SS || Woh Humsafar tha || Chapter 2 on page 6

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Hola Folks...!!!

Not new to this Forum but those who don't know me...Hiii..once again..I am Sunain a big big fan of Shraman,Nimik & obviously....EDKV n this Forum too😳

I must say this Forum is flooded with many Fantabulous writers n I am no match to them..but still m here with my first ever TS on our lovely Shraman which was ealier planned to be an OS..this is going to be a three shot.I hope you guys like it.

Aur han agar pasand na aay tu plz bacha smjh kar maafi day dena...n plz be honest if u really don't like it or want some changes or find mistakes...do pinpoint them n lemme know so that I can improve my writing.

So this TS is dedicated to all the amazing writers we have got her...its a great pleasure to have such Lovely writers cum Friends.!

This TS is going to be quite different from the show here Shravan is a DSP,Sumo a doctor cum brilliant chef,Pushkar-Preeti roles are switched...Pushkar is Suman's cousin and Preeti Shravan's.Rest the same...n if any new entries than they'll be introduced rite there...so guys buckle up for a rollercoaster ride which probably wil start from chap 2!!hope u got it!😉

Happy Reading EDKVians!!!!

Please ignore typos!

Woh Humsafar tha..!!!

"Sumo...do you have a mintue??"...summoned a male voice.

*Suman's POV*

I looked out the window.The sky was tar-black and the large clouds were headind towards me.Within few minutes,omnious black clouds covered the sky and released a sudden shower.Puddles began plinking as the rainfall became heavier.The roof of the cars danced with the spray and I could hear the mummering of the rain through the window.It seemed as if the sky was mimicing me,mocking my helplessness.

*sigh*..."helplessness...when did everything worsened...lead my life to grievous losses..han??"

"Why??...why it's always me who lefts behind being deserted...why God why? ... After all what have i done to endure such miseries." My voice quivered before two hot fat tears roll down my face.


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Alas her battle was over...the battle between her and her tears which commenced few months ago. Every time whenever tears twinkled in her eyes she simply blinked them off not allowing them passage to rule her face.Just not to let the mask of strength and sturdiness slip away and expose her vulnerability.

But not anymore...today to her dismay she lost her battle.Every second her sobs only became louder and tears more frequent.

However a flash of forked lightning and a great clap of thunder altogether brought her out of her trance.She shivered and soon looked around to notify that her room was drowned in darkness and the only mean of illumination were the light rays piercing through the window which probably were of street lights.

Before she could make any move she heard a male voice calling her and it wasn't hard for her to recognize that husky voice as she extremely familiar to that...because that voice itself belonged to the soul who stranded her,who crushed her heart her soul into trillion pieces.

The moment she heard his voice,somekind of sweet sensation evoked inside her,something she always felt whenever he was around her,something she loved and enjoyed the most. But today it felt wrong to her.She mentally slapped herself for having such feels for him till now.And soon few more fresh tears made their way down her already damp face which to her dismay flowed on their own accord.

He entered the room,profoundly surprised to see pitch darkness.Soon he began to search for the switch to turn on the lights as it was the very first time he entered her room in these five months.After few minutes he found the switch and turned it on.As a result,side lamp brightened the room partially with goldish brown shade.

She instantly squeezed her eyes shut to break the journey of her tears.As her back was facing him she quickly wiped her face and masked up a strong sturdy expression.Not to let him know about her predicament.


"Sumo you can't...don't u even dare...tu ab kamzoor nhi par sakti...atleast not toaday..dekha day isse tu iss kay bina bhi jee sakti hai tijhe is kay ehsanon ki koi zarrorat nhi...his deeds no more hurt me..remenber he's the one...and reason of your being is Aarsh and only Aarsh!"...she mentally bolstered herself before she opened her eyes.Dim light didn't irritated her eyes much.


The intruder on the other hand stood like a statue waiting for her glance but miserably she didn't budged.He was totally puzzled just like a messed up spool of treads.He didn't knew which string to pull first.Mustified,what he was that moment.

Entire room was drowned in dread silence the only noise that could be heard that moment was of mummering of rain and the ticking of clock on the wall unless Suman herself decided to break the chain and voiced out after which seemed an enternity.

"Seems like you lost your path??"...Suman said coldly.


"No I didn't...I'm here to talk"...said the intruder who was well prepared for the palaver coming ahead.


"But I'm not interested...so please kindly leave"...she said firmly facing her back towards him.


"No I won't unless and until you hear me out"


"Listen...to what...there's nothing left between us to talk about I think last night you were very clear about that so please go and enjoy your upcoming new life...stop peaking at your past...I suggest...I have moved on so should you!"


