Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 30

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

😭 last me to rule hi diya bilkul...

That kal tak thing killed me😭
Kaha se sikha itna acha likhana???
This was way tooo too gud ..
You leave me speechless after every part..
And half confession??😆😆 ha ha something new to hear..but liked it..hope you complete it in the next part..
Good going girl...
Hope you update soon bcoz har part k baad intezaar kab tak ham karenge bhala vali feeling ati h🤣
So update soon
Thanks for the PM


thank uu dear
aww even i am a great fan of yours ..
i will uopdate very soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

piya kya kru mai tera? ? tu hi bta...speechless kr dia h mujhe...u know wat had read it yesterday but u know until or unless I wont analyse each n everything I wont feel satisfied ...so read it again now ;) amazing tha yar. .n thanks sweety for liking my analysis... the way u started with from shravu ka pov was so amazing u know...how he was feeling n the dialog kya pyar krogi mujhse wow lovely... n then she felt awkward ...asked him to leave her...her cheeks blushing like red tomato...the effect of him on her ...wooowww... n then bahadur kaka n kamal ji ...hilarious it was ..rofl n then bhook lagi ...God this girl... n shopping time... whoa how he felt her nervousness that time when she was holding her dress on road n how he said change krlo gown must have dried...hayo rabba Mai to Mar jawan :-p n shopping time when nirmu called amazing convo between mother n future dil n mother n son n how nirmu said bahu chahiye...lol... n blushing shravu...haye blush v krte h Jr malhotra ji ;) n while showing dresses to ramu it was hilarious red shirt ...hehe...n then she didn't buy anything for herself...the realization did hit him very badly n the convo after that was too touchy...she still was feeling bad about his behaviour ... n then party time ...God mesmerized by her beauty n in metro ...aww protective shravu...those kids were lucky that he didnt hit them...;) how happy she got... n then at the entry gate...lawyers party sb ladenge n case fight krnge...lol...she's family...whoa she was shocked...n then his smirk you wont ever be able to do that after following her gaze at the couple who were making out...rofl...n at party mentor of shravu...sir a big hug for u...adha kam to u did...he's lucky ...well he's...;) n shocked sumo...n during dance time ...jio sir k naam p chance mar le ;) n adi ...arrhghh ate k sth started flirting...God this Guy...hate him to core... n shravu ka expression lol.. again angry young man n then formality towards chipku hihi n scared sumo... n then we've to go...I've to make a call...n then she can stay with me ...nooo ..whoaa..great man. .n sumo psycho h kya cal krna tha kr v ni ra ;) lol...n in room ...whoa it was something...God how he said pyar ni krta tha pehle ..loved it but piya half m y u stopped ...nooo u should've completed that sweety...pls update next part soon...waiting anxiously sweety.. thanks for the pm my dear...a big tight hug for u :) muuaahh...n ha pls "joining hands" adi ko keep away as much as u can...


liking your analysis??? no dear just loved it...each and everyword means a lot dear...
muaaah
luv
piya

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Posted: 8 years ago
finally unressed at 39 n 38
sorry for the delay..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
hello guys here is the nxt update
i have used 2 of namik's favorite song
let me know howz it
Part 11
Kyun ki kal tak main tumse pyaar nahi karta tha u stupid ...

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..


