RagNa FF:Together Forever : Part 30 on Page 53 (March 8)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys. This is Deepika. Am here wid a fanfiction about RagNa 😳. This is my first fanfic so please don't throw slippers or tomatoes at me 😆. Below is the character sketch. HOPE U ALL LIKE IT.

KALPANA YADAV
A pretty, hard-working, bubbly and matured girl with a sense of responsibility. She loves her parents a lot and can do anything for them. She is the only daughter of her parents. Her best friend is Pakhi Kapoor whom she calles Barbie. She is now waiting for her placing so that she could start working.
RAGHAV SINGHANIA
An arrogant man who thinks money is everything. He lost his parents at a young age and was brought up by his uncle. He is a skillful businessman and ia very intelligent. He thinks GIRLS ARE A NUISANCE. (please dnt throw slippers at me. i am a girl myself).
PAKHI KAPOOR-
The sweet daughter of one of the richest families in Munbai The Kapoors. She is the best friend of Kalpana and calls her Chikki. She is like a sister to Kalpana and is waiting for her placing. She loves her family a lot but doesen't want to live on their money.
PREM CHAUHAN
One of the business tycoons. He can do anything to achieve what he wants. A shrewd person by nature, he can go to any lengths to avoid loss in his business. He has had an obsession for Kalpana right from the college days. (again dnt throw slippers on me 😛)
SAMAR SINGHANIA
Also called as Sammy.He is the cousin and best friend of Raghav Singhania, understands him in and out. He knows of his tragic past and the reason behind his hatred for girls. He is a handsome lad and cares for Raghav like a brother.
KAMLA YADAV
She is the sweet mother of Kalpana and loves her to the core. For her, Kalpana is the apple of her eye. She has dreams for her daughter and wants her to fulfill them and lead a happy life. Her daughter is only too happy to follow her mother's dreams. She calls her Kalpi
VITTHAL YADAV
The understanding and caring father of Kalpana. He loves his wife very much and adores his daughter. He trusts his daughter very much and believes that she is the best. He encourages his daughter. He calls Kalpana as Rajkumari.
SAHIL KAPPOR
He is the father of Pakhi. He has a soft-corner for Kalpi. He loves his daughter and is happy that she wants to work and earn money. He loves his wife a lot but is a bit scared of her 😆(well, that may be true)
NEETU KAPOOR
She is the mother of Pakhi. She used to hate Kalpi before as she is not rich, but after Kalpi saves Pakhi in an accident, she has warmed up to her. She bosses around the house with her shouts and that makes her husband scared of her. She is good at heart but doesen't show it outside. She often makes comical acts while engaged in house work when the maids go on leave
RAM SINGHANIA
He is the uncle of Raghav and father of Samar aka Sammy. He treats Raghav like his own son. He loves both his sons a lot. He takes in Raghav after his brother and sister-in-law's death. He is 60 years old. He knows the reason behind the hatred of girls and prays to God everyday that a girl must come into Raghav's life and support him throughout his life.
MORE CHARACTERS COMING IN LATER CHAPTERS.
