FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60

nebu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Its just mind blowing and superb..👍🏼😳.Well done yaar👏

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SHANA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mkakkar93
Such a beautiful start please I hope u wl update soon 👏

its a one shot dear...so i may not update it...but yes will write few more if we keep getting such beautiful ragna episodes 😃

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SHANA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti
Awesome!!!!

thank u 😃

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SHANA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nebu
Its just mind blowing and superb..👍🏼😳.Well done yaar👏

thank u a lot
agree with u ...i really blew my mind while writing it😆...now i need some pills too !!!

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Buddy this is simply incredible!👍🏼

Thanks for the wonderful OS. you rendered me speechless 😃. I loved and enjoyed every bit of the update! This is one of the best OS I read in the forum👏

The way you expressed Raghav and Kalpana's P.O.V. is simply mind blowing...hats-off!👏 The start was awesome, Raghav staring at Kalpi from CCTV reeling in her memories and the next moment insecurities take-over his senses..poor guy, he himself is amazed with the feelings🤣. Kalpi is equally amazing, she has indeed came a long way, can read him as open book❤️

She knew next morning she will get her arrogant Boss back, blaring and glaring...🤣 I had my share of laughter reading this line😆

Gosh, late night phone call...that was something I really loved

P.S. Phew...this has turned irritatingly long😡 Sorry for the boring essay

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Sorry double post

Buddy this is simply incredible!👍🏼

Thanks for the wonderful OS. you rendered me speechless 😃. I loved and enjoyed every bit of the update! This is one of the best OS I read in the forum👏

The way you expressed Raghav and Kalpana's P.O.V. is simply mind blowing...hats-off!👏 The start was awesome, Raghav staring at Kalpi from CCTV reeling in her memories and the next moment insecurities take-over his senses..poor guy, he himself is amazed with the feelings🤣. Kalpi is equally amazing, she has indeed came a long way, can read him as open book❤️

She knew next morning she will get her arrogant Boss back, blaring and glaring...🤣 I had my share of laughter reading this line😆

Gosh, late night phone call...that was something I really loved

P.S. Phew...this has turned irritatingly long😡 Sorry for the boring essay

Edited by nandinidavid96 - 11 years ago

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow, this was really awesome hun 👏

loved it 😃

i could just picture all of it happening before me...

hope u continue with it or write another os soon

take care

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

It's brilliant... I was visualizing the scenes while reading...

M absolutely speechless. It's the best OS I have read till date.

Plz keep writing more. I loved it.

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SHANA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Buddy this is simply incredible!👍🏼

Thanks for the wonderful OS. you rendered me speechless 😃. I loved and enjoyed every bit of the update! This is one of the best OS I read in the forum👏

The way you expressed Raghav and Kalpana's P.O.V. is simply mind blowing...hats-off!👏 The start was awesome, Raghav staring at Kalpi from CCTV reeling in her memories and the next moment insecurities take-over his senses..poor guy, he himself is amazed with the feelings🤣. Kalpi is equally amazing, she has indeed came a long way, can read him as open book❤️

She knew next morning she will get her arrogant Boss back, blaring and glaring...🤣 I had my share of laughter reading this line😆

Gosh, late night phone call...that was something I really loved

P.S. Phew...this has turned irritatingly long😡 Sorry for the boring essay

thank u nandini...i love ur comment 😃

at least u told me what u liked and thus i know what i need to write next to entertain u 😳

i am one hack of a cracker in real life 😆, so even if i do serious writing , i could not resists to write some crackling line 🤣

thankfully it did crackle some funny bone out in u 😃

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SHANA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rozy77
wow, this was really awesome hun 👏
loved it 😃

i could just picture all of it happening before me...

hope u continue with it or write another os soon

take care

thank u dear, good to know it was worthy enough

will sure write another os, when i dont know 😆

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