Now this was enough to heat him up.The moment he heard "moved on" a burning sensation ran through his entire body.He quickly strided towards her and soon was facing her front.Minimun light and her siting position made it difficult for him to see her face properly.

"Moved On!!!...may I knw when did that happened??"...he whisper shouted almost surprised.


"When...han...I tell you...as soon as realization dawned at me,As soon as that bl**dy blindfold of your love got untied,As soon as a catastrophic tornado budged into my life!!!"...she roared in one go leaving no room for him to argue but to feel highly guilty.


"By the way you should be knowing that...infact you should have knowned after all tum hi tu woh mahaan shakhsiyat ho!.Mera aur meri zindagi ka achay se Mazak banaye tum nay...nhi yaad...mein yaad dela..."


"Suumoo...I'm sorry...I know I messed up really badly...but now I'm sorry.."...he cutted her midsentence not being able to hear his past horrendous mistakes no no scratch that sins.


For her his misdoings and misjudging her was a sin he committed with ease.


"It's Suman for you...and what??...whh..you...you are SORRYY...for what??"...Suman asked with a sarcastic laugh.


"It's Sumo...it always was...it is...and it'll always be...You are my Sumo"...he said in a husky tone before kneeling down in front of her so that they could face each other.As a result she instantly faced the other way.


How much her heart wanted to believe on him on his words which he uttered with so much ease knowing very well about their relation...how it was dangling and was on the brink.

Soon his right hand lifted to push back the strands of hairs falling on her eyes while she was fighting with her rebellious thoughts and as soon as his hand touched her skin a slight shiver ran down her body and shortly his hand cupped her face as a result to which her eyes got shut on their own accord melting in his touch though how much she wanted to resist but to her consternation she just couldn't.On the contrary a smile erupt on his face as he witnessed he still had an effect on her while his thump kept drawing numerous patters on her cheeks.

"Sumo..."

That was enough to bring her back to reality...her eyes opened wide and instantly she thwart his hand and that was the moment they shared an eyelock.The moment her eyes met his something crunched inside him.Highly startled to see her face,her puffy eyes few dry and wet tears ruling her face which clearly proved that she had been bitterly crying for hours which evoked a pang in his chest.And the thought of him being the reason behind her such state made it even worse for him.


"Sumo...haah...your Sumo...yours...jo larki kal raat tak ek gold digger,dhokaybaz,matlabi aur pata nhi kya kya thi...whom u declared to hate from the core of your heart...whom you disowned,stranded last night officially,all of a sudden became yours...haan...achank say is majbor lachar apahij par itna pyaar...ohh nhi daya...daya hi tu kar rhay ho"...she wailed looking directly into his eyes.


"Aisa nhi hai...mein sach...


"tu kaisa hai!!!...in panch mahinon mein phelay tu kabhi aisa na hoa...balkay mein is whee...*sigh*...wheelchair par kya ae tum nay tu moon hi phar lea... PANCH MAHINAY SHRAVAN PANCH MAHINAY..."she whisper shouted as fresh tears twinkled in her eyes.


" Do you even know how long that is...Five months without you without my f***ing rights without everything I use to own throughout my life...sab cheen lea tum nay mjhse...sab kuch"


Saying so she tried moving her wheelchair but Shravan's hold didn't allow to do so.Yes Shravan his Shravan himself was her sinner.Who gave her the biggest torment of her entire life who stranded her the time when she needed him the most.He ran away.And his running away from her broke her every day every minute every second which wasn't got unseen by him but he did so.

She had an accident 7 years ago which lead to her paralysis and she lost her legs but the doctor told that she could be normal and stand on her feet again but it'll take time never to lose hope n Suman being Sumo kept on trying from the previous five months just for the sake of her family and on the contrary her own Shravan was planning to disown her.

"Shravan...everything is finished...kuch nhi bacha ab sab barabad ho gaya tu ab kya lenay aay ho yahan please jao...leave me on my own...mjjhy tumhari daya ki koi zarorat nhi mein..."


"Daya...u think so low of me...I knw I committed numerous mistakes but that dosen't mean I can't amend them I can and I will just give me a chance...just one last chance...last one please...apnay Shravan ko ek akhari moka nhi do gi??"


"Moka tu day don likin kya guarantee hai k tum phir mjhy chor kar nhi jao gay...kya guarantee hai tum mjhse bezar nhi ho gay akhir mein dayhi kya paon gi tumhein..ek wheelchair par pari zinda lash...han Shravan zinda lash...I'm devoid of any emotion now...all devoid..."