Sumo's eyes widen...
She can see shravan's lips was moving he was saying something but she couldn't make it out..
She couldn't hear anything else .. The world stops in front of her.. She was feeling dizzy..
What does he mean to say...
Kal tak woh mujhse pyaaar nahin karta tha...
Matlab aaaj woh mujhse pyaaar...
Sumo ...shravan bhi tujhse pyaaar karta hai.. Wait yeh bhi kahan se aya????
She jerked herself and shook her head.. ..
"Summmooo summmooo tum thik ho?? " shravan was asking
Huh ???kya??? Suman askedbliking her eyes
Shravan patted her cheeks.. Sumo ...Kya huya??
Woh woh tumne abhi jo bola Matlab "suman fumbled
"Matlab yeh 6 ft 4" ka admi ab gaya kaam se.. Ab iska kuchh nahi ho sakta.. Ab tumahare hawale shravan sathio.." He said dramatically..
Suman lowered her eyes
Hey..kuchh to bolo?? He whispered
Ok mat bolo..
Kya ?? She barely speak..
Jo main tumse sunna chahta huun.. Shravan whishper
Shravan tum wohh .. Wohh tum...
Shravan mover his hand from the wall amd grabed her from her waist and picked her up.. She gasped
Her hand automatically wrapped his shoulder...
"Woh... main... kya huh?? Itni bak bak karti ho .. Ab bolti bandh kyun.."he was still looking in her eyes..
"Shravan .. Chhodo.. "
"Nahin .. "He smirked
Pehle bolo ke tum bhi mujhse... Shvan couldnt finish
Nahin aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai...suman said lowered her eyes
Sachhii?? He asked
Hmmm..
To tum mujhse pyaaar nahin karte ho...
"Nnn nahin to.."suman was lost in his eyes
"Nahin??? "Shrvan came closer
"To phir mere nazdeek ane se tumhari dhadkan tezz kyun ho jaati hai??"shravan touched her nose with his..
"Patah mahin.. "She barely whispered
"Mujhe dekh ke tum sab kuchh kyun bhool jaati ho.."he closed his eyes
"Patah nahin."..she mumbled..
"Mere kareeb ane se tum itna shrama kyun jaati hon..he smiiled
She was sweating in nervousness..
"Mere chhune se tumhe pasina kyun aati hai.. "
His hand was touching her bare skin as he grabbed her waist from under her loose tshirt..
They were sharing an eyelock
"Mere bahon mein aate hi tum apna hosh kyun kho deti ho."he can feel her breath is getting heavier
"Shraav "she could barely speak
"Shhh. Mujhe patah hai" he said...
"Kyun ke tumhara dil bhi wohi chahta hai jo mera dil chahta hai.."
And she started biting her lips..
Shravan bend towards her lips .. He whispered.. "I have to stop u.."
Shravan touched her lips with his thumb
She shivered..
Suman clutched his back..
She closed her eyes
He just touched her lips with his lips

Knock knock...
Someone in banging on the main door..
Suman opned her eyes in shock and she realised that she was hugging him... She moved her hand..
Shravan also wake up from the trance..

Who it could be ..??????
I released her..
Suman was breathing heavily..
She gulped
And her cheeks was red.. She was adjusting her clothes lowering her eyes... I can see that she was shivering because of my touch .
She was sweating
Her hair was messy
Again that banging sound..
Suman turned around to go n cheack..
..
Stupid girl how can she go like this..
I have to stop her..
Shravan stopped her by holding her hand..sumo looked at him..
" uuuhhhuuu he shaked his head..tum ruko... Tum is halat mein ho nahi ke neeche jakte ho sumo.. Main jata hun tum apne room mein jao...
Suman almost ran to her room and closed the door.. Shravan heard the sound and checked himself in the mirror ... He took a deep breath He brushed his hair with his hand..
And comming down stairs..

"Papaaa aaap.!!!!!!"
Shravan hurriedly open the glass door..
Ramnath enter and said.." Kahan the tum.. ?? Kab se knock kar raha hun??"

"Main woh london call pe tha.."Shravan lowered his eyes..
"Aur suman woh so gayi kya??? " ramnath asked taking off his shoes and socks.
"Pata nahi shayad so gayi ya phir bathroom mein hogi.." Shravan bluntly said
"Ok ... Use bula dena zara..." Ramnath said..
"Sumaaannn!!!!!" Sumaaan !!!! "
He screamed...
"Waise papa aap to kaal anewale the.. Any thing important..."shravan asked while giving a glass of water to ramnath..
"Are i forgot ke mujhe apne laptop se ek important mail kar na hai..."Ramnath took the galss
"Shravan plzz bring my laptop .. Aur dekh suman kaha gayi i need a coffe..he dramk the water
"Suuumaaan" he screamed again..
"Ahh dont scream go n check.." He put the galss on the table and sat on the couch
Shravan was about to go when he saw she was coming down..
She has lost all the color from her face..

