RagNa SS: Driver Beti.. Kalpi-; LAST CHAPTER- 16 pg. 65 (June 23)

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Index

Prologue: Below
Chapter 1: Page 4
Chapter 2-A: Page 8
Chapter 2-B-2-B1: Page 10
Chapter 3: Page 14
Chapter 4: Page 17
Chapter 5: Page 18
Chapter 6: Page 24
Teaser Pg: Page 28
Chapter 7-A: Page 29
Chapter 7-B: Page 30
Chapter 8: Page 36
Chapter 9-A: Page 40
Chapter 9-B: Page 44
Chapter 10: Page 45
Chapter 11: Page 45
Chapter 12: Page 50
Chapter 13: Page 51
Chapter 14: Page 55
Chapter 15: Page 61
Chapter 16: Page 65


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Hai toh Padhi Likhi...
...Hamari DRIVER BETI...

KALPI

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Prologue:
"Mr. Vitthal Jhadav, " came the scream from the direction of door and startled already ill Vitthal. He was bed ridden and could see angry sahab on door,

"How dare you?? You had taken your salary in advance for 3 months and now you say you are bed ridden for soo long." Vitthal looked down. He wanted this salary in advance to pay fees for her daughter's entrance exams. He wants his daughter to study and become someone to be known. He didnt want his future generations to suffer like he and his wife did. But right now he felt helpless. "Sir, please forgive us," Vitthal's wife Kamla begged.

And paying no attention to their guilt, condition, and situations.. he ordered them to pay back their Money... or resume for work from tomorrow or we will have to take some actions.

... soon they heard a female voice from back.
"You will get driver on time from tomorrow morning," all turned back to find young girl of about 22 year old with determination in her eyes. She walked and stood in front of Mr. Sahil Kapoor owner of DriveState Cab Services.
She was Kalpana Jadhav... Daughter of Vitthal. She had that confidence in her eyes to face employer of her Father and tell him, "I will be coming to work from tomorrow, and drive around city and guide your passengers who hire your cab."
Vitthal and Kamla stood there shocked. Vitthal told Kalpi to stay out, yet she was sure about her own words.
Sahil smirked, "You are a girl and not my employee.. It is Vitthal who has to be the one there."
Kalpi fired back, "you just need someone who can provide you with driving servives in place of my bed ridden dad. Nothing else should matter."
Sahil accepted her offer to come for work instead of her father. "Tomorrow sharp 11.00 you will have to come and complete the formalities of organization and then join in. Your driving skills will be tested. And then will make decision about hiring you as replacement."
Kalpi was the one who had started riding scooter from age of 15 and learned driving at age of 17.. She didn't fear and though not legal in India. She had got her driving license within 3 months after her 18th birthday. Hence she had no fear of test, "Tell me more.. I am sure to pass your stupid test."
Sahil looked through trying to break her confidence, "Raghav Singhaniya lands in Mumbai after three days. He will be here for one week. You will be driving for him. Mind it! He is perfectionist and would always prefer reaching places on time..."
Kalpi smiled..."perfect and punctual people always impress me... See You tomorrow. You can leave."
Sahil left feeling insulted.
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I will start this one once I turn groupie or senior member. Till then I plan to focus only on Heavenly Jail and forum activity
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Interesting . Pls continue soon.
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wow 👏 Interesting 😃
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nice concept...
continuee soonn
i kinda like ur tag linee sounds good and a bit funnyy hehe
Hai toh Padhi Likhi... Hamari DRIVER BETI... KALPI
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New Stories are always welcomed...
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nice prologue👏
continue soon
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I am glad you all liked it...
I will update really soon.
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Wonderful start. New concept. Loved it. when i read the topic i was like what ?????? But its awesome ff. Plz update soon and update heavenly jail also.
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I have a doubt.

I am sure this story would be difficult to be fitted completely in English. I was wondering how many of you will be comfortable in Hindi+English?

I will for sure try to provide translation.. whenever I feel it would be tough to understand. . But the sense of humour and fun in Hindi won't be same in pure English..

So.. just asking if you all will require that Translation or.. it would be ok?
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I am comfortable with hindi and english language.

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