RagNa FF:Together Forever : Part 30 on Page 53 (March 8) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
just amazing deepu 👏 can't wait for part 11 plsss update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Omg...prem wanna kick him down..poor kalpi...so many behind her...Raghav is gonna become more possessive now for sure...and am loving Sammy...lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Nice update dear😳👏.I really loved jealous Raghav😳.And don't know wht to say about RagNA hug
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Raghav was so angry seeing Prem dance with Kalpi that I thought he will just go up to them and punch Prem lol
Omg!!! Some idiot was trying to hurt Kalpi
I like the way Kalpi hug Raghav and just cry her heart out
Raghav comforting Kalpi was awesome
Superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
it was a full dhamakedaar update dear. ... 👏 ⭐️
how dare you said it boring han? ? 😡 😒
aww raghav getting jealous of prem. ..and ragna 's hug ❤️ 😳 ...omg i loved it completely. .. ❤️
update soon dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Beautiful update and no boring at all 😃
Prem and Kalpi's dance on Ramleela song was like 😆
All were concerned about Kalpi specially Raghav. It was Prem who was misbehaving with Kalpi ? I am sure it was him only I hate him 😡
RagNa hug was lovely. 😳
Update soon and thanks for the pm dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 11-
Raghav ran to Kalpi's side just as her head was about to hit the floor.. He caught her in his arms and patted her cheeks,"Kalpi.. Kalpi... Aankhein kholo.. Kalpi aankhein kholo..." Pakhi said,"Sir, lagta hai kii ise hospital le jaana padega." Raghav carried Kalpi is his arms and put her in his car.. He said,"Sammy ! Tum Miss. Kapoor ko unke ghar tak chod do aur ghar chale jaao.. Mein Kalpi ke saath hoon." Pakhi said,"Lekin Sir, mein bhi aapke saath chalungi. Meri best friend hai vo." Raghav replied,"No Miss. Kapoor.. Raat bahut ho chuki hai.. Aur aapki tabeeyath abhi bhi theek nahi hai. Tho Sammy aapko chod dega." Sammy said,"Raghav is right Pakhi.. Your parents will be so very worried." I'll drop you home." Pakhi said,"Ok.. Par Sir.. Agar kuch hua tho please mujhe inform karna.." Raghav nodded and drove off with Kalpi.. Sammy and Pakhi went on their way.. On the way, Sammy noticed that Pakhi was very silent. He said,"Pakhi, don't worry.. Kalpi ko kuch nahi hoga. Vo jaldi theek ho jaayegi." Pakhi said,"Kaise chinta na karoon. Meri best friend hai vo.. Bachpan se hum dono best friends hain. Chinta tho hogi mujhe. Aur Kamla Maa ka kya hoga agar unhe pata chalega ki Kalpi behosh pad gayi ?" Sammy said,"Pakhi, just relax... Kalpi ko kuch nahi hoga. Raghav hain naa uske sath. Vo sambhaal lega." Pakhi was still not convinced. Sammy noticed this and squuezed her hand comfortingly. Pakhi looked at Sammy. He gave her a comforting smile. Pakhi smiled too and put her head on Samm'y shoulder 😳. She felt comforted.. Sammy smiled at this and drove to her house... Whn they reached her house, Sammy noticed that she was fast asleep. Sammy smiled at her cute, innocent face and the little frown that appeared on her head 😳. He did not want to wake her up but he had to. So he woke her up,"Pakhi.. Pakhi.. Tumhari ghar aa gayi.. Utho.." Pakhi got up slowly and looked around. She then realized that she had fallen asleep on Sammy's shoulders. She gave him an apologising smile but Sammy just waved it away and said,"Good Night Pakhi." Pakhi said,"Ghar tak aa gaye ho tho andhar bhi aao. Kuch nahi hoga.." Before Sammy could say a word, Pakhi said,"Mein naa nahi sunoongi." Sammy went along with Pakhi to her house.
IN KAPOOR'S HOUSE-
Neetu was waiting for Pakhi whereas Sahil was busy going through some files. He was annoyed by Neetu's marching so much that he said,"Neetu, thodi der baith jaao... Mujhe irritation ho raha hain." Neet said,"Sahil, aapko aapki beti ki fikar hai ya nahi ?" Sahil thought,"Phir shuru ho gayi.. Beta Sahil, bachke rehna". He sadi,"Neetu, vo meri bhi beti hain. Fikar hai mujhe uski." neetu said,"Mujhe tho aisa nahi lag raha hain. Ab tak vo ghar nahi aayi aur aap aaraam se apna kaam kar rahe hain." Sahil said,"Neetu, Sammy hai na uske saath. Vo Pakhi ka khayaal rakhega." neetu said,"O ji.. Aapko us ladke pe itna vishwaas nahi karna chaahiye." Sahil said,"Neetu, vo bahut acha ladka hain.. Aur mujhe uspar poora bharosa hai nahi tho mein apni beti ko kabhi nahi bejta." Neetu was about to speak sumthing whn Sammy and Pakhi enteres. Neetu saw them and hugged Pakhi.. She asked,"Pakhi mera bachaa.. Ab fever kaisa hai ? Tumne enjoy kiya ?" Pakhi just nodded. Sammy said,"Ok Pakhi.. I'll take leave, You take care." Pakhi nodded and said,"Tum bhi apna khayaal rakhna aur mujhe hospital se updates dete hii rehna." Sammy asked,"Tumhe kaise pata chala kii mein ghar nahi, hospital jaane waala hoon ?" Pakhi replied,"Mein tumhe ache se jaanti hoon. Tum Raghav se bohot pyaar karte ho aur apne bhai to takleef mein nahi dekh sakte ho. Tho obviously hospital hii jaaoge." Sammy smiled and waved good-bye and went. After he left, Neetu asked,"Bacha.. Kya hua Kalpi ko ?" Pakhi told what all happened and how she fell unconsious.. Sahil and Neetu were shocked. Sahil asked,"Kya ??? Kalpi behosh ho gayi ?" Pakhi nodded. Neetu asked,"Kya Kamla ko ye pata hai ?" Pakhi said,"No Mama.. Mujhe bataana hai. Mein abhi bataati hoon." Pakhi called to her number but it was comming out of order. Pakhi said,"Out of order aa raha hain." Neetu said,"Tum chinta mat karo.. Raghav hai naa uske saath.. He will take care." Pakhi felt a little comforted...