I hope u guys like the Character Sketch. If u guys are Ok with the Character Sketch then i will proceed with the story... 😊
- By Deepika 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is awsome...so prem the obsessed lover villain...ragna and pakhi-sam...very nice cs...I really didnt want a triangle...there r only two ffs running in this forum...really welcoming this one...would love and want regular updates...I really like this sheer simple and deep intensity of ragna as a couple...so would love to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The start is awesome!😊
The way u described every character is too good
Kalpi calls pakhi barbie 😆and raghav'arrogance😡
Please update soon..eagerly waiting for the upcoming story 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved every bit of it deepika its superb 👏...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh god dips ur Char sketch seems really interesting..😃
& i'm sure the story will be more interesting...😊 U r doing great job👏👏 go ahead dear 👍🏼 u can do it very nicely 😊 & update soon...would love to read yr.trurly i can't wait for this FF...& surely no tomatos no slippers no eggs nothing only one thing & i.e i wanna pat ur back 😊 i love u sweetheart🤗 muhhh 😳 😳
& ha update soon 😆 me waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your character seem intresting waiting for your ff to proceed
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Really like the character sketch 👍🏼 Looking foward the story , it's very interesting !!!! Exited about how our Mr. Raghav wiil fall for Kalpana or Who knows ...maybe that is Kalpana who will fall first for fim, i wonder ...🤔 Hope you post the first part really soon coz can't wait Deepika 😉
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PART 1-
CHAWL
It was a beautiful morning in Mumbai. Everyone is busy going about with their daily works. In the chawl, a woman is calling out,"Kalpi beta, come down breakfast is ready.. You need to get ready for your college. Remember, you have an interview today." She is Kamla, Kalpi's mother. A voice is heard from upstairs," Haan Aayi, bus aa rahi hoon." A girl comes down the stairs in a blue kurtha and black jeans with a smile on her face. She is Kalpi. She hugs Kamla and says,"Good Morning Aayi.". Kamla also wishes her Good Morning. She asks,"Kalpi, aaj meine tumhari mann pasand ka breakfast banaayi." Kalpi smiles and says,"Poha !!" Kamla nods. Kalpi says,"Jaldi khilaao naa Aayi." Kamla looks at her her adoringly and serves her the poha. While eatin, Kalpi asks,"Aayi . Where is Baba ?" Kamla says,"He has gone to the temple. He will be back." Just then Vitthal enters. Kalpi asks,"Baba, aaj inti subah, aap mujse milke bina temple chale gaye the..". Vittal says,"Aaj meri Rajkumari apni interview keliye jaa rahi hain. Isiliye main mandir jaakar aa raha hoon. Apni Rajkumari keliye pray karne gaya tha." Kalpi smiles at this and hugs her father and says,"Thanx Baba. Aap mere liya itna sab kuch kar rahe hain." Vitthal just smiles and hugs her back.
IN A POSH AREA
In an apartment building, a woman's voice can be heard shouting and cursing. She is seen scrubbing the floors with a scowl on her face. She is Neetu Kapoor. she shouts,"In noukaron ko bhi aaj hi leave lena tha kya. Kabhi samajh mein bhi nahi aata inko. Aaj meri Pakhi apni interview keliye jaa rahi hain aur mein uske saath time spend karne se bagar yaha scrub kart rahi hoon." A man is walking towards the door and she shouts out to him,"Sahil !! Ap kaha jaa rahe hain inti subah. Aapki office keliye nikalne ka time nahi hua." Sahil thinks in his mind,"Tumse chutkara paane keliye mein aaj office jaldi nikal raha hoon. Tumhara yeh wala ghussa nahin dekhna hain muhje." Sahil turns to her with a smile on his face and says,"Wo Neetu, kya hain na, aaj office mein ek both zaroori meetin hain. Isliye jaldi nika raha hoon." Neetu frowns and says,"Pata hai aap kitne lucky ho ? Bus office jaate ho, vaha A/C mein baitte ho aur orders