. Mujhe bhi kuch kehne doge?
A: meri itni himmat ke main tumhe kuch kehne se roku? Bhavri, iss kaam ke liye ek bohot bada jigar chahiye, jo mere paas to bilkul nahi hai!
B: arjun, mazaak chodo! Main tumhe kuch serious baat batana chahti hoon, aur tum mazaak kar rahe ho! Suno... (she tells him what happened in baisa's room)
A: WHAT??? Bhaiya ne aisa kaha? I don't believe this. Bhavri mujhe lagta hai ke tumhare jethji ka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai!
B: nahi arjun, mujhe nahi lagta ke woh is tarha manasvi bhabhi ko chhod denge. Shayad unke mann mein koi plan hai, iss liye unh one aisa kaha!
A: ho sakta hai bhavri… waise ek baat hai, suraj bhaiya manasvi bhabhi ko chhodne ke bare mein soch bhi nahi sakte hai!
B: haan arjun… accha thik hai, main phone rakhti hoon, mujhe bohot kaam hai.
A: thik hai bhavri, bye…
B: bye arjun… (Hangs up)
A: bye, I love you…

Thats it. Hope u like it... M posting another episode in a few mins

Nevt episode...
Meanwhile, suraj is busy working on his plan. He is talking to someone on the fone.
S: dekhiye, aap please samajhne ki koshish kijiye. Yeh plan bilkul fool-proof hai, aur main nahi chahta hoon ke koi bhi gadbad ho… aur maine jaisa kaha hai, sab kuch waisa hi hona chahiye. Please, yeh meri zindagi ka sawaal hai…
The person on the phone: thik hai suraj… main samajh sakta hoon ke tum kis halaat se guzar rahe ho. Aur tum bilkul fikar mat karo, tumne jaisa kaha hai, main waisa hi karoonga.
S: thank you very much…
He hangs up and smiles to himself.

Later that evening, after arjun returns home from his office, suraj calls everyone downstairs into the hall. After everyone is there, he starts talking.
S: im sorry ke main aap sab ka waqt barbad kar raha hoon, lekin yeh baat poore ghar se judi huwi hai, aur khaas kar aapse papa (refering to mansen. Mansen is shocked at this behaviour, but stays quiet.) Abhi kuch hi der mein aap sab ko pata chal jayega ke main kya kehna chahta hoon. (just then, they hear a car parking outside HH. After a few seconds, Rehmat Zakaria, Goenka family's lawyer, enters the house. He greets all the elders in the house, and then goes straight to suraj and hands him some papers)
Rehmat: yeh lo suraj, tumhare papers. Tumne jaisa kaha tha, sab kuch waisa hi likha hai maine.
S: thank you very much rehmat chacha. (walks to mansen) papa, main chahta hoon ke aap yeh papers sign karde.
M: yeh kaise papers hai suraj?
S: yeh who papers hai, jinme yeh likha hai, ke ab main aap ka beta nahi hoon. Inme yeh likha hai, ke ab main legally free hoon, aur jo chahu who kar sakta hoon.
M: WHAT??? Never, main yeh papers sign nahi karunga…
S: aap yeh papers sign karenge papa… na chahte huwe bhi, aap ko in pe sign karna parega…
M: aur tum kaun hote ho mujhe yeh kehne waale?
S: papa aap bhool rahe hai, ke, according to the law, agar aap ek above 18 years ke ladke ko adopt karte hai, to us ladke ko yeh hak hota hai, ke woh jab chahe, uss rishte ko tod sakta hai…
M: lekin main nahi chahta hoon ke tum iss rishte ko todo...
S: yeh faisla mera hai, aur mujhe iss baat se koi farak nahi parta ke aap iss baare mein kya sochte hai.
Arjun, bhoomi, manasvi and all the others are shocked to see such behaviour of suraj towards mansen.
S: aap ne mujhe sirf iss liye adopt kiya tha, kyon ki aap jaante the ke aapka apna beta kisi kaam ka nahi hai! Apne matlab ke liye mujhe istemaal (use) kiya. Ab bas! Main aur istemaal nahi hona chahta hoon… please, isse pehle ke mujhe aap ke saath aur sakhti se pesh aana pare, in papers par sign kardijie…
Mansen is totally speechless, and then, Rehmat speaks.
R: mansen, papers par sign kardo. Agar tumne in par sign nahi kiya, to suraj tumpe court case kar sakta hai. Aur isse Goenka khandan ki badnaami hogi.
At last, mansen talks.
M: suraj beta, main sign kardoonga, lekin, yaha se jaane ke baad tum kaha rahoge?
S: (laughs) yeh aapse kisne kaha ke main yaha se chala jaunga? Main yehi issi ghar mein rahunga, apne parivaar ke saath…
Mansen is confused…
S: aap samjhe nahi? Main samjhata hoon… woh raha mera parivaar (pointing towards siddhart and shaku) unhi ke saath rahunga main.
Mansen is going red with anger… He walks away to his room, and yuvraj and mamaji follow. Gunvanti goes near suraj, puts her hand on his head, and then leaves.

