Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

lovely TS...plz update soon 😊

Thank you!
Will do...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

It's amazing.. Their moment is beautifully described
Naina song complemented really well along with the flashbacks
Thank you so much!
Thanks for the PM
You're most welcome!
Waiting for next update to see unstoppable real Shravan Malhotra
Hehe... hold your breaths and hearts😉

@Bold Thanks a ton!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Zoya di... 🤗

Anu😛
Truly awesome yaar...👏
Flashbacks were cute... ❤️
Thank you :)
Sumo ne Shravu ko dono taariko se jaladiya.. .. 😉Kiss was needed... Emotions bina Bole express Ho gaye... 😆
Satyavachan😆
Yaar.. Ye ramukaka ke vajah se.. 😡
Wonderful TS...
Thanks!
Plz Update soonish..
Yes absolutely!
Thanks for the pm..
Anytime hon!
Love,
ANU 😳

@Bold Shukriyaa!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Zoya Di so this is Wat you were talking about.

Yes Arpita, this is it...
Amazing...year khatam Ho gaya lekin aapne mujhe Yeh feel karwaana band nhin kiya ki u need to have a better vocabulary to comment on your post.
Hahaha that's really cute...
Needless to say that the song part was amazing. My recent favourite song jo hai😉
Mera bhi!
Humaare lawyer sahab ka hormone locha Ho gaya😳 and sumos ministration didn't help either😆
I nearly cracked up when shravan said thank god chaaku to tum normally use nahi karti. ... He may have been thinking ki agar aisa hota to mera workload kitna badh jata kyunki verma ke paas to main attempt to murder ka case lekar Jane nahi deta🤣
ROFL!
So sumo will be confronted by him and also she will see the lawyer side of him.
Oh yeh!
Do on me next time main buddy request bhej diya
Done deal!
Update jaldi
Sure thing!
Love
Arpita

@Bold thank you so much Arpita😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: deltadawn

oww how I wish we got to see the Real Shravan Mahotra in the show 😳

awesome update.
Thank you!!!!
waiting for part 2 eagerly. Sumos bag reminde dme of Phoebe Buffay's bag 🤣
Oh damn 🤣 LMAO!

@Bold thank you ji!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Zoya! 🤗 Kitne dino baad tera likha hua padh rahi hun yaar! (Not your fault, main hi late lateef hun 😛 Tu toh khoob likhti hai re)And Zoyaland has held me within its strong clutches!
Aye hayee! Hum tum, ek kamre mein, ermm sorry lift mein band hon aur light chali jaye! 😳 Sumo was hell bent on making shravan blind! 🤣 Becahra vaise hi pyaar mein andha hai! 😛 😉 That entire section was hilarious! Chaaku bhi tha sumo ke paas toh.
And all those childhood memories. I love moti and chashmish a lot! They are so cute! 😳
Oh my, there closeness.☺️ And that kiss hayee! And shravan ko phir akela chod diya. 😛 😆
Loved this soo much! Keep writing meri jaan!

Love
Yours late lateef 😆 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Like always it's beautiful

Thank you so much!
Loved it for reviving old memories
Loved it for its progress from subtle romance to passionate desire
Loved it for its dialogues
I'm glad bro😛
"Toh kyun nahi kaha? Haath rakh kar keh dete ke mai hoon, toh yeh nahi hota na.."😳


"Oh really I did nothing other than breathing and you pepper sprayed me, had I done something tum toh tase hi kar deti 😆


"Taser hai hi nahi mere paas..."😆😆


"Oh bach gaya mai!"🥱


"But chaku hai!".🤣

"Haan toh tumne spray kia bhi toh aaise ke aag hi lag jaye.."☺️

Loved it because it'll have more updates
Hahaha that's cute!
Please pm me
Surely will...!
Swarnima

@Bold Thank you so much Swarnima!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

Zoya thanks for the pm yar... when i found ur pm i was like yay treat h ye to :-p ... n vo v TS ..whoaa ;)
Hehehe you're welcome Anju!
about the topic you chose, thanks a lot for that dear..
Any time ya...
i had hated most of the parts during preekar marriage ...

n the dragging thing, it took my patience ...hated it the most ..

the feel, the vibes that the show used to give was lost somewhere that time ... :( now enough of my philosophy ... 😃

coming to chapter...you nailed it again dear..the beginning was hilarious ...rofl...
Thank you so much!
how sumo got scared n paper sprayed shravu...acha hua banda qutub minar tha warna must have lost his eyes ...lol...
Absolutely!
n how he yelled at sumo ...n sumo in defence btana chahiye the tm ho ...n he in defence taser mar deti ...n her reply taser ni chaku...hilarious ...

n then concern..wo to birth right h dono ka.. i knew it he'd definitely bring the "ignorance topic" n she would deny talking about it... n yahi hua..
Hai hi aaisi woh...
yar i just hated it when sumo denied talking about that n he just jerked n backed off ...yar obvio koi v krega..

the flashbacks were so beautiful 😊

*pehla chocolate wala reminded me of epi 33 ya 34 ..

That's exactly where it was from😆
*n sports car kaise confidently he said tumhe baithaunga n tmhi hogi meri gf... that was so lovely..
In his thoughts he was always confident na😛
*n then disney n harry potter things were cute..

coming out of flashbacks, the pain n hurt was visible in their eyes :(

how she pleaded n lastly he gave up akhir lady love h mana kaise karta :-p n yar if they would come this close kiss to hona hi tha :-p ...
Lol...

omg!! the kiss was wooow...how passionate it was n then yar elevator thode or time k bad thik ni ho skta tha.. beda garg kr dia romance ka :(
Sowwiii...
both were in watchable condition... lips swollen, hair messed up... lol...

n thanks god he too came out of trance n held her hand warna sochte rhta n madam bolt k speed se chali gai hoti :-p

True that!
yar kaise she denied it was nothing...mistake like really?? n banda hyper ho gaya...acha hua he spoke out n he did her mimickery ...

lol ...though it was a serious situation , i just imagined ki kaise sumo ki mimickery kia hoga ;) n finally she left ...
Arey woh bola khud jaise hi, bas hand gestures kia uske copy...
n acha hua he decided to find out.. really yar he's a lawyer afterall ...

show m to i used to curse his character ki banda lawyer h use ur lawyer mind ...but they just spoiled his character n everything... leave it now..

loved the chapter..
Glad :D
waiting for next one anxiously ki how he will use his james bond n lawyer mind to find out the reason behind her sudden ignorance...
Yo!
update soon pls zoya ...:)
Absolutely!
love ya... 😊

@Bold Thank you so very much Anju!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

last but not the least the song naina was man I just love it... it just touches heart..

forgot to mention before ..but couldn't stop myself from mentioning it ...

Aww Thank you Anju!
My favourite too!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing start
cannot wait
continue soon

Thank you so much!
Will do :D

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