my fan-fic... - Page 14

where r u plz update soon iam eagerly waiting for the update

plzzzzzz cont soon...i just read the whole thing n i think its awesome 👏

I just read the whole thing and I must say that you write well.. 👏

where r u wht abt the update y r u taking so long time u had updated 3 weeks ago nothing is updated uptil now plz update it soon

hello every1, how r u guys? sorry for not updating for so long.
At the breakfast table, both arjun and bhavri are behaving weirdly.
Shaku: arjun, bhoomi... tum dono thik to ho na?
When she gets no reply from them, she repeats the same question again loudly. this time, both arjun and bhavri come out of their trance and look at shaku.
A: haan mummy, kyun? kya huwa? aaj aisa sawaal kyun?
Shaku: kuch nahi, bhoomi, tumhare bauji ne paratha mangatha, toast nahi! aur arjun, tum suraj ki chai pi rahe ho...
Arjun and bhavri both look at their mistakes and laugh at them.
A: sorry, hame pata nahi tha! actually, kal raat bohot der se soye the... isliye...
Shaku: accha! lekin aaj subah to tum dono bohot jaldi uth gaye the...
A: aap ko kaise pata chala?
Shaku(laughing): tum dono ke hasne ki aawaz poore ghar mein sunai de rahi thi...
Arjun cannot say anything so he just smiles and looks at bhavri, who is immensely blushing.

After breakfast, in A-Bs room, arjun is getting ready for office and bhavri is making the bed. After arjun is done, he goes and stands next to bhavri, who does not like this idea at all.
B: arjun, mujhe kaam karne doge tum? dekho agar abhi iss kamre mein koi aagaya, aur usne bed iss haalat mein dekh liya to kya hoga?
A: kuch nahi, woh samjhega ke at last arjun aur bhavri ki suhaag raat ho gayi...
Bhavri blushes 😳 😳 😳 and turns away from arjun who is continuously staring at her.
B: arjun... tumhe office nahi jaana hai kya?
A: bhavri,(jokingly) tumhari problem kya hai? main apni patni ko dekh raha hoon... tumhe isse jalan ho rahi hai kya?
B: haan... mujhe jalan ho rahi hai! ab tum office jao...
Saying this, she pushes him out, hands him his wallet, and turns to clean the room. Arjun comes inside again on tiptoe, but bhavri notices him, and looks at him with her hands on her hips and a serious expression on her face.
A(hesitantly): woh, main apna rumaal bhool gaya tha!
B: jaldi lelo aur office jao!
Arjun takes his hanky and goes next to bhavri.
A: bhavri... ek baat kahu?
B: bolo!
A: tum gusse mein bohot pretty lagti ho.
Bhavri smiles at this.
A: agar main tumse kuch maangu, to kya tum mujhe dogi?
B: kya chahiye tumhe arjun?
Arjun shows his cheek to bhavri, and she understands. She gives him a light kiss. But, just like any other guy, arjun is not satisfied and asks for another 1. This time, bhavri pushes him out of the room.

Thats it! i hope u liked it... tata... will update soon.

👏 great story!!!!!!!!!!!
i just started reading this coloumn and i feel its very creative and mindblowing..its as gud as the serial!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 its so wonderfully riiten, u shud go and rite a few of the actual episodes for saarrthi!
keep up the gud work.
hermione

gr8 work
par the best thing is atlast aapne update to ki fan fic
sab fanfic writers acchi stories likh kar padne ke aadat daal dete hain aur phir intezaar karwaate hain
just kidding
ab intezaar zyada mat karwaiyega

finally the update is done i was waiting for it eagerly it was a very sweet update i loved it let the fanfic b always happy go lucky and romantic there should not b any villan in this fan fic i love it this way

too good A-B 👏 👏 👏 , ur ff is really sweet 😳 . and as mj_desai said keep it that way. agli baar increase the length.

FINALLY !!!!!!!!!!!

very very very good a-b.... 👏

veyr very nice scene... a-b were looking RRRRRRREEEALLLLyyy cutee...

n plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz keep it updated lawyas... k 😉