Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 33

Just waiting for the next update. Have checked IF from morning. Cant wait to read the story.

piya thanks a lot dear for loving my analysis...m too happy that my each n every word means a lot to u :) n ur such lovely replies means a lot to me dear... thanks for the pm pehle to...:) ab tu hi bta Mai kya karu tera .. yar ur going to be the death of me :-p itni achi ff how could u write?? yar I just love u for this...a big tight hug for u darling.. :) :* from the beginning to end I was jumping in happiness...yay...n thanks a lot adi chapter clear krne k lie n for the assurance that vidhi chapter will also not create any havoc...aww that's so so sweet of u :) ab about chapter...namik k fvrt songs God they're my fvrt songs ...all four songs love them a lot ..n my fvrt song has become piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya. ,subh sham kare mera jiya piya piya piya piya :* now a days... starting m how sumo was numb ...lol...funny it was n how she was trying to put altogether his words that actually banda bolna kya chahra hai...rofl...fr how she shook her head pyar ni krta tha kl tk ...means ajse ..n how he asked her pyar ni krti n sumo ki to awaz hi ni nikalri thi ...hilarious n kaise sumo wrestler se bhigi billi she'd become n ni krti pyar Jane do n finally kiss ...omg.. itni easily you brought up that...amazing..n shravu ka dialog ab tmhare hawale shravan sathiyo n ye 6'4" shravu gya ...amazing dialogs they were...n then arrhhh ramu kitni buri timing hai...n sumo ko kaise shravu bola tmhari halat ni gate kholne ki tm jao Mai dekhta...lol...n fr how he was making excuses like Mai London call p tha ...sumo bathroom m hogi ya so ri hogi ...n was calling out her name...n then pale faced sumo...how shravu was teasing her bolo sumo answer kro papa ko...such a naughty Guy...n jaw dropped sumo...besharm hai ..hey bhagwan God lol...n then coffee mere lie v bnana n in kitchen how he again blocked her way n bechari vo milk...rofl...n then room m phuchana .. scared to hell she was to even go near him...n then ramu carefully asked tm thk ho na...n then sumo in shravu ka room how shravu was pacing impatiently n sumo how she ran ki sona hai...lol n how he took advantage of his qutub minar height n dragged her to her room n thanks God sumo blurred out her dilemma ki bade papa badi maa kya sochnge n her dialogs touched my heart dear...n how shravu made her understood that why everyone never let her wish him bhaidooj n rakhi ...n why his parents doesn't want her to leave them ever ...n the realization made sumo wide eyed...n again pushkie wring timing.. n how shravu said ki maa ko bolna Jo gift manga tha unhone av mil gya n his smile...wow...n shravu ka dialog itne saalo se lawyer k sth ho but dimag ghutno me h...lol... n next morning how ramu asked sumo wats wrong?? n I'm a lawyer...n sumo ka mind talk hilarious...n then ramu caught ya...n then how he asked her to think once n blushing sumo...wow.. n how she refused to wake him up but fr gyi khud ...dramaqueen...n then how a smile crept her face n nirmu ka msg wat a timing nirmu kaki ...jaldi aaja beti ko bahu banane k lie mana lia ...yieeppeee ..n alarm k bad suddenly shravu realised he hadn't set that n then realised who must be behind this... n then how he was looking here n there for her fr adi ka name sunte hi how he became angry n sumo to just know how to lower her eyes...n then shravu ka sarcasm m not late n I'll sit in front...n how jhumpa said hm jaise buddho k sth a baithega...good aunty ji ...;) n then vidhi ate k sath started flirting with shravu ...hugged him was okay but kissed...how dare she n jealous sumo n smirking shravu...lol.. I was like ye bhai bahan ko koi kam ni h kya hmare shraman ko why the hell don't they leave ... n then tigress sumo q shravu aage hi baithega adi k sth ...vidhi ka to muh bna hoga ... n then how they both excused ki they won't go n then shraman talk...how careful he got n sumo just spilled her heart out...usne kiss kia n shravu ka reply Mai hoon kon tmhara n then she started crying n then shravu v kaise tm adi k sth n sumo was like Chi tmhe lga Mai or adi ...Mai tips de ri thi ...Daphne is his gf (thanks God his chapter is closed...love u for this piya) ...n she was like tmhe lg v kaise skta Mai kisi or k sth n shravu to kiske sth jldi bolo warna kbtk khudko bacha paunga uske hotness se ya vo fr se kiss kare bolo ...arrghhh but they came...huh...n then how innocently shravu replied thought to give u some space with gf n vidhi ko sumo will sit in middle you sit that side...hihihi...funny he's...n how he asked her to sleep in his arms n she complied n then how she was smiling near her chest...so lovely...n confused vidhi friends se zyada hai kya bhai v kch zyada mante ...well ha vidhi sumo is future Mrs shravan malhotra ;) so no need to flirt with shravu...he wont give a shit to u dear :-p loved it piya ...n ha beach romance...Australia m n no beach romance...not good na. .I know you'll bring it up in next part.. waiting anxiously for next part dear...muuaahhh for this :)