"Bade papa???? Aaappp??? Sab thik to hai nai.. ??" She asked with concern
"Yare kuchh nahin thoda kaam tha isliye wapas.. "Ramnath looked at her and stopped in the middle of his words
"Tujhe kya huya .. Tera rang itna feeka kyun padh gaya??"ramnatha asked getting up from the couch
"Haa sumo kya huya ???sachhi mein u look so pale.."
Sumo's jaw dropped as shravana asked this..
But she manage to speak " kuchh nahin bade papa ... Wooh main ... Main. Wohh" she fumbled
"Woh main... woh main kya sumo?? Papa jo poochh raha hai jawab to do.. "Shravan asked innocently...
Bade papa woh main so gayi thi she glared at shravan..
Shravan supressed his smile..
"Plzz ek coffee bana de gi?? "Ramnath said looking at his laptop..
"Ji zaroor .. Aap room mein jaake fresh ho jayiye mein leke aati huun..she smiled and walked in th kitchen.". She took the saucepan and was going to place it on the gas stove.. Suddenly shravan said... "Achha sumo jab banahi rahe ho plzz mere liye bhi ek cup coffee le ao .. Main apne room me hoon.."
Clangggh
sumo dropped the saucepan
"Suman tu thik to hai na?? "Ramnath nashked while shravan supress his smile
"Ji bade papa .." She gulped
Suman was making coffee..
Shravan entered the kitchen .. Ramntha was sitting on the dinning btable facing his back n engrossed in his laptop..
Shravan opend the door of the fridge which was hiding himfrom ramnath..
He took out a water bottle and start dinking from it..
Sravan was looking at sumo while suman was not able yo meet his eyes...
She wants to take the milk but heaitates coz shravan was standing there..
"Wo... Woh milk .". She tried to speak
"Ha to lo na...kisne mana kiya... "Shravan moved a little
She came to take take the milk .. He hold her hand..
She gasped and looked at him..
He whispered " hey.. Kya hua" ..
She took the milk and rushed towards the oven.. Shravan closed the door of the fridge and said
"Ok papa...u guys carry on i have to go upstairs actually i was in the middle of a serious discussion regarding an important
case or u can say the most important case of my life.. Aur mujhe woh pura karna hai...
"Achha kon sa case??"- ramnath asked
"Pehle jeet to luu.. "He looked at suman.." Phir batata huun aur i kniw i will be the most happiest person..".
"Ok best of luck.".. Ramnatha smiled
"But mujhe jjetne ke liye sumo chahiye..I mean sumo ki coffee .."

"Gud nite .. Kal jaldi uthna." .. Ramnath .took his laptop and headed towards his room..
"Sure papa.. Sumaaan mera coffee mere room mein pouchadena.."shravan said
Suman looked at him he gives her signal with his eyes to come upstairs ( like the preetibhoj epi)
Suman gulped...

