SS || Woh Humsafar tha || Chapter 2 on page 6 - Page 7

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Oh wow .. what an update .. mindblowing and heart wrenching ..😭

The whole childhood feedback was so emotional 1st happy and then sad .. Ah ! How smtimes one person makes all the difference in our life - their being is only source of happiness and their leaving makes life hell ..

I hate these maternal relatives of Sumo , opportunists all of them , no humanity , how cud sm1 take adv of own relatives by falling so low .. Just hope at sm point of story in future,we get to see them paying back for all they did,maybe our hero Shravan could get that done .. Hopes !!

All in all,it was awesome..👏 lets see how Shraman meet and what with Preeti and Shravan colliding .. Update soon .. 😊

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
awesome update
totally loved it
continue soon

Originally posted by: Safire

Well written!!!!

Waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hey buddy...

Hi Nicky Pie!

(do u like the nickie😳)

First of all sowii for being this late...*best puppy face*

No problem at all..its better late thn never😉

Am commenting in two posts for both parts separately... 😛
Okie Dokie😳

I became a fan of your writing bud...a crazy one.. 😳

Blushing hard☺️

Okey coming to the update...
The starting was beautiful... ❤️
The way you described Sumo's grief is commendable... 👏
Everything was written in such a way that one can easily imagine the whole scenario...!!

Thank you soo much!😳

So Shravan had hurted Sumo badly in the past... 😕
He is guilty but somethings cant be forgotten easily...!!

Absolutely!..now all he has to do is prove tht hez truly guilty n wont repeat his mistake.And thn it wud be on Sumo..whether she'll forgave him or not!

Sumo in wheelchair...oh my!! 😭
N Shravan left her in that condition... 😲
Sumo's pain is soo touchy... 😭
N who is Aarsh???...Their son??...a mild guess!!

Yes..Aarsh is their son.

Such a gripping story buddy... 👏
Awesome work..!! ❤️

Thank you so much!😳

Loads of Love n tight 🤗 to you for this one sista...!!
Nik

Originally posted by: Nik03

Am here again... 😆

😃

Read second part n to say I loved it would be an understatement...!!
It just left a deep , veryyy deep impact on me... ❤️
N now am thinking why I didnt read it before...!!!..stupid me 😕

Awwh..Thank you!😳

Coming to the update...
Peety lives with Sumo...??

U'll get to knw tht as the story proceeds but here in my story Preeti is Shravan's cousin.

Sumo is the only child of her parents that too after 15 long years...!! ❤️
I am a...no...was a daddy's princess... 💔
Sumo lost her father at a tender age of 12 ... 😭

I loved Sumo's parents bickering over her... 😊
Daughters are really always close to their father... 😳
This is a dream of every father to search a perfact guy for his daughter who would love her more than he does...but it cant be compared ever..!!
Beautiful dear... ❤️

Thank you!

And the horrible accident... 😭
Sumo n Priya lost their only support...but Sumo had to be strong for her mother...!!

She promised her Dad..how cud she broke it...for her tht promise was like A do or die!

My most fav part of the update was how Sumo described her father..what he meant to her...❤️
Its of another level bud...!!

Even i also enjoyed writing tht part and got hell emotional too!

Tiwari clan... 😡 (except nanu)

Yaa..me too😡...but dear know tht u'll be hating thm more ahead😈

Loved Sumo n Priya convo!!

Thanks!

So they gave the business to Mama n Mausaji...Oh no!!
And as expected tiwari's showed their true colours...greedy people..!!

Not thy..its only Priya who gave thm..Sumo learned about it by Mami and was hell shocked to know tht and cudnt get why her Maa did so.

Really Loved Sumo n her fathers convo about life's ups n downs...!!
...but I cant promise to love her as much as I love you....10% phir bhi kam hi rahay ga , chalay ga na...... ❤️ it!!

Thanks Dear!

Even i also loved writing it!

Priya gave her property to Tiwari's...I guess they manipulated her in signing !!

No more spoilers now😆

Exited too what happens next...!!
Thanks for the pm n plz update soonish...eagerly waiting

Ur welcome!

Will try to update soon but chances are a bit minimum as my Uni just staretd and my Schedule is all messed up but will try to!😳

Okey I guess maine bhi kuch jyaada hi lamba comment kiya hai... 😆
But am not to blame...you made me write this much..!!
Ohh not to worry about lenght...i love lenghty comments and urs just made me elated😃!

Loads of Love n 🤗 to you sista..!!
Nik

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Hi sunain...
Both chapters were just amazing emotional one indeed... well written 👏 ...
Comng to first chapi... what to say...just amazing... hats off to ur writing... the way u expressed shrmans pov was brilliant... emotional kar diya yaar 😭 ... Sharman r married but not together? Sumo wheelchair pe? Aarsh? too many questions... which will be unfold as story progress...eagerly waiting for that...

Chap 2... loved the baap beti bond... beautifully penned... conversation between sumo and her dad was just amazing... "but I cant promise to love her as much as I love you...10% phir bhi kam hi rahay ga , chalay ga na"...loved it..
This tiwari's 😡 😡 ... just hate them..
Priya ne sab kuch unlogon ke naam kar diya? But y?
Eagerly waiting for next part... plz update soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome update...

Shravan nd Preeti's silent conversation.. Looks like Preeti is going to play quite a big role in shraman's story..

Sumo nd her dad's moments were beautiful..

But Mama Mami mausi mausaji are so cruel.. Becoz of them owner of the house has to stay in store room nd work as maid😡

Excited for shraman's encounter..

Thanks for the pm

Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: deltadawn

wow sunain.. ab tak to mai tumhar eposts ki badi fan thi... but is update se yaad aya ki ye story bhi tumhari hai aur ekdum amazing hai...

Thank you so much...now u r making me blush☺️

confession - it had been so long I re-read the story from the start to get a link so took time to comment also...

Wel its absolutely my fault for updating this late...sorry!

I only do well reading senti stuff and this was par excellence... the bond between sumo and her dad is so amazing.

Me too...i also love dark stories.

Looks like poor girls character will go through a lot of pain here...

Hell a lot!

You write so well, so detailed describing each situation, each emotion and each action so well.. perfect !

Thank you Dear!😳

👏👏 kudos to the writer. and please update sooner this time 😳

wil try to😳

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

hey sunain dear sorry for being so late 😔

it was a long gap so read both chapters in one go

Hy dont be sorry..it shud be me who shud be sorry...its all my fault as i updated this late..M sorry dear!

M glad u read it!😊

it was a heart wrenching update baby sumo have gone through so many agonies poor sou and now shravan her life is also not with her, she is all alone 😭

this update was emotional roller coaster in starting she was so happy but then her world crashed when she lost her father, my eyes really welled up while reading both the updates

Even i was crying like a mad person while i was writing it!😭

It was just too/so much too/so soon for her.

, i am out of words to appreciate you for the way you penned down this story👏

Thank you dear!😳

aur ye mama, mami, mausa, mausi how mean they are and how priya can give all to them 😡 i m really pissed off, she should have thought sumo atleast once 😒

She had her reasons...which will be disclosed later as the story will proceed...u'll get to knw it!

Dont hate her...shez a Mom after all how can she think bad for her only daughter.

waiting for shravans POV too i believe he also have some vindications of his behaviour.

wel tht will take some time as for now m focusing on Sumo's past and her pov.

but will get to him too.😊

Please update soon

will try to😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..