On the other hand, Raghav was driving the car.. he was feeling angry and anxious.. He looked at Kalpi who was laying flat.. If only she wasn't breathing, people would have thought she had died.. Raghav thought,"Kalpi.. No... Nothing will happen to you.." He said,"Kalpi.. Don't you dare leave.. I won't leave you if you leave.. I swear, I won't leave you." He reached the hospital and calle for the ward boys. They took her inside and admitted her in a room.. Raghav thought,"I should inform her parents about this. They must be so worried. But I don't have the number." Just then he realized that Kalpi's wallet was with him. He took out her phone and surfed through the contacts. He founr the contact AAYI and dialled it... A woman picked up the phone,"Hello.." Raghav replied,"Hello. Mein Raghav Singhania bol raha hoon, Kalpana Jadhav ki boss." The woman said,"Oh.. Sir.. Kya hua ?? Kya meri Kalpi ne kuch galat kii ?" Raghav said,'Nahi Nahi... Sorry. Mujhe aapki naam nahi pata." Kamla said,"Kamla Bai." Raghav said,"Aapki beti ne koi galathi nahi kii hai Kamla Bai.. Bas vo.." Kamla asked,"Kya hua ?" Raghav said,"Vo behosh padh gayi isliye use hospital mein admit kiya gaya hain." Kamla asked in a panicked voice,"Kya hua use ?? Bataaiye kya hua meri Kalpi ko?" Raghav said,"Kamla Bai, please roiye mat... Aap hospital aa jaayiye.."
Kamla said,"Theek hai Raghav Baba.. Mein abhi aati hoon." She cut the call and Raghav felt a feeling of warmth inside his heart,"Kalpi's mother called me Baba.. It felt so good and her voice is very soothing." Then the doctor came out. Raghav asked him,"Docote kya hua use.. Vo theek tho hai naa ?" The doctor asked,"Aap kaun hai ?? Family hai unka... Sorry Sir.. Hum sirf family members ko updates dete hain." The doctor was about to leave when Raghav said,"Mein uska husband hoon...😳" The doctoe turned and said,"Husband ?? Ok Ok.. Kuch formalities complete karna hai, isliye koi family member keliye dekh raha tha.. Ye form fill up keejiye.. Unki body se alcohol nikaalna pada." Raghav asked,"Alcohol ??" The doctor said,"Yes alcohol.. She's had too much alcohol. That's why she felt unconsious and not only that , she is also very stressed out.. So she will need to rest and please take good care of her." Raghav said,"Ok Doctor. I will take care of her. Urm.. Doctor.. Can I see her ?" The doctor said,"Of course go ahead..." Raghav went inside the room.. He saw Kalpi sleeping peacefully.. He breathing was even and she looked so peaceful.. He took in her features... She looked beautiful.. Infact she looked like an angel when she slept.. This reminded him of the story Sleeping Beauty.. He thought,"People say Sleeping Beauty was the most beautiful lady ... Wonder what those people will say when they see the beauty sleeping infront of me... " He noticed that her hair was disturbing her. It was falling on her face.. He also noticed a small frown appear on her face due to the disturbance. Raghav smiled at the cute frown 😳. He slowly took his hand to her face and moved those hairs back.. The frown disappeared from her face and she slept peacefully... Raghav was too mermerised at the way she slept..
EYES CLOSED WITH THICK EYE-LASHES COVERING.
BUTTON NOSE LIKE A CUTE BABY
ROSY AND SOFT LIPS LIKE THAT OF COTTON..
He slowly tiptoed out of the room...
END OF CHAPTER 11.. THT WAS A LONG WORK FOR ME... COMMENTS AND CRITICISM ACCEPTED... PLZ DO COMMENT...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
i am speechless...you described all the emtions in detail. beautiful update👏👏 update soon and yipee i am the first one
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
awesome dear. Everything in this update left me speechless.
Edited by Wj.mad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Update...I could actually imagine Raghav's brooding face all the while and the last lines are indeed beautiful 👏

Please continue soon😊

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