Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 44

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update Zoya! Absolutely loved it. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awesome update Zoya! Absolutely loved it. ❤️

Mrina!!!!!
🤗
It's so so good to see you here!!!!
I'm glad, thank you so much hon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unres

Zo 🤗
Iztiraar ka hume beyhad intezar tha and it was worth the wait
Dear Diary ❤️

He has still not forgiven Sumo?

It may take some time but he eventually will ...wishful thinking 😳

Pur-sukoon the ruhaniyaat ke noor mai iss qadar,
Saa.at-e-izteraar ki aahat bhi na hui.



Bro you are another level of awesomeness 👏
Nimmo in MM
Karamjali kalmuhi kulta aa gyi tu

Kamini i love you ❤️ . Tussi Chha gye
Ramu ne nimmo ki band bajayi



Divorce? After all she did she has the nerve to ask for the divorce . Not once she cared about her son...useless mother
Eric and Shravan ❤️ #FriendshipGoals
His parents are getting a divorce ? That's terrible. No child should go through such pain.
Please please make his father alright . I would never want him to burn himself in guilt.
Mera Eric aise sad acha nahi lagta...
Abhi tu aur jhatke denewali? 😲 ...mera masoom dil 💔
Mindblowing seetimaar update 🤪
Loved it and love you ❤️
Can't wait for nimmo's narakpravesh 😆
Take care !!
Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Jisne rokey they kabhi padhtey wo andherey saaye,,
Us Dil -e -pur - iztiraar ko ujaala Mil jaaye !!
ShraRic!!

I pulled of a Sumo on him...
wooo that was a bouncer!!
Expect the unexpected! ! Good stories surprise the reader!

Difference between forgiving and forgetting! ! It's totally human if you haven't! !
There isn't any shift +del option..!! Things do stay in the recycle bin..!!
It's only over a period of time you empty the trash bin! ! So will He !! System clean up !!

Beautiful beautiful couplet! !👏

Softies !!😳

Three cheers for Kamini! !🥳

Nirmala returns! ! Entry to poori solid thi...par,,..
Mommy dearest was boasting about the third party interest she had shown in her son!! How trivial !!
Waqt ki itni killat! !
It wasn't a mother but Mrs. Malhotra who had returned... hissab kitaab barabar karne! !
Hate to say this but good riddance! !

She had a lot to retrospect on... will she !?!

Poor Ric !! No one deserves such misery and guilt! !

Missed Am! 😉

I think this experience will stop Shravan from reacting in the heat of the moment,,if such incident happens in future ... everything happens for a reason they say! !

Dear diary is forever special !!
Update Wonderful as ever! !


Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya Di🤗
Kaise ho aap??
As always...Amazingly written...👏👏
Diary entry aachi thi..I liked it👍🏼

Ram-Nimmo convo...
I am a lill' confused about this...
yaha saara blame nimmo pe jaa raha hai...Ramu kaka is right...
Bhai itna kya busy thi woh ke she didn't even call once??!!😲
Dusre ke bete ko bada karne mey lagi thi..aapne bete ki koi khabar nahi😭
Their convo was nice...I support Ram here...

Eric's family😭😭Well this was unexpected...I thought it would be sumthin else...
But nice sense of urs ha...Now Shravan can relate to Eric😃

ShraMan convo was ❤️
Its mah fav part😳

All in all amazing one..!!!⭐️⭐️
ANU😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Exemplary writing Zoya👏
Ramnath and Nirmala's conversation was really good and it seems Nirmala is the only person to be blamed for the entire mess..
But you have given your reasoning for that...
And the foot note part about not saying anything when one is angry,I sure agree with you...
It's a great thing everyone has to follow.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Here I am Zoya with my Ress😛
Cant promise when I'll be able to unress.
Bas exams khatam ho jaaye n I'll be there straight!!
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Unres
Zealous si Zoya🤗
Finally am here!!

Iztiraar~ Restlessness ❤️
There was restlessness in this upii...Shravan, Ramnath, Nirmala, Eric!!
Every character was in a state of restlessness!!
Perfect⭐️

Sharvan and his Diary
One of my fav. part...always.

You should slow down if the world around you turns faster than you can handle...What a beautiful thought!!
A person with experience and pateince can live a life with it.

Shravan had forgiven Sumo but he cant forget!!
Soo damn loved it Zoya...❤️
This is human nature..!!
Isnt it what happens with us all??
We can forgive but cant forget easily...its not that easy.
That memory remains somewhere deep down even we are unaware of it sometimes...You just need some time to forget and move on without any hurt.