"And to be honest I have no more guts to grin and bear"...she murmured.


"U know they mislead me instigated me against you u know tht...mein kya karta?"


"Kya karta...unki batein ilzamaat mjhse zayada appeling thay...mjhse zayad bharose kay kabil thay...U trusted on those f***ing allegations over me...bas yahi tha tumhara pyaar..."


"who kya kahatay thay tum...Mein tumhein kabhi girna nhi don ga...JHOOT!!... tumheri parchae ban kar tumharay sath rahon ga...JHOOT!!...tumhein kabhi kisi ki kami mahsoos nhi honay don ga...JHOOT!!...mera pyaar hum don okay leay kafi ho ga...JHOOT!!...SAB JHOOT!!...akir mein mein rah hi gae na bikul akeli"...she cried.


"Sumo they left me no choice..."


"Chalo man lea...par Aarsh ka kya...uski kya ghalti thi jo tumne ussey bhi lawarison ki tarhan chor dea...who bechara na smjh...han..ab bolo...ohh han mein kaise bhool sakti hoon...tumhein apni AIYASHIYOON say fursat milti tab..."


"ENOUGH SUMO!!!..."


"CHILAO MAAT...CHILANA MJHY BHI ATA HAI...ya tumhara chilna hi tuhari guilt ki gawahi day raha hai...ya tumhara guilt hi hai jo umad umad kar bahar arhi hai.."she taunted him.


He felt ashamed highly ashamed so lowered his head while she kept looking at him not able to see his vulnerability.But she mustered up courage to deal.He was at verge to cry but restrained himself.


"Sumo please ek baar maaf kardo mein wada karta hon sab theek kardon ga...sab phlay jaisa ho jay ga"...he said before grabbing her face in his warm hands and made her look into his light brown eyes which mere now sparkling with tears...soon he touched his temple with hers and both closed their eyes feeling eachothers breathe.Suman,however she tried of to restrain herself from his grip but couldn't mustered up courage to pull herself.

Shortly something clicked in her mind opening her eyes and pushed him away.Doing so she pushed back her wheelchair distancing herself fom him.


"Nahiii!!!...NO!!...i can't please leave rite away"...she instantly squawked.Shravan highly surprised.

The very next moment the entire room held pin drop silence only her sobs echoed which pierced his heart.He was all shutup,his senses got num only to witness those tears which were falling from her eyes.He tried wiping them off but she stopped him.


"don't you even dare...please chalay jao yahan say..chor du mjhy meray haal pay...kyun...kyun nhi baksh deatay mjhy kyun tarpa rahay ho mjhy...thak gae hon mein...thak gae hon...thak gae hon bar bar toot kar...ab bas...please bas karo mjhmein aur bardasht nhi...Please Shravan please...chalay jao yahan say...aur chor do mjhy merey haal pay...tum jao Shravan...please..."this time she pleaded crying bitterly.


And she cried bitterly.He couldn't take it anymore and leaves immediately controlling his own tears which miserably found their way down his face.

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Haahh...*sigh*...so this is it Guys...hope you liked it if not please do lemme know as I told u this is my first ever venture with writing so please pardon me if u find it rubbish wel I tried my best though.😳

Please do lemme know about ur thoughts and silent reader please please please don't be silent and try to bear a tini mini pain of commenting and typing down ur reviews.Those who liked it hit the like button n do comment as ur reviews means a lot.😃

All the jotay,chapples,tammaters,anday...n so on are most welcome as m all prepared but han shoes size 8 honay chahiyay aur flat as I don't wear heels oftenly...tomatoes...achay baray baray aur juciey...aur anday try karna ka avoide karo coz un ki smell yukki hoti hai..!!🤣😳😉

Guys I knw wht u all must be thinking...yaa fellows m alll CrRaAazZzyYy...!!!🤪yaa I surely m😆

Enough of my babbling...I wont't torture u anymore will see you soon with the nxt part.Till then...

Take Care!

Love you all!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES...
aane do naina...jaldi se aapne pitaare se bahar lao usse...😆😆
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UNRESS
Extremely sorry...m really so sos sooo sorry for being late..#latelatifme yaar this week was too hectic...plz maaf kar de..*puppy eyes n pout *pleaseee...😳 Agli baar aisa bilkul nahi hoga...pakka vala promise...
Hope tunne mujhe maaf kar diya...btw found a new nickname for u ..
jelly beanhope tumhe pasand aaya..

