Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 31

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing piya... Loved it... it's getting more Nd more interesting as we all were thinking about shraman Nd Adi but u turned it totally by introducing vidhi... continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wow wow yaar mja aa Gaya awesome update.. Eagerly waiting for next update..plz update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey, you are such a wonderful writer that I am unable to take on the fact that this chapter has ended so soon!!!! I wanted to read more... Anyway, eagerly waiting for the next update!!!! Please continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
An awesome update. Liked it a lot. Plz update soon. Plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanx for PM...😊
no words...
amazing...
beautifully penned...
... ShraMan...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb finally trip start and bcz of video entry it become more interesting and now sumo or bhi jealous hogi h cute lagegi
And thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
haye.plz no rulawat b/w sharavan... let them married.peacefully
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it.one of the best things is that there is no negative character here. And caring shravan is so cute.sumo is kinda crybaby but I guess she turns romantic soon.
Coming to this chapter shraman moments r sooo nice. waiting for sumo to confess her love for him.w waiting for beach romance.
Plz update soon as u always do and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
I was sooo waiting for this! Outstanding update...i hope Suman confess soon.. And this vidhi..chipku... 🤢. Loved every bit of it. Update soon... Already waiting for next one. N thank for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
😳 piyaaa...excellent update yaar...shravan's proposal, his dialogues, sumo's reaction, her fumbling...his actions ...everything was bang on. I can't point anything particular.as my favourite.
Sumo couldn't speak, because of unexpected ramnath's entry...hahhaha...Suspense continues...

Shravan is having fun while sumo is struggling to explain ramnath...😛 Sumo's monologue 👏 "Bhagwan ji tume isse sharam naam ki koi cheez dii bhii hai ya nahi.." very funny
Shravan sumo are doing running race in the corridor or what ??? it was sooo cute.😆😆

Again shravan caught her to answer. Good thing is she shared her fear about his parents decision and shravan too, on the spot cleared that they wish to make her their Bahu (she also read Nirmal's msg ...double confirmation)...Applause to you yaar...I like it there is no messing up things.

Again, sumo escaped from replying because of Pushkar's call...Suspense continues again...

Ramnath is truely intelligent, straight he caught the point what is going on between the duo...wow...
Sumo confessed to herself at least...truly a development from her side.
Sumo is cute, she kept alarm for shravan and ran away...😉

Aditya's entry...shravan jealous...I thought we are gonna see jealous shravan throughout their journey, but no...twist...it turned to be jealous sumo...wah wah...👏

Vidhi started liking shravan...ohooo...but i see she also sensed that there is something between them...
so sumo revealed abt adi and his GF so no more jealous shravan huh ?! am happy and sad both😛 jealous shravan is treat to watch u know...but thats fine...we can manage😉

Again, sumo escaped from replying because of adi vidhi's return to car...Suspense continues again...again...

See how you brilliantly u managed without sumo's answer for the whole chapter...Good writing yaar...if she just admitted then there wont be anything interesting na...story will be over...No...we don't want this to end sooon...Please bring as many sweet twists as possible, so that we can continue enjoying the story.

As you said, waiting for beach romance eagerly very very eagerly

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