Bhagwan ji tume isse sharam naam ki koi cheez dii bhii hai ya nahi...
Plzzz bhagwan ji mujhe isse bachao
Sumo whats wrong with u
Sabke samne sumo wrestler banke firti hai.. Aj tak kisi ladke ko himmat nahi huyi ke tujhe touch kar sake.
. Yaad hai kaise college me sab ke saamne suraj agarwal ko chamat mari thi... Usne teri haath pakdi bas is liye..
To shravan kya cheez hai..
Phir se banja waisi..
She shooked her head ..
Yes yes sumo u can do it...
She sighed and sat down..
Khaak ban jayu... Uske naam se hi to dil ki dhadkan tez ho jaati hai..
Uske saamne aate hi to main apna naam bhi bhoool jaati huun..
Sumo wrestler kya main khaakh banunhi...
She sat on thechair...
She clutched her hair with her hands
Aur ab jab uske bola ke woh mujhse pyaar... She blushed...
Main bhi to shayad.. But bade papa badi maa naraz to nahin honge na.. Woh kya sochenge.. Maine unke ek laute bete ko fasaya..
Hey bhagwan main kaya karuuu??? Plzzz batao...
She took the cup for shravan.. And went towards ramnath's room
" bade papa maine table pe paani rakh diya agar kuchh bhi zaroorat ho to plzz bula lena nahin to call kar lena.." Suman said while standing at the door..
Ok beta good nite.. Ramnath smiled while working on his laptop...
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Shravan was eagerly waiting for her .. He was pacing in his room...
Kahan reh gayi yeh ladki
Shravan tujhe ho kya gaya ??
God knows yaar ab to ek pal uske bina reh nahin paa raha...
Agar usne na bol diya to??
Chehra dekha tha?? Laal ho gayi thi..
Dont worry shravan adhi case to tune jeet hi lii .. Baki ki jeet ab ki hearing pe jeet jayega...
Knock knock!!
Ab madam ko time mila..
He rushed towards the door and opened it..
Suman was standing on the middle of the corridor.. Holding a coffee mug in her hand..
"Coffee.. "She said without meeting his eyes..
Shravan was standing near the door..
"Andar aoo aur table pe rakhdo.." Shravan moved inside a litlle
"Nahin tum yehi se lelo.. "Mijhe yumhare room mein nahi ana hai" she spread her hand holding the coffee mug..
"What???Sumo plzzz andar ao.. Mujhe tumse baat karni hai.." He came closeru
"Mujhe sona hai.."she said..she stepped back
Shravan stepped toward her .. She suddenly put the cup on the hall table in the corridor and rushed towards her room..
Shravan hurriedly crossed her and before she entered her room he entered her room And pulled her inside..
"Kyaa karr rahe hooo chhodo mujhe..."She screamed...
Shravan put a hand on her mouth and whispered " pagaaal ladki why r u screaming...papa aa jayenge .."
"Achha hoga bade papa ko bhi to patah chale tum kya kar rahe ho..."she said angrily...
"Par main papa ko aur shock dena nahin chahta "..shravan shrugged
"Shock ??" She furrowed her eyebrows
He took a step forward her and said
"Matlab main nahi chahta ke papa aj subhe ki tarha phirse hume aise waise kuchh karte huye dekhe.."
Suman lowered her eyes...
"Shravan bade papa badi maa kya sochenge .. Kyun kar rahe ho tum aise...??
Tum jo chate ho kabhi nahin ho sakta... Tum unke ek laute bete ho... Kitne armaan hain..unhe tumko leke ..tum malhotra house ke shaaan ho .. Aur main..mujhe unhone raste se uthake ... "She looked at him ..
He can see her teary eyes..
He cupped her face " shhh aur tum unki jaaan ho... Aur wooh chahte hai ke unki jaan ki hifazat unka yeh beta kare.. Kyoun ki woh tumhe kabhi apne se door jane nahin dena chahte hai .."
She suddenly looked at him...
"Matlab???? "She asked
He tapped her head with his finger tips..
"Stupid .. Papa humesha tumhe apna paas rakhna chate hai.. ?? Tumhe family banakar rakhna chahte hai...How?? Kabhi kisine tumhe mujhe rakhi ya bhaidooj wish karne ke liye nahi bola why?????? Kuchh to socha unhone rite??"
Suman realised and widen her eyes
Shravan smiled and sighed
"Itne saalon se lawyers ke saath rehke bhi dimaag ghutno ke neeche.. "..shravan said
She blushed...
He Rubbed her nose with his..

Aankhon mein ankhen teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha hua kya
Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya

Har ghari saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi



"Ab bolo naaa" he said grabbing her waist
"Kyaaa???"she gasped
Jo main sunna chahta huun..
"Good nite shravan..."
"Nooo..."
"Shravan plzzz"
"Nooo.."
"Triiing "triing "
Shravan's phone rang..
Ufff i am gonna kill that person"he took out the phone...
And released her..
"Bol pushkar tukhe aur koi time nahin mila call karne ke liyee.. "
Suman was looking at him from the corner of her eyes.. Shravan was going out while he stopped and turned around and said..
Achha sun mumma ko bolna ke unhone jo gift mangi thi woh mujhe abhi abhi unke liye mil gaya... Sumo suddenly looked at him.. And saw him smiling..
He closed the door and left her blushinggg...
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"Good morning bade papa... Ab uth jaiye.. Nahin to late ho jayenge...
Ramnath yawned and smiled..
Good morning beta..
She was about to leave when ramnath called her from behind..
"Sun tuuu thik to hai?? Raat ko soyi nahi lagta hai... .. "
Suman turned around and lowered her eyes..
"Idhar aa mere paas.. Baith.."
She come forward and seated on the edge of the bed..
"Kya huya beta?? Kal se tu kuchh alag rahi hai.. Tabiyat to thik hai?? " Ramnath asked
"Jee bade papa kuchh nahi huya..." She assured him putting her hands on his hand
"Tu bhool rahi hai ke tere samne tere bade papa nahin Ramnath malhotra hai.. Tuu kaal raat nahi soyi hai .. Kya huya beta bata mujhe..." He asked

Bade papa ab main aap ko yeh baat kaise batau ke aap ke bete ne mere raaton ki neend chhen lii... She said in her thoughts..

