I m a silent reader of this forum..
I must say we have got some marvellous writers over here
This is my first shraman ff
This is a pure love story .. There will be no negetive character.. But some times they can turned as grey one but thts the human nature..
Plzz igoner the grammatical mistakes
HUM TUM
It has been a long journey for her.. She is literally having a back achhe..but the thoughts of meeting them after 2 weeks is so nice that she started humming hindi songs while carrying her backpack ..
The bus just dropped her 300 mtrs away from her home.. Yes this is her home from last 9 yrs.. After her mama mami left india wid her nanu..
As she entered the main gate the watch man greeted her " happy chhoti diwali bitiya"
"Happy chhoti diwali manohar kaka " she wished him back with a mesmerising smile.
"Aap ne bataya hota to hum aapko lene ke liye aa jate bitiya" manohar said
"Koi nahi kaka " she replied back n entered the garder..
The diwali preperation was going on full swing n lalaji was taking care of this.. Facing his back on sumo he screamed to the person in front of him " oye khoteya in lights ko kya diwali ke baad lagayega?? Tere hisab se chale to diwali party mein torchlight leke ghumna padega.. Chal chheti chheti kar"
Sumo tiptoes towards lalaji n put her hands on his eyes from behind n says " humare lalaji ke hote huye diwali mein roshnai nahin?? Aisa bhala ho sakta hai kabhi"
Lalaji grinned his teeth n replied " humari sumo jis ghar mein ho us ghar mein toh har roz diwali hai.."
Sumo touched his feet n take blessing..
After having a mini talk regarding her trip she headed toward the main entrance of malhotra house..
Nirmala was giving instructions to kamal one of the servant regarding the party they r having on nxt day when she saw sumo..
"Aa gayi meri ladli?? But tu to shaam ko aanewali thi... Achha huya jaldi aa gayi.." Nirmala said
"Ekdam sahi kaha apne jiji sumo ke bina ghar kitna suna suna lag raha tha.. Seriously varun pushkar ka hona ya na hona same hai.. Thank god humare paas sumo hai warna hardin kitna boring hota.har parivaar mein aisi ek ladki hona chahiye."Joined kamini while checking on her recently manicured nails.
Sumo took their blessings. She hugged kamini n repiled "aur har ghar mein aap dono ke jaisa ek badi maa aur ek chhoti maa hona chahiye."
"Chal jaa fresh ho ja tab tak tere liye breakfast laga deti huun" ordered nirmala n headed towards the kitchen wid kamini..
Suman nodded n headed towards her room when she felt a tug on her arm ..
Someone just pulled her n she gasped loudly "
pushkarrr "
He just took sumo inside his room n locked the door behind he is having a smirk on his eye..
Suman raised her eyebrows in a confused look ans asked " ab kaunsa kand kiya tune?"
Inspite of giving her reply he smiled naughtily ..
"Ab bole ga bhi kuchh mounibaba??"
Suman is feeling tht something is there pushkar wants to share wid her but he is playing games..
He just opened her mouth to say something When someone knocked the door . Pushkar opened the door n found varun outside checking on his phone . He raised his eyes towards pushkar n found suman standing behind him..
Suddenly there was a smile on his face he asked her "arre tu kab ayi?? Tu to shaam ko anewaali thi"?. Pushing pushkar aside he stepped inside his room " how was your trip? Sab thik tha?? Thaki huyi lag rahi hai..tabiyat to thik hai na teri? Aur pushkar tu phir se ise pareshaan kar raha hai?? Let take rest ."
"Varun bhaiya main bilkul theek hunn.. Aur amin aap logo ko surprise dena chahti hi isliye jaldi aa gayi" sumo gave a side hug to varun ..
"Bhaiya main bhi yahaan hun mera bhi kabhi haal chaal pooch liya karo.. Iss sumo ki bachhi ke wajay se mera koi value hi nahin hai is ghar mein.. Jise dekho sirf suman suman.. " said puskar looking at sumo..
Oye chup kar aur tu yahan kya kar raha hai ?? Maine tujhe bola tha na ke hume 10 baje tak nikalna hai.. Otherwise late ho jayega.. Ab chal " varun take pushakr along wid him ..
While going out pushkAr wink at her n smiled which made sumo more confused..