Piya justvloved all the last three parts...read in a go...good no negative character...waiting for beach romance

your have express very nicely the story. and I really liked it the last part of the story.

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

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Sry for unressing late...#latelatif me

Piya...👏I juz love you...finally lamba update mila...Shravan confession..❤️Matlab yeh 6 ft 4" ka admi ab gaya kaam se.. Ab iska kuchh nahi ho sakta.. Ab tumahare hawale shravan sathiothat cracked me up like mad...🤣that was juz beautiful...Shravan usse kitne pyaar se confess karva raha tha yaar...Par Ramu kaka bhi na...HAmesha galat waqt par entry marte hai...hamesha...pura scene spoil kar diya😡Songs choice was amazing...they are my fav...toh reading mey aur maza aaya😳Jalkukdi sumo...that was so cute...❤️Jao na us adhi angrez ke paas jao...Jab usse kissiya le rehete tab kahan gaya kal ki dialogue??🤣 kash ye sumo show mey dekhne ko milti...😭
All in all in was a amazing update or we can say Shramanliciously delicious in @sunain way...
juz loved it to core ...update soon...thanx for the pm..😊

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Hiii Piya.!!!...finally unressing on time...sowii i hope u r not mad at me...plz dont be.😔
M really sorry yar...plzz..maaf kardo..bacha hi smjh kar maafi day do*puppy eyes*
chalo ab kaan bhi pakar leay n situps bhi...poray 10..ab tu sorry lay lo😳
Hope ab tu maafi mil jaay gi..

Coming to upii...
It was Shramanliciously delicious😳...maza agaya.!!
Shravan's love confession was dhamakaydar...mein tu khushi say phulay nhi sama rhi thi..
thoz songs❤️...apt choice...loved it to core.
Suman kay tu hoosh hi urr gaay...she cudnt believe her ears..for her this was nxt to impossible.but now hearing his confession she was awestruk...

Flirty Shravan...❤️...made me love him more n more...agar sumo nay haan nhi bola tu mein aura laa jaon gi Shravan ko..n thts final😳
Sumo shram say lal tamatar ho gae...tamatar bhi us kay agay pheeka lag raha ho ga tht time..😃
He was continously asking her to say thoz 3 magical words..he was dying to hear her side but she..bhudu kahein ki..nahi boli..Shravan nay saray douts bhi clear kar dea magar nhi madam ko sharmanay say fursat milay tab ba.

Thoz lovey dovey moments aawwhh.. was lovely..the way he described her predicament in his presence wss
fantastic... [I]beeautifully penned[I]

OMG!!!!OMG!!!! Was tht a kiss???? Or just a peck????..jo bhi ho..tht just made me jump on my bed in joy[:D/]...sheer pleasure yarr sheer pleasure😳...hoping for a proper kiss really soon..Pakka??