Ankhe kholu to woh dikhta hai band karu phor bhi wohi dikhta hai..
Uske kayi huyi baat soch te sochte patah nahin kab subha ho gayi...
Main kya karu kya kahu kuchh smajh mein nahi aa raha .. Her inner voice spoke..

"Kuchh bhi to nahi hai bade papa "she said
"Kuchh to zatur hai... Kahin shravan ne kuchh kiya.."Ramnath stopped in the middle as She suddenly looked at ramnath..
Ramnath read her eyes ..
"His eyes was widen.. He understood.. What may be the cause.."
"Ok tu jaa.. Ready ho le."he said
. She was about yo go suddenly Ramnath said..
"Sun shravan agar tujhse kuchh kahan to us barein mein sochna zarur... "
"Bade papa .. "She blushed and almost ran away...
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"Yeh lijiye aap ki avocado spreaded toast... Nahin muuh banane se kuchh nahin hoga yehi khana padhega.. Chalo jaldi finish karo...
Aur yeh hai adrakwali chai... "She put the cup on his table..,

"Shravan utha??? "Tamnatha asked...
"Mujhe nahin pata..."she shrugged
"Aare woh kumbhakaran hai.. Ja jake dekh..." Ramnath took a bite from his toast
"Main kyunn ???aaap jao aap ka beta hai..." Suman said..
Good job sumo.. Finally tu sumo wrestler bani the murmurs
"Jaldi jaaa manmeet aata hi hoga..."Ramnath said...
"Main uska PA huun kya?? Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai .. Mujhe apki packing karni baki hai.."She headed towards ramnath's room...
Ramnath looked helplessly..
Suddenly he get a call..
"Haaan manmeet we r almost ready" ramnath asaid while looking at suman.

Koi zarurat nahi hai sumo is khadoos ko uthame ki..
Yaar sumo uski wajah se bade papa late ho jayenge...
But ab to mujhe uske pass jane se bhi darr lagta hai...
She sat on the edge of ramnath's bed..
Sumo kyaa huya tujhe ... Tu kabse kisise darr ne lagi...
Jab bhi woh samne ata hai mujhe patah nahin kya ho jata hai.. Dil ki dhadkan tezz ho jaati hai...
Pyaar ho gaya sumo tujhe usse... Tu to gayiii...
Shayad shravan sahi tha... Badi maa bade papa shayad chahte hai ki main aur shravan.. She blushed...
She come out of ramnath's room
Ramnath was still on call.. She looked upstairs.. She headed towards shravan's room...
She knocked... No replies...
She opened the door and peeked
She found shravan was still sleeping in his famous sleeping position
She came towards him
She kneeled infront him.. A smiled appeared on her face.. Yeh dekho iske wajai se main puri raat jaagi huun aur yeh .. She chuckled.. Pagal

Har Pal Mujhko Tadpata Hai,
Mujhe Saari Raat Jagata Hai
Is Baat Ki Tumko Khabar Nahi,
Ye Sirf Tumhi Pe Marta Hai
Mera Dil Bhi Kitna Pagal Hai
Ye Pyar To Tum Se karta hai
Par Saamne Jab Tum Aate Ho
Kuch Bhi Kehne Se Darta Hai

