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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Am here again... 😆

Read second part n to say I loved it would be an understatement...!!
It just left a deep , veryyy deep impact on me... ❤️
N now am thinking why I didnt read it before...!!!..stupid me 😕

Coming to the update...
Peety lives with Sumo...??

Sumo is the only child of her parents that too after 15 long years...!! ❤️
I am a...no...was a daddy's princess... 💔
Sumo lost her father at a tender age of 12 ... 😭

I loved Sumo's parents bickering over her... 😊
Daughters are really always close to their father... 😳
This is a dream of every father to search a perfact guy for his daughter who would love her more than he does...but it cant be compared ever..!!
Beautiful dear... ❤️

And the horrible accident... 😭
Sumo n Priya lost their only support...but Sumo had to be strong for her mother...!!

My most fav part of the update was how Sumo described her father..what he meant to her...❤️
Its of another level bud...!!

Tiwari clan... 😡 (except nanu)
Loved Sumo n Priya convo!!
So they gave the business to Mama n Mausaji...Oh no!!
And as expected tiwari's showed their true colours...greedy people..!!

Really Loved Sumo n her fathers convo about life's ups n downs...!!
...but I cant promise to love her as much as I love you....10% phir bhi kam hi rahay ga , chalay ga na...... ❤️ it!!
Priya gave her property to Tiwari's...I guess they manipulated her in signing !!

Exited too what happens next...!!
Thanks for the pm n plz update soonish...eagerly waiting
Okey I guess maine bhi kuch jyaada hi lamba comment kiya hai... 😆
But am not to blame...you made me write this much..!!

Loads of Love n 🤗 to you sista..!!
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Hi sunain...
Both chapters were just amazing emotional one indeed... well written 👏 ...
Comng to first chapi... what to say...just amazing... hats off to ur writing... the way u expressed shrmans pov was brilliant... emotional kar diya yaar 😭 ... Sharman r married but not together? Sumo wheelchair pe? Aarsh? too many questions... which will be unfold as story progress...eagerly waiting for that...

Chap 2... loved the baap beti bond... beautifully penned... conversation between sumo and her dad was just amazing... "but I cant promise to love her as much as I love you...10% phir bhi kam hi rahay ga , chalay ga na"...loved it..
This tiwari's 😡 😡 ... just hate them..
Priya ne sab kuch unlogon ke naam kar diya? But y?
Eagerly waiting for next part... plz update soon...

Thanks for pm 😊
Edited by shaggy8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Awesome update...
Shravan nd Preeti's silent conversation.. Looks like Preeti is going to play quite a big role in shraman's story..
Sumo nd her dad's moments were beautiful..
But Mama Mami mausi mausaji are so cruel.. Becoz of them owner of the house has to stay in store room nd work as maid😡
Excited for shraman's encounter..
Thanks for the pm
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
wow sunain.. ab tak to mai tumhar eposts ki badi fan thi... but is update se yaad aya ki ye story bhi tumhari hai aur ekdum amazing hai...
confession - it had been so long I re-read the story from the start to get a link so took time to comment also...

I only do well reading senti stuff and this was par excellence... the bond between sumo and her dad is so amazing.

Looks like poor girls character will go through a lot of pain here...

You write so well, so detailed describing each situation, each emotion and each action so well.. perfect !


👏👏 kudos to the writer. and please update sooner this time 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
hey sunain dear sorry for being so late 😔
it was a long gap so read both chapters in one go
it was a heart wrenching update baby sumo have gone through so many agonies poor sou and now shravan her life is also not with her, she is all alone 😭
this update was emotional roller coaster in starting she was so happy but then her world crashed when she lost her father, my eyes really welled up while reading both the updates, i am out of words to appreciate you for the way you penned down this story👏
aur ye mama, mami, mausa, mausi how mean they are and how priya can give all to them 😡 i m really pissed off, she should have thought sumo atleast once 😒
waiting for shravans POV too i believe he also have some vindications of his behaviour.
Please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Res. Just read up to the accident and I'm crying.. Will unress after reading the whole chapter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Suniii ( I got u a Nick name 😛)

This was sooo emotional😭

Kya Mila tujhe bachi ko rula k???

I was crying so hell bad

But that was soo beautifully penned 👏👏👏

Hats off to you girl

Is baar jaldi update kar ke please humare upper meherbaani karna😆😆

Looottsss of love
Dolly😊
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anukulgr8

RES
M so sorry but this is goona be a long RES naina...So sorry


Eagerly Waiting!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Oowwiii got an update... First of all thank you so much for dedicating this wonderful chapter to me... It means a lot...
My Pleasure😳


And I bugged you...
In a cutoo way😆

But see what we got... I was so waiting for this one, as your style of story telling is really amazing.
Thank you Bunny!😳

Coming back to the chapter... Though mama mami mausa masi are the negative character here... But still they have something to do with story... I have never understood the necessity of the characters of masi and mausa in the serial. Yahan pe to sab kuch harap ke baithe hai yeh log..
They have done much worse thn this...i wud say just buckle up buddy or else u might fall off the roller coaster😎😈

Chalo... Abhi aage kya hota hai... Dekhte hai... Next chapter is going to be blasted one for sure...areee bhai shraman ki mulaqat jo hone wali hai... Chalo ab please update next chapter asap. Waiting...
Their encounter is gonna be God knows wht😆
will try to update soon...but the chances are low as my Uni has just started tu my schedule is all messed up...but still i'll try my best😊
Love
Bunny/Juju

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Love you too dear!🤗
Thank you so much!
M so glad u liked it!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

The first part...childhood flash back...that soo,,,...just out of words...!!

Sometimes we can't seem to see all the good things around us...unless they are gone!!
One incident n life goes upside down..!!
The first chap was heart wrenching but with this background! ! Painful...!!

For ShraMan...I just hope,,dhoop chaon ka mausam ho,,,judai na ho.!!

Waiting for shravan's pov n Aarsh! !

@bold..So true!
Shravan's Pov..i really didnt think about it as i decided to take this story in Suman's Pov but u'll get to knw about Aarsh as he'll himself confess his feelings his pain...tht'll be an emotional one! Shravan ka i'll think wht to do.
Thank you for liking it!😳

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