FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 4

Well written! Really liked reading it!👍🏼

Shaana

Aaj ke episode ke baad, waiting for one more OS ! Am sure it would have triggered off something in your imagination !! So waiting !!!!! 😊

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Beautifully written...
I like how u expresses RagNa feelings
Love the phone conversation, it was unconventional but very effective ;)
Raghav wanted to hear Kalpi voice was the sweetest thing ever
And Kalpi know him so well lol
U did a superb job
Plz continue to write

lol...mr. akadoo is always on high but thinks only of kalpi in his lonesome moments 😆

Originally posted by: -Wanderer-

Well written! Really liked reading it!👍🏼

thank u 😃

Originally posted by: -sudha-

Shaana

Aaj ke episode ke baad, waiting for one more OS ! Am sure it would have triggered off something in your imagination !! So waiting !!!!! 😊

sudha today , i was really angry at mr. akadoo...he was being unnecessarily rude on kalpi


i dont want kalpi to work for him now...just want prem uses this oppertunity and hires kalpi...and she says yes saying she wants the opportunity to move on...and then mr akadoo will realise her worth,,,,omg look i got idea for my next os 😆

Lovely start.. do continue dear😳

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

sudha today , i was really angry at mr. akadoo...he was being unnecessarily rude on kalpi


i dont want kalpi to work for him now...just want prem uses this oppertunity and hires kalpi...and she says yes saying she wants the opportunity to move on...and then mr akadoo will realise her worth,,,,omg look i got idea for my next os 😆

Arre Shaana! His reaction was typically Raghav Singhania reaction!
Actually Loved the way he saw her upset in the car, and took the phone to speak to Kamlama. Loved the way he spoke to her also

But the discomfort of being found with Maya had to come out in anger! And you are right...-when Kalpi moves on, or is seen with someone else- his reactions will be ones to watch out for !!! This is getting interesting-and I am waiting for your OSs to trigger some more thoughts ! in this direction! 😃

Originally posted by: -sudha-

Arre Shaana! His reaction was typically Raghav Singhania reaction!
Actually Loved the way he saw her upset in the car, and took the phone to speak to Kamlama. Loved the way he spoke to her also

But the discomfort of being found with Maya had to come out in anger! And you are right...-when Kalpi moves on, or is seen with someone else- his reactions will be ones to watch out for !!! This is getting interesting-and I am waiting for your OSs to trigger some more thoughts ! in this direction! 😃

oks dear...will think to write something tonight😉

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI

loved ur os yaar

thanku ...😃

is andi the bb6 wala andi in ur id ??

fabulous os dear..👏👏 totally love it..❤️❤️❤️