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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: LubSha

Res. Just read up to the accident and I'm crying.. Will unress after reading the whole chapter.


waiting!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Suniii ( I got u a Nick name 😛)

Awwh...Thank you..I loved it!😳

This was sooo emotional😭

Kya Mila tujhe bachi ko rula k???

I was crying so hell bad
😆😆..Sweet heart me myself was crying like a mad person while i was writing it!..so feelings are mutual.😆

But that was soo beautifully penned 👏👏👏

Hats off to you girl
Thank you!😳

Is baar jaldi update kar ke please humare upper meherbaani karna😆😆
Umm..actually na my Uni just started and my scheduel thex days is just messed up so cant really promise to update soon but will try to!😳

Looottsss of love
Dolly😊

Love you too Dolly!
Thanks a ton for such a sweeto comment!
M glad you liked it!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Sunain


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">Love you too Nicky Pie...and a beary one for you too🤗..for such a lovely comment!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">I just couldnt stop smiling after reading ur comment..its so lovely!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">Thank you so much for such a wonderful apreciation!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">Ur words means A lot!</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000cc">M ao glad u liked it!😳</font>


Nicky Pie...
I dont like it...I loved it..!!
Thanks Nainu... 😳
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Flashback was really so emotional & same time irritating!.
Whole Tiwari clan made Sumo & her mother maid of their own house... It's ridiculous... These Mami & all of them are getting on nerves... @ this rate they will become beggars one day...

Next will be Shraman's encounter it will be interesting...

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: LubSha

Res. Just read up to the accident and I'm crying.. Will unress after reading the whole chapter.


Unress.

Hey Sunain,

What an emotional chapter, cried a lot which tells how much I was into the story. The talk between Suman and his Dad was heart touching. You got them alive in your story. I was feeling her pain and agony.

Just in 12 years of age losing someone so close to you whose world revolves you is disastrous, I can relate to her I lost my Mom when I was 12. It's really hard, suddenly your life changes. And I felt Sumo's pain in your writing.

At that age you understand everything but still can't do anything, you described that really well, she wanted to stop her Mom, knowing it was not a good idea to away the business to them, but wasn't able to do so. And I really hate those kind of mean people, they took over everything. I hope when she grows up there is something she could do to get everything back.

Now after reading this the Sumo's pain in the first chapter makes more sense.
Excited for her first meeting with Shravan. Sorry no emojis today, it was way more heart touching than any emoji can express.

Much love to my Teddy Bear,

Lubna.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
UNRESSED on 6...sorry for being late Jellybean.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
oh man...!!!
these 2 parts were way to emotional... suman wheelchair 😕

heartbreaking 😭 😭 😭 😭

but you write really well darling... i didnt know you had the capability to write so beautifully 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

well done bro 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Flashback was really so emotional & same time irritating!.

Whole Tiwari clan made Sumo & her mother maid of their own house... It's ridiculous... These Mami & all of them are getting on nerves... @ this rate they will become beggars one day...

Next will be Shraman's encounter it will be interesting...

Vinu


Thank you so much Vinu!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: LubSha


Unress.

Hey Sunain,
Hii Lub,

What an emotional chapter, cried a lot which tells how much I was into the story. The talk between Suman and his Dad was heart touching. You got them alive in your story. I was feeling her pain and agony.
Even i cired like a maniac while i was writing it!Suman n her Dad's convo is my fav part.Thank you so much Lub...m so overwhelmed to knw u were deep into my story!

Just in 12 years of age losing someone so close to you whose world revolves you is disastrous, I can relate to her I lost my Mom when I was 12. It's really hard, suddenly your life changes. And I felt Sumo's pain in your writing.
I knw i can understand tht too...so soory to hear about ur Loss(may her soul rest in peace)... i knw how it feels when ur Mom is not around u to pamper u and take care of u..Maa ki kami aisi kami hoti hai jo koi bhi pori nhi kar sakta..not even Dad...its like there are things situations only Mom can solve and daughter can share with..Maa kay sath bonding hi kuch alag si hoti hai..m sorry m being emotional..sorry...

At that age you understand everything but still can't do anything, you described that really well, she wanted to stop her Mom, knowing it was not a good idea to away the business to them, but wasn't able to do so. And I really hate those kind of mean people, they took over everything. I hope when she grows up there is something she could do to get everything back.
So true!...its like not everything is in our hands...so going with the flow is much better thn aganist it...Yeah i also hate thoz mean people...U'll get to knw Suman's nature more in the upcoming parts n along with tht her revenge intensity too...so u can decide thn n do tell me did she did the rite thing...abhi uss part mein thora time hai but mentally all planned n m sure u'll love it.

Now after reading this the Sumo's pain in the first chapter makes more sense.
Excited for her first meeting with Shravan. Sorry no emojis today, it was way more heart touching than any emoji can express.
I can understand...

Much love to my Teddy Bear,

Lubna.

Thank you so much lub for such a detailed and wonderful comment!...m so overwhelmed to knw u liked it so much n reading ur comment again n again and just loved it.
You urself are a great commenter😉
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment...m glad u liked it!
Love you too Dear!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: evaviego

oh man...!!!

these 2 parts were way to emotional... suman wheelchair 😕

heartbreaking 😭 😭 😭 😭

but you write really well darling... i didnt know you had the capability to write so beautifully 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

well done bro 👏


Thank you soo much!😃
M so glad finally u read it n more over liked it😳
Love you dear🤗

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