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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
wow virika baby n jeevika upset with viren
please continue soon n pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
very nice update... continue it soon, other side of virika
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
PART 7

after the engagement finish
everybody is talking with guests

jeevika was standing alone and feeling literaly tired

then sameer come

sameer- jeevika r u al right

jeevika - ha sameer me thik hoo

sameer - kuch khaya nai na me tumhare liye kuch khane ke liye lata hoo

jeevika stand alone just then manvi try to come to talk to jeevika

bt jeevika try to ignore him

manvi- di plz mujhse bat karo

jeevika - manvi plz yaha se chali jao log dekh rahe haime koi tamasha nai chahti



sameer come
sameer - jeevika tum chalo yaha se khana kho medicine bhi leni hai chalo

engagement is finished and eveybody is bye to evryone

then family members look at jeevika to talk to him bt jeevika try to avoid him and move away bt just then beeji and dadaji stops him

beeji - beta mujhe maff kar de na jane me kya 2 keh gai maf kar de beta

jeevika- mafi kis bat ki beeji apne thik hi to kaha me bilkul apni maa par gai hoo mene apko kisi se nazar milane ke layak nai choda
beeji sorry to mujhe kehna chaiye
i m sorry

beeji- jeevika!!


sb- ha jeevika i m sory i dont know what to say ye sab hamari galat fami ki waah se hua hai

dadaji - beta plz maf kar do ar sab bhool jao hamre ghar kusiya ane wali hai
manvi - ha di ma mosi banne wali hu

jevika remains keep queit for some time bt then broke silence

bas karo plz in sad tone

plz bas karo pehle jab mene ap sab se kaha ki koi mere bat suno tab kisi ne nai suna lekin ab jab ye pata chala ki ap log kyu aye ho apko mujhse jyada mere bache ki chinta hai

par ap chinta mat kijiye me apne bache ka dhyan rakh sakti hoo
samjhe plz mujhe akela chod do

viren - jeevika dekho meri baat suno jeevika hame hamari galiti ka pachtawa hai plz we r really sorry

jeevika was feeling dizing ang chkar kha ke behosh ho jati hai

and every body tensed viren piuck up jeevika and takes her to their room


guys kal se school khul rahe he so mey next update will be after wednesday plz comment
hpe u like it



there is much more in next update



try to upload next precap


Edited by tacker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Great update. I luv ths jeevika. please do continue this and ure other story sooon please.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
amazing update...loved it...please do continue...:)next time please pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
wow loving jeevika
awesome update
pm me next part please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
PM me pls...
I love this story:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Love this side of Jeevika. Please continue this soon. Can't wait to know what will happen next. 😃
PS. please can you also continue with your Os viren's birthday?! 😳

Tina

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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Really Luved It.. It's Mindblowing...
Do continue...



-MeHaK-
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

its really nice,waiting to see how will viren manoify jeevika continue soon

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