Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Faith28

Brilliant!! Im dancing with excitement That u started a new TS😃

Aww man! You guys are too cute!
Kyn ki drabbles se mann nai bharta😛 (Though i love em all😳).
Drabble! Bro! Mere OS Three shot length hote hai, drabble bol diya 💔
i too wasn't happy with how the track progressed during preekars wedding...so even more thrilled to read ur version of this track...
Yey!!
Pls update soon...cant wait😊
Absolutely bro! Next week, won't keep you too long...

@bold Thank you!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Res...

Will try to unres soonish,,I promise! ... I did I did! ! 😊

First of all the song selection !! had listened to it while watching Dangal but never have I ever imagined ShraMan in it... now after reading the update,,it goes so well...! #SimplySuperb...👏
It does right!!!!

So Sumo Madam just sprayed on a person who was not even close to her,,, just imagine if Shravan had touched her...#DeadDuck 🤪
Dead duck indeed 🤣
Sumo has her ways... what a torture!!😆 Sanskari Shravan finally lost it!!😳 Glad that he did!
Haina

Action speaks louder than words n Action speaks opposite of words is her mantra...😉
Shravan isn't buying the words...😛 whatever she says,,he knows!!
Aaise hi thodi na hot shot lawyer hai...


Damon! I am in the love
Waiting for Shravan Malhotra''s next move...😃

Amazing update as ever!
Shukriyaaa!

@Bold Thanks so much hon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautiful dear...

Thank you!
When Shravan came inside the lift she didn't see him she was so engrossed with her file... He knew she is with him... Shravan was right he didn't do anything rather than breathing.. She sprayed... If he has tried to touch her she would have killed him with her chaku...😆Khooni chudail... 😉
Jaan hi le leti thi woh...
She & her ministrations.. Making him warm up from inside... Madamji lagi huyi thi massage karne mein... 🤣how long he would have controlled his hormones burst out it @ the end...Madamji also couldn't controlled herself reciprocated & kissed him back with full pleasure... 😉😉.
Hehehe...
Let's see how does our Mr. London solve this mystery... & win his love of his life... Sumo is just waiting for his confession... As soon as he confessed the promise to his father will be null & void...
Absolutely!

Plz send PM & I will buddy u r acc plz accept it...
Of course, will do.. Fire up the friend request...
Vinu

@Bold thanks so much Vinu!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww this so beautiful emotional intense heart-touching romantic...you know how much I love you & your writing Dearest Zoya!
Thank you so very much Spandana! Really sweet of you😛
Thank you for not going missing this time haha!!
Hehe, you're welcome!!!

Love,
Spandana

@Bold Thanks so much hon!
Love😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: jesi15

Very nice ..

Loved it!!

Thank you Jesi!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Safire

Superb!!!! Wav, what a brilliant writer you are👏Waiting for the next update!!!

Thank you so very much!
Won't keep you waiting long...
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: --Elara--


Zoya! 🤗 Kitne dino baad tera likha hua padh rahi hun yaar! (Not your fault, main hi late lateef hun 😛 Tu toh khoob likhti hai re)

I know! Tujhe bohot time baad dekha hai mere kisi thread pe🤗
And Zoyaland has held me within its strong clutches!
Arey ya! Too sweet of you...
Aye hayee! Hum tum, ek kamre mein, ermm sorry lift mein band hon aur light chali jaye! 😳 Sumo was hell bent on making shravan blind! 🤣 Becahra vaise hi pyaar mein andha hai! 😛 😉
Rofl😆
That entire section was hilarious! Chaaku bhi tha sumo ke paas toh.
And all those childhood memories. I love moti and chashmish a lot! They are so cute! 😳
Agreed ya! Cutest ever!
Oh my, there closeness.☺️ And that kiss hayee! And shravan ko phir akela chod diya. 😛 😆
Loved this soo much! Keep writing meri jaan!
Will do hon!
Love
Yours late lateef 😆 🤗

@Bold Thank you so much late kate 🤗
Love ya!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
eagerly waiting to see the Real Shravan Mahotra ...
awesome update.
beautifully penned...
loved it...

Edited by arshuaar - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thanks so much Shivani!

Thank you so so much for writing these parts. 😊
Show ke khatam hone ke baad inhi cheezo ke sahare jee rahe hai. I miss them alot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Needless to say... FAAAD Update...!!!!
Sumo is the epitome of madness and jhaliness, right?
Kuch bhi karti hai ye ladki...!!! But it was LIT.

Madam has no self control at all.. Bechara jo itne der se try kar raha tha.. he also lost his saint-like self control because of her ministrations 😆

The flashbacks were just ❤️

Loved their banters.

And the dialogues were just superb..
If I start mentioning my favourite part or the dialogue, then i would end up reposting the whole post.. so in general hi sab bol diya.. 😳 I hope you understand my feelings bro 😉

You have no idea how eagerly i am waiting to read what Mr. Lawyer is going to do know.

And also you have no clue how proud i am of myself that i have finally commented before the next part is up. 😆🥳

Zoyaa... A big hug to you for this one 🤗
Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago

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