When it came to people that were important, Shravan trusted no one other than himself...I Love this Shravan n I love you Zoya.🤗

Pur-sukoon the ruhaniyaat ke noor mai iss qadar

Saa.at-e-izteraar ki aahat bhi na hui...Loveddd it zoya!

You should write shayari more often...Its just love!!


Eric and Shravan...The bond between them is just pure Love!!

A friend in need is a friend indeed...Thats their friendship!!

A friendship soo rare.


Ramnath-Nirmala scenario was a much needed one.

Beautiful and much more reasonable...Loved it buddy!!

You gave a bit closure where there was confusion and questions without their answers in the show...we got those answers here.

Kamini...Bang on!!

Kabhi khatti kabhi meethi...Tedhi hai par humaari hai😆


N this Nimmo Mata...Are you really a mother??

Whatever Ramnath said is logical...Saw a glimpse of a Lawyer Ramnath Malhotra that he was!!


Divorce...The nerve of Woman!!

She still have guts to ask for divorce even after the reality check by Ramnath, even after knowing everything that her gem of a son had suffered...This is the limit!!

She is hopeless!!


N Alimony...Ramnath is right...she is still thinking all about money.

All she had thought or cared about was Money and her so called self Respect.

Nothing n absolutely Nothing can overpower your love and care for your child...not even your self respect!!

But here we have Nirmala Ahuja as a mother...so anything can be expected!!


Soo loved the care Shravan had for Eric.Such a beautiful relation these two shares.

A friend like Shravan and Eric is a bliss and you are a blessed soul if you have one!!


Sumo -Shravan chat was soo good. Sumo's care for Eric and Shravan is too good. This Sumo...she was the real Sumo...the innocent soul.

Loved how Shravan shared his innermost feelings with her.


Eric...I knew it was much more serious than it seems.

Eric isnt one who is as carefree and jovial as he seems from outside.

He is a character with layers...It isnt easy to understand him...inside out.

Such people who laughs and lives carefree are the ones who are the ones with unstable lives...they are deep souls and they can be the best friends you want coz they have an understanding that not everyone have.

Everyone have problems and issues in their lives... n Everyone have their own way to express themselves.

Some hides their sorrows behind their indifferent behavior , some with their anger, some with spending time alone and remain aloof all the time but very few ones have the guts to put a smile on their faces and spread happiness around...Eric is one such soul.

The person who smiles and laughs all the time, joking around are hiding their tears behind the facade of it.


Whatever happened with Eric...it was bound to happen.

What he did wasn't his fault but a result of his anger that crossed its limit...Ofcourse it is not easy to see you father raising his hand on your mother specially when he was at fault that too this kind of.

But it was bound to happen n it happened.

It wasnt Eric's fault.


Father in coma...Damn!! Its terrible.

But atleast there is a hope.

Eric is fighting the worst kind of feeling in this whole World...Guilt.

Helplessness and Guilt are the worst of all the feelings for any individual.

You can live hating anyone, you can live with anger within you for someone but...How to live when you starts hating your own self, when you are angry at yourself.

I hope his Father recovers.

Shravan...this soul is going to get hurt again...that too coz of his dear ones.

But this time we have Zoya as a writer and therefore he has his Sumo n Eric with him...so am relaxed and exited at the same time.


This was one hell of a beautiful upii Zoya👏

Loved and enjoyed reading it!!


Cont soon buddy.

Will Wait eagerly😳


Love ya 🤗

Nikka sa Nik


P.S. I always love reading your notes...before and after upii.

They are notes with beautiful learning and msg within them.

Keep them coming bro!!


P.P.S. Tried keeping it short.

Though don't know how long it is😛

Koi na...Aapko aadat hai na😆

Achi aadtaein chodni nahi chahiye😉







Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres😛
This was brilliant.
Shravan's diary entry ❤️
Poor boy is confused. He obviously forgave her but u can't just forget something like that.
My heart went out for Eric. Guilt is very dangerous. It's just impossible to live with it.
Pri k baare mein soch aur usko jaldi se thk kr de pls.
Ramu- Nirmala convo 😡
I hate both of them equally so I don't buy any of their reasons. Although in this update it looked more like nimmo's faults weighed more, I hate them both. Can't get what I have seen on the show out.
Kammo rocks. I loved her. Bullseye pe bullseye.
Eric- Shravan are darlings. #Friendshipgoals
A massive storm coming Shravan's way I guess. And that too when he has just gathered himself. Too cruel u r Zoyi.

Izteraar ❤️
How well u defined it Zoyi. The bit u wrote before the chapter and in the middle was WOW!!!! Every time I read an update of urs, it give me something to think about and that's the best part of all ur stories. This was perfect. I just can't put in words how much I loved it. Though it had less ShraMan moments, I loved loved it.

Love ya 🤗
Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago

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