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Hey Sunain,
Wonder how I missed this one. It was amazing. Wow you are a very good writer indeed. Sumo's helplessness and her emotions were clearly described. The story sounds really interesting, a new take on our favorite ShraMan. I'm waiting to read what happened in their past that led to this. I hope Shravan have very solid reason to abandon her at this stage. Very intriguing. Please update soon.
Lubna.
Hii Folks!!!
Finally i'm back with a new chapter😃
Okay..this chapter i dedicated to one of our wonderful writers and a most lovely friend of ours none other than Sanjh(itssannjh) My Juju❤️!She literally beated evryone in this race as she never left a single chance of bugging me for an update😆..and i so much liked it😳
so Sanjh this ones for you😃..hope youlike it😉
Love you so much Bunny🤗
Happy Reading Shramanians!!!
hope i didnt blew ur expectations😕
Please ignore the typos!
~ Chapter 2
~Suman POV:
He dashed out the room weeping wretchedly.Eyes being blurry failed him to notice a figure on his way and so bumped into her.He looked at her while wiping off his tears and left having an intense eye contact with her as if both having an aphonic conversation which neither have courage to split out,before leaving behind an entirely perplexed Preeti.Unaware of pair of orbs staring them which were none other than mines.
I closed the door behind me and dragged my wheelchair back to the window to behold the drizzle and find peace.
By now I was devoid of tears there was no waterfall anymore only visible were remnant of dried ones.Rooted lifeless to my wheelchair I looked out the window only evaluating the loss I had had been throughout my adventurous life.What I have done to endure such pain.Why it's always me who lefts being hurt the most or should I say I'm the only one to.
I was the only child of my parents as my mothers had some complications in conceiving and to them I was a miracle which happened 15 years after their wedding.I came when they had 0% hope left only to make them the world most elated persons exactly after 15 years of their marriage to be more precise on the day of her 15th wedding anniversary my mom actually surprised my Dad with this good news.My Dad use to tell me about their moment on my every birthday just to remind me how precious I was to them more likely to my Dad...yeah I am a...no scratch that ...sigh...was a daddy's princess.He use to pamper me a lot which surely pissed Mom as for her I was being spoiled by him and for that they always had an argument which to my delight Dad always won and surprisingly this was the only argument he use to won with her just for my sake.I am so blissed to have parents like them or should I say was.
Ever since his death I'm living a sick hell life.Now these tears are as if my bestie the only thing which never left me alone. Not even for a single day.Yeah throughout my life the only things that never left me were my tears accompanying my grieves my agony my torment my loneliness my adversity and my miss fortune.That's all I carried throughout my life and miserably still carrying them.
The very day I lost my dad was the day it all started.I was merely Twelve when this all inaugurated to be more precise my agony and my torment commenced.How can I forget that awful night the very night I lost my dad my happiness my peace, technically my whole life.That night we were returning from a birthday party.My dad was driving my mom seated beside him on the passenger's seat and me back seat.As always my parents were fighting over me being spoiled.
"Neerj tum ny issey bigar kar rekh dea hai...har baat mein zidh!"... Maa fumed.
"Kya hoa bhai ab kya kiya meri shahzadi nay"...Papa said passing me a smile.
"Kya kiya???Pucho kya nhi kiya??"
"Acha tu kya nhi kiya"...he asked briefly looking at her and then back to road.
"Mein serious hoon ...and dare you took it trivial...she just doesn't listens to me always disobeying and doing things her way.I told her to go and sleep last night but no she wants her Dad to tell her a bedtime story only then madam will go to bed I told her you might come late but didn't budge...Kab tak Neerj issey pamper kartay rahogay she's grown up let her...
Papa cut her midsentence which made maa roll her eyes.
"As long as I am alive I'll pamper her no matter what happens or how grownup she becomes she'll always be my princess aur tum tu janti ho princess ki har baat sarakhon par honi chahiyay...arey bhai ek hi tu beti hai meri ab uskay leay nhi karon ga u tu kiss kay leay ya sab karon ga"...he protested giving her a point to be noted look.
"aur uski shaadi kay baad!...jahez ban kar uskay sath janay ka erada hai"...mocked Maa.