Kya yar...Ram ko bhi abhi ana tha.
issay tu kabab mein haddi ka award milna chahiyay..saray intimate scene ki band baja di😔
Whn sumo was heading to open the door he stoped her saying k shez not n such state to open the door..haawwh abhi tu kuch kiya bhi nhi aur Sumo ki yaa halat...kuch karay ga tu madam tu totally gae kam say😳😉

Shravan...the great lawyer turned into a liar😆...londen call...[ROFL]
Haawwhh...Shravan was teasing her infront of Ram...Naughty haan..bechari sumo..koi kasar nhi chori us bechari ko concious karnay ki..poor Baby ...Sumo ki sari Sumoness hawa ho gae😆
Shravan ka most imp case aur jeetnay kay leay Sumo chahiyay[ROFL]...This guy is just mindblowing😆

She refused to enter his room as she was wel aware bout his naughty ideas..but he burdged into her room...told her bout his parents which increasing her amusement...uskay bawajod usnay apnay dil ka izhar nhi kiya..stupid girl...

Yar yaa sab ko enki lovestory kay array ana ka koi obsession hai..jis ko dekho kabab mein hadi banay ko tyaar bhata hai..yaa Malhotra's enki lovestory agay barhnay hi nahi dein gay...hamesh beech mein kud jatay hain..Pushkar this time..
Piya nxt time tie thm up..all of thm takay koi Shraman kay beech na asakay.

Bade Papa got cheel baz nazar😆...Sumo ki sumoness puray jahan mein chal sakti hai except Shravan.Agar show mein hoti tu Shravan ki bolti tu Sumo kay samnay khulti hi nahi..teasing tu buhat door ki baat hai aur Sumo ki Sumogiri peak par hoti.

Sumo read Nirmala's msg..woah..Shravan realised she was here which made a smile appear on his face.
Shravan ki nazrwin jissay talash kar rhi hain woh madam tu Adi ko tips denay mein busy hain😆...Shravan tu jealousy say lal tamatar ho gaya ho ga..Woah tht Vidhi seems soo soo soo much fun😆...Finally koi tu aya Sumo ko jealous feel karanay..one thing i badly missed in EDKV😔
Party tu ab shuru hoi hai...

Woah Sumo burstup at Shravan..tht was fantastic n cute..her anger.
amazing..their car convo ❤️...Finally their MUs got cleared..Adi has a GF..yaay..now i like him😛
Shravan told Vidhi to sit on the other side just for Sumo..awwhh
She slept on his shoulder while he himself holding her protectively..she was sleeping peacefully..
Shravan said [I]"main haun"[I]...just madr her more comfy..awwhh
Woah Vidhi is intrested in Shravan..Nooo..
Cant wait to knw wht happens nxt specially eagerly waiting for Beach romance😳

All in all Piya u did a stupendous job..as always😉
Love u lots n lots of mucj🤗

Hy i hav a sugesstion of two songs...1 Ore piya from ajaa nachle n 2 Hasi from hamari adhoori kahani..
thy r perfect for Shraman..if u feel okay so u can add thm too..just a sugesstion😉
Love ya.
Take care❤️

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Wow Great update

ur an amazing writer

keep it up the good work

thank you👏

Originally posted by: cdshah

piya you are amazing writer... luvd each and every part and its gud that you hadnt stretches beach part cz this one is way more beautiful!!! thank you so muchh for thisss

Originally posted by: Safire

Hey, you are such a wonderful writer that I am unable to take on the fact that this chapter has ended so soon!!!! I wanted to read more... Anyway, eagerly waiting for the next update!!!! Please continue soon!!!!

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Superb finally trip start and bcz of video entry it become more interesting and now sumo or bhi jealous hogi h cute lagegi

And thanks for pm