Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Superb!!!! Wav, what a brilliant writer you are👏Waiting for the next update!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sapphire3

RES
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UNRES
Zo>:D<]

Prii🤗
It's your first update in 2017 🥳
I actually didn't notice that😆
Resh I don't know about you but tujhe mile gift se mai bahut khush hoon 😳
Hahahaha...
Arey ! Hum tum ek lift me band ho aur light chali jaye 😆
Ishhh!! Pepper Spray
I know right🤣
How did she know the person's gonna harm her ?
She didn't😆
She must be a big fan of crime petrol and savdhaan India 😆
Extra savdhaani me shravan Ka kaam lga diya🤣
Bro height saved his ass, no sorry eyes🤣
Ye lo special golden eyes for Sumo . Andhere me bhi dikhega 🤣


Oh shit😆 This is from Amar Akbar Anthony right🤣 This dukhyari ma was lit bro!
Taser, chaku😆 hand grenade , machine gun bhi rakh leti 😆
Naam badalna padta, aatanki Sumo😎
Their conversation was damn hilarious 🤣
They had so much potential 😆
The flashbacks and the lyrics ❤️ . I'm in love with this song ❤️
I'm in love with that song too man! Too many feels...
He had nothing to lose. At least she was around him, at least she didn't cringe at his mere sight

Even if he is hurt he wants her around him ❤️
Prem jo hai lawyer sahab ko😆
*Ehem Ehem* sexual tension between two .
*Ehem* raised to infinity bro ☺️
Sumo busy with her ministrations and Shravan be like


Shirtless Damon! Matlab why you're increasing gharmi Prii.. But AC hai toh keep them coming 🤪
Omg!! They kissed !!!
Omg yeh!!!!
Damn!! Thodi der aur lift kharab kar deti tu toh kya jata tera
Mature likhti nahi na mai🤣
How can she just walk away? This woman is bipolar.
She's beyond that, she's infinity polar😆
This that happened between us.." she said gesturing with her hands, "Was a mistake! It was just a moment. I'd rather you not make so much about it!"
Oh please
Angry Federer is the best thing ever! The guy has such panache! Prii, shukriya!!!

Shravan Malhotra got back his Oxford grad brains 😆
My version of Shravan always had the brain😎
Let's see how he's gonna do raaz ka pardaphaash 😆
Ooo you're gonna love it, aaisa dhuan uthega, fire brigade mangwani padegi😆
Awesome one 👏 👏
Thanks!!
Update soonish love !!
Yo next week!
Take care! 🤗

@Bold Thank you so so much!!! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Castile2

Res
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Unress

Hey Zoya!
Hey Cas!
For a moment there, I thought you were going to write a spin off based on what Namik said in one of his Periscope chats...
I haven't watched it yet😆 Eva sent me a PM with the link the other day to get inspiration for future works😃
Shravan cornering Sumo in the elevator and the ultimate confession-Sumo refusing-Shravan on Mission Manaofy Madam Sumo!

But man...did we get more than that?! 😳
Did you?😆
Bande ne kuch nahi kiya aur Madam ne sidha humlaa kar diya! 😆
Ab woh hai hi aaisa, koi bhi humlaa kar de😉
How can you make Sumo sound adorable and moronic at the same time?!
Pata nahi bro, just comes naturally
Lawyer Saheb, agar aapki Sumo time paas ke liye chaku use karti toh aapke paas attempt to murder ke cases ka pahaad hota! 🤣
Point hai ya! ROFL...
Aag laga hi di Sumo ne, Lawyer Saheb ke soye hue hormones ko jagake! 😉
Mere Shravan ke hormones mai kabhi koi issue nahi tha.. Woh show mai issue tha pata nahi kyun😆
The entire elevator convo was lit man..!! 😆
Haina na...
And after the laughter riot you gave us the flashbacks...

The hurt and longing that's between these two... 💔
Hurtful...
The entire build up for the ultimate kiss was just perfect 👏
Shukriya...
Par Suman has to keep up a promise that she made to 'someone'!! Like seriously woman?!
Pagal hai woh poori...
Ab toh The Shravan Malhotra ko koi nahi rok sakta! He's gonna make her confess and that too like a Boss... 😎
Oh yehhh!
Can't wait for the next part dude! This was amazing...
Thank you, next week yo!
Underdog Of The Show: Suman madam ka basta! That bag was... 🤣
Hahahaha yeh sahi tha, basta 😆
Update soon and till then
Yup!
Love
Cas ❤️

@Bold thanks so very much Cas😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: bworm

Nice. ..very nice. .

Thank you so much!
Please continue. ..story getting interesting.
Sure thing, in a few days...
Please pm me
Will do!

@Bold thanks bworm!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: shivaniballa

It was amazing. 🥳
Thank you so much!
Wish Ramu kaka would have witnessed this scene🤣
Marr jata woh bro!
Do pm this to me! 😊
Will do...

@Bold Thanks so much Shivani!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Zoya this was beautiful 👏👏 read it before your p.m😆 so beautifully penned.

Thanks so much hon!!
..tge way yiu described each and every moment made me go awww shravan turning on and sumo wanting him to was made me blush🤪 also how can I forget the song selection👍🏼 one of my recent favourites...
Happy to entertain you :D
thanks a lot for this please update soon..
Absolutely!!
Love,
Dolly😊

@Bold Thank you so much Dolly!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Naamika

This is just adorable. cant wait for next update. Shravan jaisa banda itne paas ho to sumo ko bhi kaise control hoga.Thank God Shravan is using his lawyer mind. Hey update next part soon.

Hahaha I know right!
Shravan is lit!
I will update soon, won't keep you guys waiting long.
Thank you so very much!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳
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Unres
Zoya you are back that too with a Ts...yipeee!!
🤗 🤗 🤗
Hugs right back at you Nik🤗

As usual , it was mind boggling!!
And the song is too apt for ShraMan ...
Haina!!
Sumo n her antics... 🤣
Bechara shravan !! 😆
Lol...
Loveeed the way you described their passionate moment... 😳
It was soo awww!!
I love cute moments... Glad you do too😛
So Shravan will not be on devdas mode here... soo happy for that!!
I hated bewda Shravan😳

Too much exitement for the next part...Cant wait!!
Aww let's hope I don't let you down...
Thanks for the PM n plzzz cont sooonish...Eagerly waiting
Give me until next week😃
Loads Of Love n 🤗
Nik

@Bold Thank you so very much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: minho

It was sooo good pls continue soon loved it ❤️ 👏

Thank you!
Yes will do😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Zoya,
You always leave me speechless Zoya.

That's really sweet of you to say...
There was so much potential for a beautiful romance between ShraMan but we didn't get to see any. But nevertheless your imagination gave us an amazing new story that we wished happened in the show. The way you build up for the kiss was slow torture. 😳 The best moment for both of them. Very well written.
Thank you so much!
Now we get to see sharp shot Lawyer Shravan. Will be eagerly waiting for the next update.
👏
Yes!!!

Lubna.

@Bold Thank you!!

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