FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60

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HoneySweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Omg its just an awesome update waiting for next update soon 👏 just loved it 😊 In RagNa land 😳👍🏼

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: fairylover
It's brilliant... I was visualizing the scenes while reading...

M absolutely speechless. It's the best OS I have read till date.

Plz keep writing more. I loved it.

thank u ..aww ...i am so honored 😃

will write for sure 😊

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: HoneySweety
Omg its just an awesome update waiting for next update soon 👏 just loved it 😊 In RagNa land 😳👍🏼

me too reporting from ragna land itself..nice to meet u 😃

its an one shot dear...so it cant be updated...but will write few more

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Mehr

@mehr05

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

absolutely marvelous! 👏

The phone call scene is so touching!

loved it! 😊

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sri7

@sri7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Really beautiful. Please do write more. Thanks.

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Momrin
Its very nice

thanku😃

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mehr05
absolutely marvelous! 👏
The phone call scene is so touching!
loved it! 😊

wrote it on personal experience 😆...that normally happens when u r in love...and fire is on both sides 😳

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sri7
Really beautiful. Please do write more. Thanks.

thank u

will write for sure, if i keep getting such ragna filled episodes

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Mehr

@mehr05

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

wrote it on personal experience 😆...that normally happens when u r in love...and fire is on both sides 😳

true! true! 😊

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Beautifully written...
I like how u expresses RagNa feelings
Love the phone conversation, it was unconventional but very effective ;)
Raghav wanted to hear Kalpi voice was the sweetest thing ever
And Kalpi know him so well lol
U did a superb job
Plz continue to write

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