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Posted: 8 years ago
What do you do when you feel that you have read and analysed almost all angles of a Ramnath Nimmo confrontation and a then you are snowballed into an absolutely refreshing take like this on it?...You just realise that stalwarts like you are called stalwarts for a reason ..What an absolute gem is this piece Zoya👏

You know when he asked her about the Delhi part, how would she reach the venue without an address, I whistled. If words could slap, Nimmo would have been on the floor writhing I swear.

The couplet was love Zoya!!

Now I come to the point where you have so beautifully shown that a human being might have a magnanimous heart to forgive those who hurt him, but the merciless brain is scientific enough to record each such instance and then audaciously replay them verbatim when another instance of equal similitude hits him.

The dear diary took my heart Zoya..I swear again😃

Eric's pain was tangentially different from what I assumed, but painful nonetheless. If only he knew that the mountain that he is carrying, he was only supposed to climb it. I so want him to bounce with fervour for I love his presence around Shravan.

Shravan is oblivious to the storm that's going to hit his life, while he moves ahead uncalculating to face the unknown fate. .this premise leaves me worried, more heartbreak round the corner it seems😕

Till then. .I applaud this beauty that you have served!! Fantastic it is Zoya!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Res...

Eric in love with Amanda is it?😃

You didn't unres on maraasim
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya Apii 🤗
This update is just outstanding
Diary entry it's awesome no doubt
I love the way you write it's truely amazing
So coming on update
Diary entry part Shravan was unknowingly thinking about Sumo and relating it
When someone very close to our heart hurt us it remains in our heart for long or maybe forever
Ram-Nirmala they both are at fault less or more and again they are ruining sharvan with divorce thing
Poor Shravan he isn't aware about it
I liked friendship bond Shravan and Eric share I think they will support each other in future .
I am happy that shraman realtions is getting better
Overall it is Fab 👏
Loved it ❤️

Lots of Love *jhappis*
Zainab
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its human nature to keep finding solace in relations. To find relations worthy of that trust is an individual's luck. Shravan got Eric when he needed someone like that. But Shravan is a survivor he created an inhuman confidante as well. He is as friendly with her as he is currently with Sumo though. Loved the diary part. That one stroke in this story of yours made me start calling you Jahanpanah.😊 why wouldnt he write.
Can he forget what she did - he got his friend back, he got her apology. Was it his closure? Is anyone ever able to get a closure without returning the jibe, without lashing back? Such people are either saintly or indifferent. Shravan is neither. Maybe Sumo will have to pull a new one which will make him forget.

Ramnath Nimmo 👏 we all hate her and I love your perspective. And Ramnath is a lawyer par excellence for the use of zoya's words. 😃

The parallel drawn with Erics situation... Will Shravan learn from it though? I am waiting to read.

This is Shravans story. And I love it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifully penned...loved the diary entries... And your shayari 👏👏 Ram nimmo showdown was superb.
Lets see what storm is in store of shravan.
Pls write soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...it's amazing update...
Happy tat the diary is back...
Loveddd ur shayari...
Eric poor boy...
Yes... Ramnath and Nirmala I dnt like them at all...
Sometimes I wonder they really love Shravan????
Poor shravan he is yet to receive an another heart break...
Hope sumo ll be there for him...
Take care.,..
Update soon.,..
❤️
LavSriya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey!
First of all, I love Eric.
I don't know why, but the guy makes me remember Ron from Harry Potter. 😕
Anyway, Eric's story's really heartbreaking.
There's nothing more upsetting that seeing your parents in such a mess,
the affair; the abuse; the accident and his guilt!
Phew... that's a lot and the guy is broken. 😭
But thankfully, Shravan's with him. 😊

And I loved it more where Shravan was writing in his diary about
forgiving Sumo but nor forgetting everything.👏
That's a true fact. Makes sense and makes the story more realistic.

I can't tell you Zoya how glad I'm that
Ram the Ravan and Nirma the detergent are getting divorced. 🥳
Their personalities and values and morals are so very different that at this stage
it will only create an even bigger mess if they try to live under one roof. 🤢
I'll wait and see what you've planned to write for their fate. 👍🏼

Also, it's a great thing that Shravan shares his troubles and thoughts
with Sumo at the end of the day.
Already turning out to be quite the life partners... eh... ☺️
Looking forward to more progress on their friendship and
more eagerly looking forward to with a binocular to see the kick start of
their romance.

Updt soon.

Lots of love,❤️
Lara.






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Posted: 8 years ago
Well written dr...loved it...hope Shravan have the strength to cope up with their parents divorce news.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

You didn't unres on maraasim


Now I did😳..unressed on page 51, with discomfiture at that😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356


Now I did😳..unressed on page 51, with discomfiture at that😊

I'll be right there!
🤗

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