"Uski zaroorat hi nhi paray gi aisa Rajkumar duhndon ga apni Rajkumari k leay jo ussey duniya ki har khushi uskay kadmon mein laa kar day ga aur meray say bhi ziyada pyaar karay ga..tu meri zarrorat hi nhi paray gi"...he announced proudly.
"Tum smjh...
"Priya ab bas bhi karo you know very well you won't win so whats the point in exaggerating"
"I just want that she should know how the world is and the real demons she might meet ahead so that she can fight her battle herself."
"She will learn eventually...now is not the time.This is a period of joy for her and no worries that's it and when time will come I'll make her understand myself and what I tink is I won't be needing to that as I know my daughter is smart enough to handle any situation...Kyun Princess??"...he asked me with a huge grin.
When they didn't got my answer Maa turned to see me with headphones on.She waved her hand infront of me I took my headphones off only to hear Maa saying"iska kuch nhi ho sakta"...making Paa laugh loud and I joined him.The thing they didn't knew was that I heard all of their conversation and just pretended to be nonchalant and my Paa knew that because he gave me a knowing look through the gear-view mirror and I returned him my cutest smile.It was then the catastrophe happened.A lorry emerged out of nowhere in front rushing towards us which seemed out of control.Fear hiked in us eyes wide with horror and skin as cold as ice.Both me and Maa shouted in union "PAPA...","NEERJ..."Clutching his hand.Papa tried to dodge but miserably failed as by then the lorry neared us and its flashlight made difficult for Papa to take any turns and next thing what happened was a big clash!
The lorry very badly crashed into our car.In no time darkness overtook me.Last thing I remember was a pool of blood and a crowd surrounding us.
The next time I woke up in a hospital bed having Maa beside me weeping.As soon as she saw me awake she hugged me and peperred kisses all over my face Thanking God for my wellbeing.When I asked her about Papa she become all silent as if she smelt a snake or something which only made me more and more scared and impatient.I cried,shouted called out him but he didn't came and my sobs only increased and eventually I started throwing whatever stuff that came in my reach.A tight slap brought me back into reality and that's when Maa told me..
"HE'S DEAD...NO MORE...HE LEFT US ALL ALONE!...smjhi...tere Dad nhi rahay..."...and cried bitterly.
I became a statue hearing such a thing and didn't even blinked.Shocked would be a very tenuous word to describe my predicament.I beyond that.It took me days to register this hideous truth.I was all broken,shattered into trillion of pieces but I had to gather my broken pieces and mend myself so that I could mend my poor Maa.Had to be strong for her though how hard it was for me to do so.
Dad's death brought an evolution in my life along with Maa's and that evolution was fabricated by non-other than my own Akins my own maternal family.As soon as they heard the bad news they all appeared to deliver their condolences.I wasn't pleased to see any of them except my Nanu the man who truly loved us in this whole Tiwari Clan.My Mama Mami Mausa Masi claimed to loved me and my Maa but I very well knew their dirty secrets their hatred towards Maa,how much they envied her.
There emergence was nothing less than a shock for me.The people who never showed up in our thick and thin times before had showed up this time.They were the kind which only visited or called when they needed some help mostly financial and my nave Maa being a very good sister never turned her back towards them and helped them going all out of her way without Dad knowing that as he was strictly against it not that he was miser or cruel or unkind all he earned was for us he used to say that all the hard work he's doing and getting successful day by day was just for his family his world,Us.The truth was he very well knew the true colours of his In-laws and didn't wanted Maa to get hurt or something as he loved her A lot like really A lot! And always wanted to save her from any hard time, difficulty or demons surrounding her and the same wish and possessiveness he had for me.We were his world.
For me he was successful in every role of life you name it and he would stand an A+ in that specific deed of his. Whether it's being a Husband,a Dad,a Son,a Businessman,a Boss,everything was just perfectly handled by him.He was a gem,a role model admired by every other person.Even his employees worshipped him.
According to him me and maa were the soul reason of his success.When he was alive he made sure that none of our wishes left out unfulfilled.That particular thing use to be infront of us before we name it.For me he was like a Fairy God-Father...haahaa...yes a Fairy God-Father.He always had a solution for all my problems.Taking advantage of that I always ran to him for help.He was my best friend.Never imagined my life without him being beside me helping me, correcting me, pampering me.It was like he was my anchor,my hero,my idol, inshort my Everything.