Suddenly he heard a msg tone on his mobile which was kept on his bed side table..
She took it on her hand..
It was a random msg.. The ph was locked she was about to put it back suddenly she saw a msg on the locked screen just below the recent one
Ma- meri beti bahu banne ke liye maan gayi? Jaldi wapas aa jaa
Her yes become widen she blushed and stand up..
She put an alarm 5 mins .. And rushed out from his room...
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Shravan shot up on his bed ..
He took the phone in surprise tried to look at once again and turned the alarm off..
Ohh god its 8:20. He rushed towards the toilet..
Suddenly stopped and turned around he took the phone..
" maine kal alarm to nahin lagaya tha..he frowned..
Toh phir..suddenly he realised something and a smile appeared on his face...
.. Shravan is comming downstair
"Whats wrong shravan i told u na ke dont be late .. See whats the time...by the way my son looks handsome today..
Manmeet aur uski family kab ki aa chuki every body is waiting for uu.. Have u packed u luggage.."
Shravan grabbed an apple from the friut basket. "Jee papa"
His eyes was looking here and there not finding her..
Kahan gayiii.. Aj jawab leke rahunga.. He thought
"Have your breakfast shravan n lets go.."said ramnath..
One person came to take their luggage...
"Oye good morning puttar ji.. Jaldi karo we are already late..."manmeet came and patted shravan's back
"Good morning uncle.."
Shravan hurriedly gulped the coffee.. And took one banana..
Don't worry beta we will have 2 stopover so that u can get ur breakfast...
"Oyeee raaam tera huya????" Said manmeet..
"Are ladies log car mein baithein hai.. Jhumar mera sar kha degi chheti chheti kar.."manmeet continues .
Is she in upstair?? Why is not she coming down..his eyes was on the stairs..
"Lets go shravan.". Ramnath asked..
"But papa sumo??" Shravan asked
"Are woh to kab se bahar khadi hai.. Aditya ke saath gappe lada rahi hai..." Manmeet said
Shravan snapped his head... Aditya??????
"Ha woh aur vidhi bhi to chal raha hai.. "Manmeet smiled...
Shravan came outside and found suman was standing with aditya in front of a suv... Aditya said something funny ang she giggled.. They did a hi5...
Shravan clenched his fists..
"Puttar tu humare car mein ayega ya?? Aditya wala car mein chalega..??" Manmeet asked shravan
"Kyun ji.. Usko apne jaise budhhe ke beech mein bula rahe ho..
Puttar tu woha chala ja.." Said jhumar khosla..
Shravan walked towards Aditya.. Suman was standing in front of the car facing her back...
Hey Shravan whtasupp...
Suman turned around..
She was wearing a black sleevless top and dark maroon long skirt..
Shravan ignored her and shaked adityas hand
"By the way u r late.. Kyun sumo??"aditya smirked
Before Suman could say any thing Shravan replied..
"No i am not bro.. Perfect on time for sumo.. Right???"
Sumo lowered her eyes..
Aditya smiled and said sumo" tum samne baithogi ya peeche."
"Peeche.."shravan replied..
"Ok then shravan tum samne aa jao vidhi aur sumo peeche baith jayegi.." Adi opened the door of the car..
"Hey adi wait for mee.. "A girl on her early twenties came forward...
She was wearing a white crop top and black and white checked shorts..
"Get inside vidhi .." Aditya said getting into the drivers seat
"Hey i am vidhi " she saw shravan
"Shravan .. Shravan malhotra.. " he speeded his hand to shake her hand..

"Hey nice yo meet you handsome "she hugged shravan and gave a kiss on his cheek...
"Same here" shravan gave her a hugg..
Sumo's eye widen..
"Hii m suman.." Suman tried to hug her
"Hiii suman vidhi here "she shaked hand with suman.." Lets go ..."
Suman glared at shravan...
Shravan smirked...
"Hey shravan why dont u come here." Vidhi pointed towards the back seat.
"Why???" Suman asked "Let him be wid with adi.."
"Ha let him seat hear.. We have to pick daphne on our way..." Aditya said while adjusting his rear view mirror..
"She will sit with you" aditya continued ..
"Ok as u say..." Vidhi shrugged
Shravan smiled..
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All the way it was vidhi who talked .. And 99% time she was asking shravan... And he replied sweetly..
After half an hour they reached gosford where they have to pick vidhi's friend...
"Hey sumo come .." Aditya asked..
"No adiya you go i will wait here."m having headache " suman toched her temples.
Hey shravan plzz come.. Asked vidhi
"Actually i need to make a call."shravan smiled.
Both siblings left..
Shravan got down while sumo was seated on her seat..
" Hey thanks..." Shravan said
She ddint reply
Kya huya?? Sar zyada dard ho raha hai?
She nodded no...
Then??he asked with concern
He opened the door and got inside.. Sumo shifted a little..shravan trying to hold her..
"Don't.."suman said angrily
Shravan shocked...
"Kyun ab main kyun??? Jao na us adhi angrez ke paas jao...Jab usse kissiya le rehete tab kahan gaya kal ki dialogue??
Ab jab woh nahin hai to sumooo kya huya.. ???She immitates him..
"R u jealous?? " shravan asked
"No".. She said with a straight face
"Then why r u reacting like this... U only said that u dont love me.. "Shravan raised his eyebrows..