dete ho.' Sahil says,"Tum kya jaantio ho. Tum to sirf ghar par ho. Aur ghar ka kaam kitna easy hain. Vo bhi nahi kar sakti ho tum?". Sahil sgtarts walking and Neetu says,"Haan haan, kyu nahi bolenge aap. Aap kya jaante hain ghar ke kaam ke baare mein. Agar ek din bhi noukar nahi hote to ghar do ho jaata hain. Aap ek din..." A voice is heard from behind,"Mama Papa, ladna band karo naa." Neetu and Sahil turn behind to see their daughter Pakhi standing there dressed in a pink top and blue jeans with an amused expression on her face. Neetu forgets her anger and says,"Are meri Rasmalai tum tayaar ho gayi. Kitni beautiful lag rahi ho." Shje smiles at her daughter. Pakhi says,"Mama.. Ap aur Papa kyun lad rahe hain ?" Neetu says," Kya bolun Rasmalai. Aaj kal na, yeh maids bohot sare chuttiyan le lete hain. Saara kaam mujhe hi karna pad raha hai." Sahil says," Neetu, agar kaam karegi to achaa hi hain."Pakhi goes to stand beside her father. Sahil says,"Tere motapa ko kam kar sakti ho." Neetu gets angry and attempts to run but slips and falls on the wet floor. She grabs the bucket for support but ther bucket overturns and falls on her lap. Both Sahil and Pakhi have a laugh. Sahil wishes Pakhi Best Of Luck. Pakhi goes to Neetu. Neetu keeps a sulky face. Pakhi asks,'Mama, aap mujhse naaraaz hain ?" Neetu says,"Tum tumhare papa ke saath mujhpar has rahin thi." Pakhi says,"Mama, agar aapi rasmalai nahi hasegi to aur kaun hasega ? Main aapki beti hoon.' Neetu smiles,"So to hai. All the Best Rasmalai." Pakhi gets up and walks towards the door when Sahi shouts,'Tum Kalpi se milne jaa rahi ho to mere taraf se uske liye be All The Best bol." Pakhi nodes her heard. Neetu shouts,"Are Rasmalai, meri taraf se bhi Kalpi ko All The Best bol." Pakhi waves bye and goes out of the apartment. Sahil turns towards Neetu and starts laughing at her state. Neetu whines,"Sahil mat hasiye naa." Sahil nods but he can't stop laughing. Neetu asks,'Are hasne ke bajai,aap mujhe help karenge to acha hai." Sahil helps her up.
AT THE CHAWL
Kalpi is praying to god, Kamla is cleaning the vessels and Vitthal is getting ready for work. A car comes infront of their house and Pakhi steps out of it. Kamla is happy to see her. Pakhi says,"Kamla Maa, kaise hai aap ?" Kamla says,"Mein theek hoon beta. Tum kaise ho ?" Pakhi says,"Mein bhi theek hoon. Vitthal uncle kaha hain ?" Kamla replies,"Wo andhar hai." Pakhi goes to Vitthal and gets his blessings. Vitthal says,"Tum aue Rajkumari hamesha ek saath raho.' Pakhi smiles and asks,'Vitthal uncle. Chikki kaha hain ?" Vitthal replies," Vo pray kar rahi hain b eta.' Pakhi says," Mein use milke aati hoon." Saying this, Pakhi goes to Kalpi's room. She sees Kalpi praying. She waits until Kalpi finishes her prayer. Kalpi finishjes her prayer and turns to find Pakhi sitting there. A smile hits her face and she exclaims,"Are Barbie Doll, kab aayi tu ?". Pakhi says," Chikki, main to 10 mins pehle aayi thi. Tumhari prayer finish hone tak wait kar rahi thi. Excited ho interview keliya ?" Kalpi says,"Bohot excited hoon aur nervous bhi." Pakhi says," Haan nervousness to hai. Hamesha first time nervousness hota hain." Pakhi looks at her watch and says," Chalo Chikki. Ab ham nikalte hain. Hame interview me der se nahi pahunchna. Chalo.' Kalpi and Pakhi walk down and get blessings from both Kamla and Vitthal and go to the car.

PRECAP : Both the girls are waiting for their names to be announced. There are two interviewers. Kalpi and Pakhi's names are called. Both the girls wish each other the Best Of Luck and go the opposite ways.
Edited by veeranu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!Amazing storyline dear...in fact its lovely😊
Neetu and sahils dialouges were so funny!😆
I loved kalpi's entry a lot 😳
Well i am eager for Raghavs entry❤️
Fantastic start!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear ... but PREM CHAUHAN not prem kapoor.. so he is not part of kapoor's family?

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