Even after his death he made sure me and Maa lived a happy secured life with no financial or other worries.He left us enough wealth which could help us survive tell death with ease.He tried to fill every empty corner with happiness and comfort but failed to provide us the actual happiness which could never be replaced by any other living or non-living thing,a mere presence of a certain someone a supplement for his absence.My idol miserably failed to do so but managed to provide us with every other basic necessities of life.He wasn't able to fill the empty corner of his absence in our heart but he partially tried to...Yes,he left us a ton of memories,moments to cherish and stuffs that always made us realize him being always with us and him continuously watching us.
Coming back to my maternal family,I was only pleased to see Nanu.He himself also knew the true colors of his other two wards but was very weak to protest or to stand against them as his days were of numbers.Nanu and the rest Tiwari clan then stayed at our mansion.Nanu provided us the shoulder we needed and tried to help us swim out of the deep ocean of grief and sorrow and to my relief he proved to be a great support for Maa.
I thought within three or four days this unwanted clan deducting Nanu would return,but to my utter surprise they had other plans.Two week later all of my cousins also appeared and their arrival made me more furious.Already that unwanted clan were planted here and now their annoying kids.I was having a hard time bearing their presence and a time came when my patience gave away and I vent it all out on Maa...My biggest mistake!
"Maa yeh kya hai...yeh sab yahan say jaa kyun nhi rahay...upar say apnay janon ko bhi yahin bula lea hai mufat ki rotiyan tornay kay leay..yeh humara ghar hai koi anathashram nhi k jis ka dil karay moan utha kar...
"SUMAN!!!..tameez mein raho..kya yahi sanskar dea hain hum nay tumhein k apnay baron ki isi insult karo"
"Sorry maa for being this rude and disrespectful but un baron ko bhi tu is layak hona chahiyay na k un ki izzat ki jay...you know them very well don't you...you are well aware of their nasty intentions...phir bhi app...Maa who yahan dera jamany aay hain naki humaray dukh mein shamil honay"
"I KNOW!!...GET IT..I KNOW THAT...I'm very well aware of that"...saying so she broke down into uncontrollable sobs.I also couldn't stop the stream to flow down my cheeks seeing my only left world crying and breaking this bitterly.
"Ma..m..Maa...I...I'm sorry..please rooiyay nhi please...mein ap say kabhi aisay baat nhi karon gi kabhi nhi chilaon gi...I promise..please"...I begged holding her hands in mine and intently looking her.
"Please Maa mein apko aisay nhi dekh sakti..please chup ho jao..."...saying so I hugged her tightly as if my life depended on her.
A while later both of us calm down and stopped crying.After some time Maa started while I was hugging her torso and she had her hands securely around me,finding peace in each other's embrace.
"I know...I know them...their intentions...but I'm helpless beta...all I have left is them...they are the only family I'm left with.Agar in say bhi moan phair lain gay tu jaein gay kahan...beta yay dunya buhat hi zalim hai hum maa beti ko akela dekh kha jay gi.Tumhary papa humein achi zindagi guzarnay kay leay achi khasi amount aur business chor gay hain..woah business jo un ka khuwab tha aur mein un kay is akhlotay khwab ko miti mein milnay nhi day sakti...Beta mein itni pari likhi nhi aur na hi mjhy mjhy business ki koi smjh hai..aur tum,tum tu abhi buhat chooti ho insab kay leay...tu tuhi bata ye business kon chalaay ga..??"...
"Maa...
"Suman mein nay taay kiya hai ki mein yay business tumharay Mama aur Mausa ji ko sonp don gi!"
"Maa ap yeh...kya bol rahay ho..aisay kaisay ap papa kay sab say keemti dream ko kissi kay bhi hawalay kar sakti ho"
"tu tu hi bata kon sambhalay ga itna bara empire..koi aur hai jis par hum trust kar sakein...soocho zara beta...agar hum un kay is dream ko zindha rakhna chahtay hai tu humein yek kurbani deni hogi..un ki khatir...after all he never quit sacrificing for us so why can't we return him with one."
I was all numb by that time...khanay ko mein buhat chooti thi us time par to be more appropriate just twelve years old...par meray papa nay mjhy itna smjhdar zaroor banaya tha kay mein sahi aur ghalat,sach aur jhoot mein fark kar sakon aur har situation ki intensity ko smjh kar smjhdar logon ki tarha handle kar sakon!