"Matlab tumne koi aur ladki kiss karen aur main react bhi naa karu?? " suman asked
"Kyun tum hoti kaun ho? "
"Mujhe yeh sab bolnewali tum hoyi kaun ho.. "Shravan said

Suman was shocked
Tears r brimming on her eyes...
Shravan looked at her

"Hey hey sumo.. I was just joking.."
She closed her eyes caused a big fat tear rolled from her eyes..
He cupped her face and said
"Aur tum jo aditya se gale padh rahi thi..??"
"Kyaaa?? Pagal ho gaye ho kya??"
Woh to main use tips de rahi thi.. "Suman said
"Tips??Shravan shocked
"Haaa ta ke woh daphney apni aussie gf ke baren mein ghar mein kaise bataye.. Kal raat usne mujhse madat mangi thi.."suman said
"Daphne Uske girlfriend hai??"shravan raised his eyebrows
"Aur nahi to kya tumhe kya laga.. ?? Wait tumhe laga ke main aur woh?? Suman straighten up pusher his hand..
"Chhi shravan tum aise soch bhi kajse sakte ho.. Main kisi aur ke saath.. She cried..
"To kiske saath sumo ".. He hold her..
They can see vidhi n aditya was coming with an anouther girl.. "Jaldi bolo nahi to phirse vidhi mujhe kiss kar sakti hai.. Aur main bechara mard kabtak uske hotness se apne aap ko bachau"..
Shravan smirked..
Suman was about to say something but all of them reached the car..
"Hey shravan what r u doing on the back seat"asked aditya
"Thought of giving u to a chance to njoy with your girl bro.." He smiled..
"Sumo r u alright.. Do u need any medicine for your headache..? "Asked aditya
"She will be alright soon.." Shravan said..
Vidhi was about to open the door at shravan's side so that she can sit beside shravan but suddenly shravan spoke ." Vidhi would mind to seat on the other window side .. Actually its too sunny n sumo is having a headache so better she should sit in the middle.. So tht she would get minimum direct sunlight..
"Ok "vidhi shrugged..
Vidhi entered and they started..
Adiya started driving..
Sumo was seriously having headache becoz lack of sleep..
"So jao." He said.
He spread his arm over her head and pulled her close to his chest..she looked at him while he was looking outside.. Leaning her head on his right shoulder she closed her eyes

Main baarish ho jaunga. Tum baadal ho jaogi
Dekh lena
Itna tumko chahunga...Tum paagal ho jaogi
_Dekh_lena
hravan intensely looked at her sleeping positon
the sunrays are falling on her face


Kehta hai sunYe dhoop kinara...tera hua main saara ka saara.
Dekh lena

there was a slight smile on her face
Tere honton pe hamesha...Main hasta hi raunga
Dekh lena.
with his finger he traced the dried tears near the corner of her eyes

Bheegi jo teri aankhein...Aankhon se main bahunga
dekh lena.


"Main huun " he looked at her and whispered
He felt her smile near the left side of his chest where once upon a time he had his heart

"Why is he taking so much care of her.. What's special in her.. Even bro consider as very good frnds.. But does shravan consider her as only frnd.. God I seriously like him.. "Vidhi looked at suman who was wrapping her left hand on his torso while shravan was hloding her protectively..


