Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144

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sumi017

@sumi017

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Posted: 8 years ago

#311

Nice build up Piya.. So we can get the jealous Suman now..How I wished for such a track in our series. But that never happened.

I am sure you are going to complete my wish.. So u were in to fashion industry. I have alwaya noted your dress choice s which is so apt for Nimik and was always helping me to visualize them as characters

Thank u once again for the wonderful story

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#312

Awesome update dear...
Jealous factor always interesting..
Continue soon

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#313

Shravan dialogues were super Matlab yeh 6ft 4inch ka admi ab gaya kaam se... Iska kuch nehin ho sakta... Ab tumhare hawale Shravan sathiyon... Mein karu iss karu iska... Yeh Shravan itna cute kyoun hai... & Sumo is fumbling... Woh ... Mein ... Woh... 🤣

When 2 birds are chirping... Wrong entry of Ramnath... & Sumo couldn't tell her feelings... Again Shravan tried her to confess love... Again kabab mein haddi Pushkar's call he wanted kill that person... Pushkar tuje aur koi time nehin mila call karne ke liye... Aur mumma ko bol jo unhone gift mangi this woh abhi abhi mila unke liye... Sumo ran away & he made her blushing... 😉

Sumo got double confirmation when she saw Nirmala msgs on Shravan's mob... & Ramnath also told her that Shravan ne jo bhi kaha usse ke bare mein sochna zaroor...

Aditya ... I thought u will bring love triangle but no be loves someone else... So relieved... 🤪

Sumo was so jealous"" jao ab mein khoun jao us adi ungrezi ladki ki pass usse kissiya lete raho... Uff jealousy @ peak... 🥳

Shravan also not behind from teasing jaldi bolo varna Vidhi ake phir se mujhe kiss karthi hai mein bala kab tak uski hotness se apne aapko bachao... 🤣

And he avoided sitting beside Vidhi... That he knows Sumo will feel bad & he gave excuse of Sumo that if sit beside window side Sumo will get direct sunlight & her its not good for her headache so cute he is... He is already protective... ❤️

Nice update yaar u can see from my comments how much I liked it...👏

Update soon

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#314

Hi Piya,

Firstly thanks for the PM. Next I would like to say that your username is crazypiya but I think Piya is making everyone go crazy. Thumps up. Love every update. Have read every update 2-3 times still get feels every time. I'm a silent reader till now, but I'll be more responsive now.

You give the characters such beautiful dialogues, simple yet relatable. I think that's your USP. Keep going, can't wait for 2 days for update, but I think you need that much to finally give us another awesome update. So no complains.

❤️

Lubna

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#315

awesome update

totally brilliant

continue soon

superb

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#316

Hi Priya
Thanks for PM
Read both part 10 & 11 in one go
Only one word to say
SUPERB SUPERB SUPERB
Really love your writing
Shravan is in full romantic mode and now
treat to watch jealous sumo

Can't wait for next update
Update soon

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#317

These are all the moments we badly missed in EDKV! Kash yeh sab hamari show mein dikhne ko mila hotha😭

I became a big fan of yours! Every line was beautiful👏

Update it soon!

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milo12345

@milo12345

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#318

very nice yar...plzzz continue. ...upadte fast cant wait

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Sithara

@Sithara.Soman

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#319

Hi Piya,
I am falling in love with ur skills.
Each and every part was so Perfect.
Whenever I started to read ur story my heartbeet was raised up too high.
I don't know how many times I have read ur story.
I am always waiting for ur updations greedily.
ShraMan's possessive part was too good.
No negative roles wow!!! sounds good.
Ramnath's wrong time entry 😡
Sumo's blushes and speechless parts😉
Shravan's romance,care and teasing was wowww 👏
I can't get any Paucity in ur story.
Perfect perfect perfect
I am eagerly waiting for next beach part...
Plz update soon dear 🤗

Edited by Sithara.Soman - 8 years ago

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trayee biswas

@trayee

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#320

piya...piya...piya...!!!!!!

each & every dialogue ...concept..emotion on the perfct place..indian tv needs a writter..no no...sprv tlntd writer lyk u...u r jst bliss...this story gives our shraman new lyf..take a bow..

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