Heres the next episode...

Sid and shaku are extremely happy at this decision, and arjun is almost jumping. Bhavri as usual, is feeling bad for mansen, but at the same time, is happy at this decision. Manasvi does not say anything, but is internally happy, because she knew that the only obstacle between suraj and her was mansen. Suraj goes and hugs sid and shaku. And then steals a glance at manasvi.
Baisa: suraj beta, bohot himmat ka kaam kiya hai tumne, aur ab, main, iss ghar ki sabse badi bahu, siddhart aur shakuntala ke saamne ek proposal rakhna chahti hoon.
She moves in front of them.
Baisa: main chahti hoon ke suraj aur manasvi ki shaadi ho jaye. Kya tum dono iss baat se raazi ho?
Sid and shaku are shocked at first, but then shaku speaks
Shaku: agar suraj ya manasvi ko koi problem nahi hai, to phir hame bhi iss shaadi se koi problem nahi hai.
Baisa: uski fikar mat karo… tum sab ko manaane se pehle, humne in dono ko raazi kiya tha.
Sid: kya? Yeh sab hamare peet peeche ho raha tha aur hame pata bhi nahi chala…
A: haan papa, aakhir yeh aapke ladle arjun ka kamaal tha! (is hit by bhavri on the head)
All of them laugh.

Later that night, everyone is in their respective rooms. Cut to A-B's room. Arjun and bhavri both are sitting on the sofa (in each others arms, of course)
A: aaj main bohot khush hoon bhavri…
B: kyun?
A: kyun ki, bhavriji, aap yaha meri baahon mein baithi hai! Aur kuch hi dino ke baad, suraj bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi ki bhi shaadi ho jayegi!
B: haan arjun! Main chahti hoon ke suraj bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi ki shaadi aisi ho, ke poora shaher isse yaad rakhe!
A: aisa hi hoga bhavri! Un dono ki shaadi mein koi kami nahi hogi! Aur waise bhavriji, iss waqt aap un dono ke baare mein sochna chodiye, aur hamare baare mein sochiye!
B: hamare baare mein, kya?
A: uh bhavri! Tum itni boring ho! Tumhe nahi lagta hai ke iss ghar mein hame woh space nahi mil rahi hai jo ek newly married couple ko milni chahiye?
B: NEWLY MARRIED????? Kya matlab? Arjun hamari shaadi ko ek saal hone wala hai!
A: yeh tumse kisne kaha? Hamari shaadi ko sirf ek din huwa hai!!!
B: WHAT???
A: haan, hamari shaadi kal hi to huwi hai! Kal raat ko… remember! Tum aur main! Main aur tum! Akele… iss kamre mein!
B: (blushingly) arjun, bas bhi karo na! koi sunlega!
A: sunne do! Aakhir hamari shaadi huwi hai! Yeh sab to shaadi ke baad bohot common hota hai!
B: chup raho arjun! Bohot bolne lage ho tum aaj kal!
A: accha baba! Sorry… waise main kya keh raha tha…(thinks for a moment) haan, main yeh keh raha tha, ke tumhe nahi lagta ke bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi ki shaadi ke baad, hame bhi unn ke saath second honeymoon par jaana chahiye???
B: kya keh rahe ho arjun? To phir yaha ghar ka khayaal kaun rakhega?
A: ghar ke alawa tumhe aur kuch soojhta hi nahi na?
B: lekin arjun…
A: no lekin… hum jaa rahe hai, n that's final!
B: hey Bhagwan, yeh main kaha phas gayi!!!

Thats it guys, i hope u liked it. I hv posted 3 episodes together to compensate for the time tht i was away...

god and thank god u updated
i have been checking everyday to c that u have updated or not