Coming to the update...
I juz loved this story...I mean what was that...Itna beautiful...I luv u 4 wriring this man..🤗
U made my eyes moist naina...Bohot khubsoorat tha...so emotional..😭
U explained sumo's POV sooo beautifully...Amazingly penned..I mean typed...
Sumo in wheelchair..hmm..thats interesting...😊
Aur woh saare allegations...Kyun..kyun mera dil keh raha hai ke woh ramu kaka ka kiya dhara hai...do unfold it soon naina...
Aarsh ko bhi kuch hua...Inna sara emotion ek hi chappy mai...Haaye mera kamjor dil 😆#dramaqueenme
Aur jo bhi tujhe jootay ya tamatar marega usse mere paas bhej dena...Batadungi usse mai sab😉 bhala konsa pagal isse pasand nahi karaega gimme ur address naina...I juz waana send a huge bonquet of worlds beautiful flowers n a box of delicious n yum yum chocolates to u..😃...It was damn outstanding...I juz love dark stories...😳
Thanks for the pm also...😊
Aur jaldi se second part update karo varna pehle jaise accident hua vaise phir ek baar accident ho jaayega...
Luv U sho sho shooo much...🤗

Love,
Shona😳

Edited by anukulgr8 - 9 years ago
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oyeee! Chunna... My lalchiii🤗 I was so waiting for this one! And chappal tamatar... Kaun marega tujhe! 😆It was amazing!👏 Read it as soon as got ur pm. Shravan... What did he do! He abandoned Aarsh! What the hell! N of course I knew suman would be in wheelchair! Sumo wrestler ne kya sunaya! Loved it!⭐️ But still wanted to know, Shravan's side of story... Jaldi update kariyo... Already waiting...
Much love
Your juju... / Bunny
Edited by Sb1185 - 9 years ago
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Unress

It was like wowww
Suuu my suuu...
What can say
Tune jo emotions daale hai na..
Kamaaal kar diya... Aur chappal?? Tujhe jimmy chooo ,vera wang, diana ferrari ,gucci
Na gift kar doo...
Jald update karna ...
Mystery zyda mat rakh whoo is arsh their son??
What happen 7 yrs ago?? Lots question hain dimaag mein
Jaldi updateee kar
Piya
Edited by Crazypiya - 9 years ago
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HI,
Arsh??...Sumo in wheelchair.?? .Shravan left her 7 years back??

so many questions playing in my mind. You cant leave us hanging like this 😉

Jaldi update please...
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omg!!! i loved..it you know you are soo amazing!! A totally different plot but i loved it...and iyneee sare confusions...hope you clear them Soon... so update soonish
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RES sorry galti se Ho gaya
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Originally posted by: anukulgr8

RES...
aane do naina...jaldi se aapne pitaare se bahar lao usse...😆😆


lay khol leay😆
m waiting
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Originally posted by: Sb1185

oyeee! Chunna... My lalchiii🤗
Bunny...🤗(juju say zayda cute hai😉)

I was so waiting for this one!
I knw isi leay tu jaldi update kia warna was planning to update nxt week😳

And chappal tamatar... Kaun marega tujhe! 😆It was amazing!👏 Read it as soon as got ur pm.
so so so glad u liked it...u knw i was hell scared...pata nhi tum logon ko pasand bhi aay ga ya nhi n seems like pasand agay.!😛

Shravan... What did he do! He abandoned Aarsh! What the hell! N of course I knew suman would be in wheelchair! Sumo wrestler ne kya sunaya! Loved it!⭐️ But still wanted to know, Shravan's side of story...
arey arey relax...u'll get to knw soon tab tak have patience😆
Awwh u loved it...Thank u sho sho much🤗

Jaldi update kariyo... Already waiting...
Much love
Will surely try to update soon😳
till thn...
Take Care!❤️

Your juju... / Bunny


@Bold Thank u so much bunny!
means alot😳


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Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Unress

It was like wowww
Suuu my suuu...
What can say
Tune jo emotions daale hai na..
Kamaaal kar diya... Aur chappal?? Tujhe jimmy chooo ,vera wang, diana ferrari ,gucci
Na gift kar doo...
Jald update karna ...
Mystery zyda mat rakh whoo is arsh their son??
What happen 7 yrs ago?? Lots question hain dimaag mein
Jaldi updateee kar
Piya


Piya...🤗
so gald u liked it...Thanks alot for ur sincere words made me grin brighter😃
Sure yarr naiki aur pooch pooch wil pm u my address n han remember size 8 hai..😆😳😉
Aarsh..ya he's their son!
wil surely try to update soon😊
have paitence baba😆
till thn..

Take Care!❤️


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