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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

very very very nice
loved it
plz update soon and PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
PART 7

VIREN- virat kya kaha tumne

virat - wahi bhai jo apne suna bhai bhabhi pregnent hai wo ma banne wali hai

viren -sach me bahut kush hu virat

just then virat cut off him

kyu bhai ap kyu kush hai apne to bhabhi ki bat bhi nai suni unko jis

waqt apki sabse jyada jarurat thi tab to apne unka sath nai diya .bhai

kya apne kabhi socha hai ki bhai jine is waqt kush rehna chahiye tha

jis waqt unhe apki jarut thi us waqt apne unka sath chod diya kya

beeti hogi unpar

virat leave the room

viren cries and then said mujhe jeevika se bat karni hogi engagement ke bad

in evening rituals begins , everyone is feeling guilty

everyone is there except jeevika

sb- bauji agar kisi ne jeevika ke bare me pucha to'

bauji- me bhi yahi soch raha hu'

just then MR mehra with his wife come they are very close frnd and buissnes paartner

mrs mehra- namastey
virman take blessing and she gave ashirwad

mrs mehra - viren where is ur wife usse nai milwaoge

viren - wo
buaji - ati hi hogi

mrs mehra after some time again ask kaha reh gai jeevika iitna bhi kya imp kam hai

every body quites then jeevika at back said namastey

jeevika- sory thodi late ho gai actually kam me busy thi

mrs mehra - namastey beta kush raho kaisi ho

jeevika - me thik hoo'

jeeviaka and mrs mehra and familiy talking and every body is happy to see jeevika
just then seema come and said namastey aunty

jeevika is in sock

then sameer come and see jeevika with vadhera family goes there and said jeevika tum yaha

jeevika - sameer inse milo mrs mehra

and mrs mehra he is my brother

sameer- me ata hu

mrs mehra leaves

sb and other member wants to thank jeevika for comming

sb- jeevika thanks ane ke liye and...

just then jeevika leaves

jeevika in all party try to ignore all bt viren and manu tries to approach jeevika

by making bahanas
engagement starts

jeevika tum piche kyu ho age jao

a lady said
jeevika - jee

jeevika goes and stand near virat

and manvi feel so sad

mrs mehra said jeevika apni behen ke pas kari kyu nai hui

jeevika- anty me to apne devar ki side hu kyu virat

viret - ji bhabhi

manvi- par di ap

jeeviak- chalo virat ring pehnao meri DEVRANIJI KO

manvi thinks di mere sath aisa kyu kar rai ho

viren who was standind near sb goes near jeevika and put her hand on it and tries to talk bt jeevika is ignoring him

viren - jeevika ek bar to bat suno

jeevia- viren ji plz chodiye
then jeevika feel dizy

viren - jeevika tumne kuch khaya aisi halat me tumhara bhuka rehna thik nai hai

jeevika- oh tabhi ap mafi mange aye hai ap apni patni se nai apne bache ki ma se mafi mangne aye hai

after saying this

jeevika age chali jati jhai


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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
nice...thnx 4 d pm...
Edited by shine123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24



very nice update
loved it so muc
plz update oon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
nice update:):)
Pls PM me if u cont..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Awesome update :) :) Loved it to the maximum.. cont sooon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
continuee soon and plz pm me! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome update cant wait for next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
hay nidhi i just luv ur stories and ive updated my story just 4 u! plx update virens birthday as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
THANX SARA for updatng ur story is amazing plz update next part i wiill update both stories today

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