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She just put her backpack on her bed n lay down .. She missed her room .. This is her small world.. She was just 5 yrs old when for the first time she came malhotra house wid her parents to visit her mom n dads best frnd ramnath uncle n nirmala malhotra.. Her "bade papa" n "badi maa" .. She still remember how her bade papa took her into his lap n told priya n mahesh tiwari tht how he wished he could also have a daughter like her..all day she played wid pushkar who has become her best frnd on that particular day.. N varun bhaiya who wad taking care of her like a big brother.. Kamini chachi was telling her mother how their house has become a boy's hostel wid 3 boys.. She wished for a girl when she was pregnant for the 2nd time..
She took the photo of her mom n dad from her bed side table. A lone tear escape from her eyes " happy chhoti diwali mumma papa" she murmured.
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After having a hot shower she dressed up in a baby pink floral sleevless churidar .. She was looking like a fresh flower ..
After returning to the living area he saw ramnath malhotra sitting at the dinning area wid a file on his hand n having breakfast while his eyes are fixed on the file.. Sumo reached him n took his blessing.
She took the file from his hand n gave a angry look towards him .. Before she uttered a word ramnath said.. "Sorry sorry plzz abi daantna mat"..
Nirmala n kamini came wid parathas. Sabz
"Dekh tu kichh din ke like bahar kya gayi thi aur tere bade papa apni marzi chalane lage..har time sirf kaam aur kaam" nirmala said
"Ab main a gayi huu na.. Aap bikool chinta mat kijiye badi maa" Suman replied
"Haa yeh gal bilkul sahi hai .. Suman tu aise jaya mat kar .. Tu chali gayi thi to ghar suna suna ho gaya tha" lalaji joined
"Aap log bhi na suman apni doston ke saath kuchh din ke liye ghumne chali gayi to kya huya?? Yehi to umar hai.. Kyun puttar ji?" Kamini said
"Achha pushkar aur varun nikal gaye time pe? Kahin wo dono laye na ho jaye. Koi ph kiya un dono ko?" Asked ramnath
Nahi bhaisab wo log to kab ka nikal gaye ab tak pouch bhi gaya hoga..
Suman was giving a confused look
"pushkar aur varun bhaiya kahan gaye chhoti maa??" Suman asked while putting jam on her toast
"Lo kar lo baat kisine humari laadli ko bataya nahin ke aj saalon baad ghar mein koi wapas aa raha hain??" Lalaji spoke with a huge smile on his face
"Kaun??"
"Shravan wapas aa raha hain.. Saalon baad pura malhotra family saath mein diwali manayege kyoun bhaisab??"
Before anyone replied they heard a clang sound n noticed tht the knofe suman was using to put jam on her bread has slipped on the floor..
"Sorry " suman said while picking it up..
Nirmala n ramnath shared a look
He is comming back .. Ohh god nooo .. Bhagwan jii whyyy Do U want to spoil my diwali ...
After spending so many years alone in abroad why achanak he wants to spend this diwali here..
Ohhh god plzz save me from tht khadoos..
"Jiji suman to shravan ko pehchhan bhi nahi payegi..shravan ne uski photo bhi jo nahi bheja.. Suman facebook mein uska photo hai?? Tune dekha.. Jiji aap log bhi na last time jab london gaye the tab uska photo leke aana chahiye tha na.. Kya aap log bhi .. Last time use dekha tha jab 5 saal pehle aya tha.. Wo bhi sirf two weeks ke liye .. Haina??" Kamini's word broke her thoughts..
"Badi maa mujhe pct jana padega.. 2 weeks se nahin gayi na.. Main chalti huun" sumo suddenly spoke..
But beta aj to chhutti hai.. Aur kal bhi .. Itne dino baad shravan a raha hai tu bina mile chali jayegi?? Kamini asked her giving a surprised look
"Aisi baat nahin chhoti maa.. Thoda kaam hain plzz main jaldi aa jayungi.. " sumo said hurriedly holding kamini's hand
Ramnath was trying to hide his smile while nirmala said " ok ja. But jaldi wapas ana zyada intezaar mat karwana.. "
"Jee badi maa"
Sumo rushed towards the main door..
"Start ho jaa meri jaan.. Aj mujhe dhoka mat de" sumo was talikng to her ambassador which was not making any response.. She just stepped out n headed towards the road for an auto..
When she was about to step inside the auto she saw pushkar's black honda city was coming towards her.. Before wasting a single second she stepped inside ..
"Khadoos aa gaya" she murmured to herself
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