Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 29

Originally posted by: sumi017

Again yoi have done this Priya.. Ain waqt pe rok liya..its like jist happening in our tellyworld. I don't know what is your profession is...but you are an amazing writer. Each and every dialogue of yours are 100%,apt for the situation.

Thank you so much...hope to see the next update soon

Originally posted by: Sweetheart645

I was waiting for your update... I just came across your story yesterday and read all the chapters... The story is amazingly written and refreshing... all the characters specially shravan, sumo, ramnath, nirmala nd pushkar-all are lovely nd beautifully described... Thnx fr d pm nd do continue soon

Originally posted by: Sweetheart645

I was waiting for your update... I just came across your story yesterday and read all the chapters... The story is amazingly written and refreshing... all the characters specially shravan, sumo, ramnath, nirmala nd pushkar-all are lovely nd beautifully described... Thnx fr d pm nd do continue soon

Originally posted by: Sb1185

Kuch bhi... Ayaiin vayaiin... Aise kaun karta hai. 😡..cliff hanger. .. Was about to bang my head with frustration! Update soon...already waiting badly! loved the chapter though! 😳

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing...I just can't stop laughing at sumo's answer that Kamal ji Nd Bahadur kaka love her else from the family...shravan is getting jealous of adi.so their trip is definitely gonna be eventful...also half confession by shravan is spellbinding.. continue soon

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

It was mind-blowing 👏.
I can't express my happiness when I see your PM.
My heart beat is raised up too high to read ShraMan moments.
OMG finally Shravan confessed his love for Sumo.How will she react?
"Kamal jiii aur bahadur kaka???????"that part was so funny and disappointed too...😆
I am so excited for the next part.
Thank you so much for the lovely updates.
Continue soon dear..🤗

Originally posted by: dhanyata

😃 Beautiful wednesday, Guess why, i got an update here ...😳

What ??? come again ?? kamalji and bahadur kaka ?? you, crazy...piya ? this reply is ... Oh my God !!! 😆😆 how did u manage to think this way...can this be more perfect to extend their lukachupi game for some more time ? Hatsoff !!

Ok now, nirmala also in the game, she got to know shravan's feelings as well. Superb...I liked her choice of Gift !! bahuuu 😳

Shravan is so lost in sumo and his blushings that he didn't realise sumo didn't buy anything for her. I felt bad for her. she couldn't get out of that hatred words shravan spilled on her😭 what will she do when she gets to know the gift shravan bought her from London !😉

I love Overprotective shravan👍🏼 at the train, at the party...shravan being all naughty.🤪

Shravan's mentor !! so to him he was talking about suman at the meeting...he stole shravan's chance to dance with sumo...ha ha ha 😆

Finally Adi is here. am feeling little okay because you told he is not dangerous. So i relaxed and enjoyed jealous shravan😉 (what is that adi telling sumo to think about, just curious like shravan)

Here and there shravan was indicating his changed attidute , he called her family, he is being sweet with her, but still this stupid girl didn't understand ( not her mistake though)...finally he CONFESSED😲🥳

Wow ... all the dialogues !! kal thak whatever she thought he did...kal thak whatever he thought he didn't realize...I just LOVE LOVE LOVE them all.👏

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Again, cliff hanger, friend...what would be her reply...I know something exciting just like "bahadur kaka"😛...

Now that she knew his feelings, how would she handle any shravan and adi tashn ...yayay ... Eagerly waiting for the beach romance,...

Originally posted by: mariajamal

awesome... m at office ryt nw but cant wait till evening so just read the updated part ... finally sharavan confess his love... now hope suman will accept it and they got married without any huddles ... just love sharman ... after arnav and khushi I like this couple sooo much ... hope they will come back with dhamakaydar story

Originally posted by: vimikrao

What yaar cliffhanger...

I was sitting on edge of the couch & reading ... & written to be continued... I was waiting for his confession uff ... I Have to wait for next chap... 😳

I liked their beach romance... Hugging each other... Sumo playing with waves... Shravan ka naughty nazar kahan kahan ja raha tha... Uff this man... 😉

Sumo still didn't forget what Shravan's words that she is outsider... Munda maafi manga fir bhi Sumo couldn't forget poor baby... 😭

Aditya's entry bang bang... 🥳

Sharmana khatam huwa to chalein... Ufff jealousy just spoke... 😡

I liked Nirmala ho sake to mere liye bahu leke aana... 😉

Shravan's confession... Kyounki kal tak mein tum se pyaar nehin kar tha tha... 🤪 pyaar to tha

hamesha se lekin ehsaas kal huwa kutub minar ko...

Will Sumo accept his proposal... I hope Shravan will make her realise that she also love him... ❤️

Update next part soon

Originally posted by: Amisha.r

Amazing!!
Love confession from shravan side wow!!!!
"Mujhse door nahin jana kahan tha na maine...superb shravan or tum use door jane bhi nhi doge ...right
Or ho sake to mere liye bahu leke aana ohhh aj pehli bar muje nirmala achi lag rhi h
🤗
And the moment of the day the love confession of shravan Kyun ki kal tak main tumse pyaar nahi karta tha u stupid
Thank God shravan ne to apna piyar confess kr dia show ki tarah to nhi
Ab bas sumo ko bhi ehsaas ho jae
Plz try to update soon