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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

hello please update soon

waiting for next part

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shine123

@shine123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

pls continue soon...n pm me if possible...

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nidhi

@tacker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

NEXT PART

Viren takes jeevika to her room

sameer called doctor

doctor come and check jeevika

viren- is everything is all right doctor .meri wife ar bacha thik to hai na

sameer saw viren angrily😡

doctor - kya bat hai kuch hua tha kya jeevika ke sath kahi giri thi wo i mean dejhiye ye isla 1 month hai to isme bahut dhyan rakhna padta hai lekin mujhe kagta hai ye bahut diression me rehti hai apna dhyan nai rakti kuch khati nai hai

viren - doctor ap kehna kya chate hai sab theek to hai na

doctor - wo jeevika ka misscarage ho gaya hai

everyone shocked😲

viren - lekin kaise

doctor - dekhiye pehle ke 3 mahine bahut dhyan rakna padta hai lekin inhone apna dhyan hi nai rakha

beeji- jarur ya tab hua hoga jb mene jeevika ko thapad mara ar wo gir gai

doctor - sayad lekin dont wory sab thek ho jayega wo dubara ma ban sakti hai

doctor leave

viren cry and beeji blame herself for this

sameer- ap log jao yaha se

mnvi- plz bhai mujhe di ke pas rehne do

jeevika opened her eyes

jeevika -semeer sab thek to hai na

sameer - cry and said

jeevika - kya hua sameer mera bacha to thek hai

sameer - jeevika wo tumhara

jeevika-saw everybody is cried and said dekho mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai bolo na

sameer -tumhara miscarrage ho gaya hai

jeevika keep silence 4 some time and then said viren ji ap bataiye hamaare bache ko kuch ani hua na

she stand and ask viren bataiye na

viren- jeevika ye sch hai

jeevika gir jati hai n rone lagti hai

viren- sambholo jeevika

jeevika - mera bacha 😭 viren mujhe mera bacha chaiye

sameer - jeevika sambhalo plz

jeevika - mujhe kuch nai pata mujhe mera bacha chaiye😭

sory 4 delay plz tell how was this

i hoped u like it

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shine123

@shine123

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

sad...miscarriage...but nice...pls pm me wen u update if possible...

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

its really sad that jeevika had a miscarriage (can't this happen that doctor was wrong 😊, i don't like to c virika sad 😭)

hope she gets pregnant soon

loved it

update soon

can't wait for next part

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navyan07

@navyan07

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Gr8 update also sad.

Hope everything's fyn.

BTW I read your FF earlier, even commented once but after that I hardly got time online so Igot to read many parts together.

PLZ update soon

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girl97

@girl97

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

very nice update

liked it very mcuh

update soon

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SJ6...

@SJ6...

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

plz pm me u never do and omg how sad plz update quick x

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-Tinu-

@-Tinu-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Feel Really bad for Jeevika! I hope everyone pays for behaving badly with her. Nice update. Can't wait to know what happens next. Please do update soon. Sorry for the late comment.

Tina