FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60

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SHANA

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Originally posted by: zackandjosh
You're a fantastic writer. Enjoyed your OS tremendously. Thank you.

thank u zack😃

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Originally posted by: yellowpurse
shana...what the heck is this?
y r u planning on giving us sleepless nights?????

jokes apart, it's beautiful!!!! wonderful job! i just loved ittt every bit of it! pls continue... <3

no no, i just want to give u sweet dreams 😉

thank u for appreciation 😃

u did not contribute to os trp...why 😆...i mean like nahi mara😆

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Originally posted by: ShanUlas

no no, i just want to give u sweet dreams 😉

thank u for appreciation 😃

u did not contribute to os trp...why 😆...i mean like nahi mara😆

oh gosh..i always just am mainly commenting that i totally forget to hit like😆 but it wasn't intentional. btw now i hope ur os trp has gone up😉

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SHANA

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Originally posted by: leelu0001
very nice loved it

thank u leelu😃

btw today we did see raghav calling kalpi and situations were more or less same 😆

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It was seven o clock in the morning

Kalpi woke up sneezing.Thanks too Aaays mirchi tadka in poha.Their house was not big enough , plus her bed was just beside the kitchen.It was she who had fought for this place coz she found the corner cozy but morning was always a bad time to be in bed. Pakya often teased her for being in love with aayi ka morning tadka

She was surprised her aayi did not wake her up.She rushed to bathroom but in vain.Pakya was already singing inside.It was going to be abad day .She would be late.She could just see paaki being scolded because of her being late and then herself being showered with volly of lectures on puncuality and importance of time.

Kalpi tu to gayi !

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Raghav stared at the mirror .Things were going out of his control.For the fist time in his life ,he did something he was really very embarrassed of.He could not just believe he called Kalpi so late at night, that too just to listen to her voice.But things did not end .Even Kalpi seemed to have sleepless night and called him back.Just to say Sir please take care !

What was this happening.he could not just allow things happen the way they were going on.Kalpi was too young and unprepared for any of the emotions that were developing between them.he had seen Kalpi.the girl seemed so clueless of what he was going through.

He remebered he had happened to touch her hand while taking the pen.he just could not let go of her hand.it felt so good holding her But the girl had looked at him blank waiting for hands to be released neither embarrassed nor angry.Were not Paaaki and Kalpi of same age.He could see Paaki reacting to his every touch every smile.

He took out the blue shirt and wore it.Paaki had once said it looked good on him.Blue was Paakis favorite colur..he smile witha twitched eye brow.

What was Kalpis favorite colour.? he reflected and sighed .

May be he will never know

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Paaki sat in her cabin playing with her pen and staring at the computer screen. Kalpi had said the design plan of their project had loop holes.But for Paaki it seemed perfect.Now she wanted for kalpi to come and find holes in it .

Raghav Sir has come ! she chuckled to herself and he was wearing her favorite colur blue. Now it was going to be a perfect day .Paaki felt she happiest these days .She was getting attention she craved for .

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But Paakis brother Prem Kapoor seemed quit skeptical about it. Obviously he wanted his sister hitched to the millionaire in the town as it would help him further in his business.Still he was not ready to bury his hatchets against Raghav Singhania his biggest business as well as family rival .

He had changed his strategy now and just like his mother decided to adopt sweet ways to peruse rather then force and did find things happening , specially with girls, be it his own sister Paaki or servants daughter Kalpi . He was quit impressed with Kalpi .For him she was not just a servant's daughter but his enemys weakness as well as prized asset. Though this asset was the most loyal one and breaking her was difficult.

He had been searching for his weakness and did find one.Kalpi ! he could see what his sister could not. He could see how Raghav cared for Kalpi and how his care was something more then just care for Kamlaa Bais daughter. He did remember once, how Raghav had fiercely snatched Kalpis hand away from him while all he was trying to do was to help her from stumbling down the chair . Raghav could not bear to see his hands on Kalpi.He smiled at himself. He knew what to do next .

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Kalpi had managed to reach office before her boss and was thankful to wish him good morning just an hour before noon.She had dressed perfect for occasion .Today she was given the chance to attend the high level meeting along with paaki.She adjusted her scarf .Kalpi this is ur day to prove.she encouraged herself.

The delegates seemed impressed..Raghav sir had given her chance to make presentation this time.He often alternated between her and paaki and it was Paakis turn but this time be broke his rule and asked her to go with it.Even Paaki did not complain. Now she was too lost in raghav Sir and his likes and dislikes that impressing him by work did not matter much to her.raghav Sir was already giving her too much attention and smiled quit often at her.Though Kalpi never knew why coz she found Paaki a bit too cheesy on Raghav.

Anyways Kalpi did not mind Raghav smiling at Paaki .As Raghav was always a surprise package for her. Sometimes she thought she knew him well but very next time his actions would leave her clueless. Inspite of all this she was happy working with him.He encouraged her to do better,did scold her for mistakes but his appreciations and promotions always came with her hard work .though its was always Sammy who spoke his words while all Raghav would do was to smile and go away .

He was her mentor.She had accepted him that way and his harsh words would never deter her from respecting him . Surprisingly she cared for him as well though she felt it came into her because he was always their for her family when needed most and even bore her idiocy just to show her right path.

I am so lucky ! She sighed as she looked at Raghav who was in talks with the delegates.

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Raghav had an air of pride all through while Kalpi made her presentation.The girl forgot nothing .She had taken care of every detail he had mentioned to her while discussions.She was his one of the best resurces he had in his office.the only thing that worried him was his own growing feelings for her. He had managed to hide it till date and the credit went to constant clingy ways of Paaki and no nonsense attitude of Kalpi

He was thankful that Kalpi did not come bragging about the last night phone call.He would have died out of embarrassment if she would have had mentioned it. Instead she was at work preparing for meeting.He was happy as he himself wanted to forget his foolishness.

He realized Prem staring at Kalpi.It was not new .He had seen Prem trying to get on kalpi since last few weeks.He knew not why he was so interested in her. Things had been running smooth between him and Kapoors for quit sometime.Not that he forgot his revenge plans but coz Kapoors seemed to be planning something he still needed to fathom.he was going well with Paaki.he just needed to smile at her and the girl would reach ninth sky.

Still he needed to find what was Prem planning .

Chapter 3 : The First Kiss

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Edited by ShanUlas - 11 years ago