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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys i thought of writng an os in which virika got seperated becoz of some reason and there is one more character viren and virat sister seema.




virika got seperate becoz of seema .Seema love someone bt family was against him so seema will go against family and ran away and every one blame jeevika bt jeevika was not involved in this .Everyone will come to know about seema then jeevika come ,she does not know what was going on .she come from shopping becoz tommorow is virman engagement

jeevika- kya hua ap log itne pareshan kyu hai sab thika to hai na

Swaminibua- jeevika jyada bholi banne ki kosish amt karo kya tum nai janti

jeevika- nai buaji sach

guys this missunderstanding occur becoz of swamini she saw seema and jeevika talking to each other jeevika was explaining seema bt swamini thaut she was with her and helping him

viren-mujhe tum se ye umeed nai thi plz yaha se chali jao

jeevika -par ap meri baat to suniye she went to everybody bt no one listen him .everybody goes to their room .

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PART 2

jeevika cry and break down and went out angd goes to the river[ where viren take her ] she cry becoz no body is listening her

and remember her beautiful moment

then when she was reached the home she saw a boy and the boy is jeeman brother SAMEER she goes and hug him and break down in front of him and tell him everything

jeevika - sameer meri koi galti nai hai

sameer- i trust u jeevika plz dont cry u know na i will not see you like that plz stop crying

after telling this jeevika feeling weak she feel like vomit and goes to room and then she think that she might be pregnent and take a pregnency kit and check it and was shoked by result

part 2

that she is pregnent she is very happy and come out of her room and tell sameer and then decided to tell everybody bt when she come she saw chaudhry family everyone is very upset
jeevika- beeji woh
beeji slap jeevika which everyone shocked
beeji- jeevika aj tumne mera sir saram se neeche kar diya ye sabit kar diya ki tum apni ma ki beti hoo mujhe tumhe apni poti kehti hue saram ati hai jeevika will fell onto floor and sameer come and stand him up then sameer in anger said
sameer- ap log aisa kaise kar salte hai kya apko pata hai ki jeevika just then jeevika stoped him
jeevika goes to manvi bt she even does not suport him and said
manvi - di apke wajah se sab pareshan hai apke wajah se meri sadhi ki kushiyo me matam man gaya kya apse meri kushiya dekhi nai gai me janti hu apko pehle se hi meri ar virat ki jodi pasand nai thi par ap

after hearing this she could nt stand and sit on floor and eveybody goes to their room

part 3


sameer jeevika ko kamre me lekar jata hai n take care of her .

jeevika sleep and subah jab uthti hai to

jeevika- are mujhe to bahut der ho gai n then remember what had happened and star crying

sameer come and said jeevika plz mat ro jin logo ko tujh par viswas nai hai to un ke liye kyu ro rai hai

just then virat come who know the truth

virat- nahi bhabhi muhjhe sab pata hai plz me sab ki taraf se apse mafi magta hu chalo hum sab ko jake bata dete hai

jeevika hug virat and said naihi virat koi nahi manegaa

par mujhe kushiu hai ki tum mere sath ho '

thankyou

virat - bhabhi me ap dono ke sath hu

jeevika- DONO!

virat - ha bhabhi ap aur mera bhatija

jeevika- tumhe kaise pata chala

virat -wo doctor ka phone aya tha ki aj sahm ap ki appointment hai

jeevika - oh par virat woh...

virat cut him and said bhabhi hum ye bat kisi ko nai bataenge

jeevika - thankyou virat

bhabhi me abhi ata hu

sameer - jeevika tum taiyar ho jao me abhi ata hu

jeevika after geeting ready goes outside and try to help becoz today is engagement

jeevika come

jeevika - me kuch madad karu

SB- tum bas in sab se dur hi raho wahi bahut badi madad hogi

jeevika - plz buaji ap meri bat to suniye

viren who was standing in corner goes to him and said virenji kya apko bhi mujh par viswas nai hai

viren - jeevika tumne suna nai buaji ne kya kaha

jao yaha se

jeevika- virenji woh me me i m pre

viren could not hear this and leave him alone

PART 4

jeevika fell very lonely becoz no body is talking him and not even try to helped him and then she decided to go to manu

jevika see manu loking beautiful it is the day which jeevika was waiting becoz she was like her mother

jv- manu

manvi- plz ap yaha mat ana agar ap meri khushi chhti ho to plz chali jao yaha se jo kiya wo kam tha kya ki ap fir se mujhe taklif dene aa gai plz leave

after hearing this jeevika goes to their room and lie on bed and start crying and sameer see and tell jeevika plz mat ro ye tumhare liye thik nai hai me hoo na
sameer- hum nai jayenge agar koi nai chahta to nai jayenge
jeevika- magar log to bate banaenge na hame jana chaiye sameer apne parivar ke liye ye ghar ki bat hai ghar me hi rehni chaiye
sameer anso pahuchta hai ok abhi time hai jab tak tum kuch kha lo ok tabhi jayenge
jeevika- ok

on other side everybody is ready for function and come in hall and then saw seema which leaves everybody in shock
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant start please pleae continue pm me when you do thanks
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Amazing! please please continue soon 😃

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EEE...Virika os, ss, ffs are always welcome for me🤣
Lovinggg it...YEH DIL MAANGE MORE so Continue pleeejjj :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi!
Please PM me when you update next, this OS is great! Waiting for viren to realise his BIG mistake..
Do update soon and do PM!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update! Please do continue soon again! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow seema is back! 😲 Please continue.😃

Tina

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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue this soon! it's amazing!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!
I just read the 4 parts.
They are amazing!!!!!
Plz Plz Plz PM me if possible.
Update soon.

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Pls continue and PM me when written

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