I know that's quite surprising but yes that's the truth.Though he pampered me A lot but along that he always taught me to be a better person,to fight the demons,to face the ups and downs of life bravely and to deal with such crucial situation wisely.He told me...
"Suman...beta you are my Sumo...Sumo wrestler...mu champion!I know you are a smart girl and today what I'm gonna tell you listen to it very carefully and try to understand my point...Sumo ..you will face many things,many ups and downs,many demons,many flaws in your life ahead but all you need to do that time is to be youself and do whatever your heart say is right.Never let anyone take advantage of you...beta mein sari zindagi tumharay sath thuri na rah sakta hoon ek aisa time bhi...
"Nahii papa aisa maat kahiyay..na app mjhy kahein chor kar ja rahay hain na mein apko kahein chor kar jaon gi...smjhy app!"
"Haahahaa...Meri jaan..duniya ki yahi reet hai..har banday ko ek na ek din issy chor kar jana hi hota hai and its unchangeable samjhi!...now listen to me very carefully and try to understand."
I however nodded not liking the ugly thought of him not being beside me throughout my life and all.
"Sumo there'll be some points in life when your decisions would count and your whole life would depend on it...so all I'll suggest you for such a moment is that always try to take a right decision.Remember to close your eyes,take a deep breathe,Remember God Almighty and the person you love the most,make a silent prayer and then choose your decision..."
"There will be times when you might make wrong decisions and make terrible mistakes but the only forgiveness of those mishapes would be that you'll learn from those mistakes and will try not to repeat them...got it!"...and I nodded in obedience after intently listening to each and every word of him.
"Promise me you'll never leave your Maa all alone in my absence and would love her as much as you love me."
"Paa...I promise to be by her side always forever and will take good care of her in your absence but...but can't promise to love her as much as I love you.."...saying so a huge smile found its way on my face..."10% phir bhi kam hi rahay ga..chalay ga na..."...to which he laughed and hugged me lovingly telling me to always remain the same strong and confident one and never to let anyone take advantage of my weaknesses.To which I nodded again before he dropped a kiss on my head and saying
"I love you my princess"
"I love you more..."...he chuckled making me do the same.
This was the very promise we made secretly not telling Maa about it and now was the time to fulfill it and there was no chance I was going to break my promise or leave her alone.So I agreed with her and she informed me that the lawyer would be coming tomorrow to recite the will.
The next day will was disclosed and as expected 90% of his properties etc was equally distributed between me and maa and the remaining 10% was given in charity.
As we decided Maa handed over the responsibility of the entire business to Mama and Mausa to which they denied at first but soon gave in.Their happiness had no bounds and Mami and Mausi's knowing smirk didn't go unnoticed by me but I shrugged it off and so was the case with my cousins above all Nanu being extremely surprised.Later maa confronted him to which he showed his rejection but soon gave in.
As days passed the they started showing their true colors.At first they made me leave my own room and shift with Maa to which I wasn't displeased and later Mami asked Maa to leave the Master bed room and shift in guest room as they were not comfortable there soon Mausi also started ruling over the kitchen and with that a time came when they threw us out of that guest room too and lastly we landed in a store room.All the time I tried to protest but Maa made me shup up saying they are handling the business for us and we should be thankful to them and provide the comfort they needed.Maa used to do all the home courses,they even kicked out the maid and made Maa do everything from cooking to cleaning from dusting to arranging.My anger had no boundries and so in confronted Mami and Mausi.
"Mami ji jab hum ek maid afford kar saktay hain tu Maa say kyun kaam karati hain ap log...and If you don't want to hire a maide then atleast help her with the task as she's not the only one living here...plus it's her house"..i snapped at her.
"Ghar bhalay uska ho par chala humaray Pati rahay hain aur waisay bhi sara din tu ek kamray mein pari rahti hai issi bahanay iska dil bhi laga rhta hai..aur jaan lo ab is ghar ki bhaag dorr humaray hatoon mein hai tu hum jaisa chahein gay waisa hi hoga..smjhi"
"jiss business par ap itna haq jama rhi hain who mere Papa ka hai yeh na bholiyay"
"hai nhi tha...tumhari maa nay kal hi yeh sab humaray naam kar dea"
And this was it.The whole world around me was spinning and I just couldn't believe my ears.
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Tadaa!!
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