Only You..... A ShraMan TS - 16/01/2017 - Part 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Zoya Di so this is Wat you were talking about.
Amazing...year khatam Ho gaya lekin aapne mujhe Yeh feel karwaana band nhin kiya ki u need to have a better vocabulary to comment on your post.
Needless to say that the song part was amazing. My recent favourite song jo hai😉
Humaare lawyer sahab ka hormone locha Ho gaya😳 and sumos ministration didn't help either😆
I nearly cracked up when shravan said thank god chaaku to tum normally use nahi karti. ... He may have been thinking ki agar aisa hota to mera workload kitna badh jata kyunki verma ke paas to main attempt to murder ka case lekar Jane nahi deta🤣
So sumo will be confronted by him and also she will see the lawyer side of him.

Do on me next time main buddy request bhej diya
Update jaldi

Love
Arpita

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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
oww how I wish we got to see the Real Shravan Mahotra in the show 😳
awesome update. waiting for part 2 eagerly. Sumos bag reminde dme of Phoebe Buffay's bag 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Like always it's beautiful
Loved it for reviving old memories
Loved it for its progress from subtle romance to passionate desire
Loved it for its dialogues

"Toh kyun nahi kaha? Haath rakh kar keh dete ke mai hoon, toh yeh nahi hota na.."😳


"Oh really I did nothing other than breathing and you pepper sprayed me, had I done something tum toh tase hi kar deti 😆


"Taser hai hi nahi mere paas..."😆😆


"Oh bach gaya mai!"🥱


"But chaku hai!".🤣

"Haan toh tumne spray kia bhi toh aaise ke aag hi lag jaye.."☺️

Loved it because it'll have more updates
Please pm me
Swarnima
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Zoya thanks for the pm yar... when i found ur pm i was like yay treat h ye to :-p ... n vo v TS ..whoaa ;)

about the topic you chose, thanks a lot for that dear..

i had hated most of the parts during preekar marriage ...

n the dragging thing, it took my patience ...hated it the most ..

the feel, the vibes that the show used to give was lost somewhere that time ... :( now enough of my philosophy ... 😃

coming to chapter...you nailed it again dear..the beginning was hilarious ...rofl...

how sumo got scared n paper sprayed shravu...acha hua banda qutub minar tha warna must have lost his eyes ...lol...

n how he yelled at sumo ...n sumo in defence btana chahiye the tm ho ...n he in defence taser mar deti ...n her reply taser ni chaku...hilarious ...

n then concern..wo to birth right h dono ka.. i knew it he'd definitely bring the "ignorance topic" n she would deny talking about it... n yahi hua..

yar i just hated it when sumo denied talking about that n he just jerked n backed off ...yar obvio koi v krega..

the flashbacks were so beautiful 😊

*pehla chocolate wala reminded me of epi 33 ya 34 ..
*n sports car kaise confidently he said tumhe baithaunga n tmhi hogi meri gf... that was so lovely..
*n then disney n harry potter things were cute..

coming out of flashbacks, the pain n hurt was visible in their eyes :(

how she pleaded n lastly he gave up akhir lady love h mana kaise karta :-p n yar if they would come this close kiss to hona hi tha :-p ...


omg!! the kiss was wooow...how passionate it was n then yar elevator thode or time k bad thik ni ho skta tha.. beda garg kr dia romance ka :(

both were in watchable condition... lips swollen, hair messed up... lol...

n thanks god he too came out of trance n held her hand warna sochte rhta n madam bolt k speed se chali gai hoti :-p


yar kaise she denied it was nothing...mistake like really?? n banda hyper ho gaya...acha hua he spoke out n he did her mimickery ...

lol ...though it was a serious situation , i just imagined ki kaise sumo ki mimickery kia hoga ;) n finally she left ...

n acha hua he decided to find out.. really yar he's a lawyer afterall ...

show m to i used to curse his character ki banda lawyer h use ur lawyer mind ...but they just spoiled his character n everything... leave it now..

loved the chapter..

waiting for next one anxiously ki how he will use his james bond n lawyer mind to find out the reason behind her sudden ignorance...

update soon pls zoya ...:) love ya... 😊
Edited by anonymousanju - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
last but not the least the song naina was man I just love it... it just touches heart..

forgot to mention before ..but couldn't stop myself from mentioning it ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
amazing start
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant!! Im dancing with excitement That u started a new TS😃 Kyn ki drabbles se mann nai bharta😛 (Though i love em all😳).i too wasn't happy with how the track progressed during preekars wedding...so even more thrilled to read ur version of this track... Pls update soon...cant wait😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Res...
Will try to unres soonish,,I promise! ... I did I did! ! 😊

First of all the song selection !! had listened to it while watching Dangal but never have I ever imagined ShraMan in it... now after reading the update,,it goes so well...! #SimplySuperb...👏

So Sumo Madam just sprayed on a person who was not even close to her,,, just imagine if Shravan had touched her...#DeadDuck 🤪
Sumo has her ways... what a torture!!😆 Sanskari Shravan finally lost it!!😳 Glad that he did!

Action speaks louder than words n Action speaks opposite of words is her mantra...😉
Shravan isn't buying the words...😛 whatever she says,,he knows!!



Waiting for Shravan Malhotra''s next move...😃

Amazing update as ever!

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Beautiful dear...

When Shravan came inside the lift she didn't see him she was so engrossed with her file... He knew she is with him... Shravan was right he didn't do anything rather than breathing.. She sprayed... If he has tried to touch her she would have killed him with her chaku...😆Khooni chudail... 😉
She & her ministrations.. Making him warm up from inside... Madamji lagi huyi thi massage karne mein... 🤣how long he would have controlled his hormones burst out it @ the end...Madamji also couldn't controlled herself reciprocated & kissed him back with full pleasure... 😉😉.

Let's see how does our Mr. London solve this mystery... & win his love of his life... Sumo is just waiting for his confession... As soon as he confessed the promise to his father will be null & void...

Plz send PM & I will buddy u r acc plz accept it...

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Awww this so beautiful emotional intense heart-touching romantic...you know how much I love you & your writing Dearest Zoya!

Thank you for not going missing this time haha!!


Love,
Spandana

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