To be continue...
So guys let me know how is it ..
Sorry I couldn't put the beach romance in this coz it was getting longer..
So I promised nxt time pakka wala romance..
So i gues ur hatred towards aditya will soon go.. N dont worry about vidhi..
Let me remind you there will be no negetive character..
So just njoy the love story of hum tum who are meant yo be ek duje ke vaaste...
If u want a pm ... Plzz buddy me..
Criticism will be gladly welcomed...
Luv
Piya



Edited by Crazypiya - 8 years ago
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Sry for unressing late...#latelatif me

Piya...👏I juz love you...finally lamba update mila...Shravan confession..❤️Matlab yeh 6 ft 4" ka admi ab gaya kaam se.. Ab iska kuchh nahi ho sakta.. Ab tumahare hawale shravan sathiothat cracked me up like mad...🤣that was juz beautiful...Shravan usse kitne pyaar se confess karva raha tha yaar...Par Ramu kaka bhi na...HAmesha galat waqt par entry marte hai...hamesha...pura scene spoil kar diya😡Songs choice was amazing...they are my fav...toh reading mey aur maza aaya😳Jalkukdi sumo...that was so cute...❤️Jao na us adhi angrez ke paas jao...Jab usse kissiya le rehete tab kahan gaya kal ki dialogue??🤣 kash ye sumo show mey dekhne ko milti...😭
All in all in was a amazing update or we can say
Shramanliciously delicious in @sunain way...
juz loved it to core ...update soon...thanx for the pm..😊

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Hiii Piya.!!!...finally unressing on time...sowii i hope u r not mad at me...plz dont be.😔
M really sorry yar...plzz..maaf kardo..bacha hi smjh kar maafi day do*puppy eyes*
chalo ab kaan bhi pakar leay n situps bhi...poray 10..ab tu sorry lay lo😳
Hope ab tu maafi mil jaay gi..

Coming to upii...
It was Shramanliciously delicious😳...maza agaya.!!
Shravan's love confession was dhamakaydar...mein tu khushi say phulay nhi sama rhi thi..
thoz songs❤️...apt choice...loved it to core.
Suman kay tu hoosh hi urr gaay...she cudnt believe her ears..for her this was nxt to impossible.but now hearing his confession she was awestruk...

Flirty Shravan...❤️...made me love him more n more...agar sumo nay haan nhi bola tu mein aura laa jaon gi Shravan ko..n thts final😳
Sumo shram say lal tamatar ho gae...tamatar bhi us kay agay pheeka lag raha ho ga tht time..😃
He was continously asking her to say thoz 3 magical words..he was dying to hear her side but she..bhudu kahein ki..nahi boli..Shravan nay saray douts bhi clear kar dea magar nhi madam ko sharmanay say fursat milay tab ba.

Thoz lovey dovey moments aawwhh.. was lovely..the way he described her predicament in his presence wss
fantastic... [I]beeautifully penned[I]

OMG!!!!OMG!!!! Was tht a kiss???? Or just a peck????..jo bhi ho..tht just made me jump on my bed in joy[:D/]...sheer pleasure yarr sheer pleasure😳...hoping for a proper kiss really soon..Pakka??

Kya yar...Ram ko bhi abhi ana tha.
issay tu kabab mein haddi ka award milna chahiyay..saray intimate scene ki band baja di😔
Whn sumo was heading to open the door he stoped her saying k shez not n such state to open the door..haawwh abhi tu kuch kiya bhi nhi aur Sumo ki yaa halat...kuch karay ga tu madam tu totally gae kam say😳😉

Shravan...the great lawyer turned into a liar😆...londen call...[ROFL]
Haawwhh...Shravan was teasing her infront of Ram...Naughty haan..bechari sumo..koi kasar nhi chori us bechari ko concious karnay ki..poor Baby ...Sumo ki sari Sumoness hawa ho gae😆
Shravan ka most imp case aur jeetnay kay leay Sumo chahiyay[ROFL]...This guy is just mindblowing😆

She refused to enter his room as she was wel aware bout his naughty ideas..but he burdged into her room...told her bout his parents which increasing her amusement...uskay bawajod usnay apnay dil ka izhar nhi kiya..stupid girl...

Yar yaa sab ko enki lovestory kay array ana ka koi obsession hai..jis ko dekho kabab mein hadi banay ko tyaar bhata hai..yaa Malhotra's enki lovestory agay barhnay hi nahi dein gay...hamesh beech mein kud jatay hain..Pushkar this time..
Piya nxt time tie thm up..all of thm takay koi Shraman kay beech na asakay.

Bade Papa got cheel baz nazar😆...Sumo ki sumoness puray jahan mein chal sakti hai except Shravan.Agar show mein hoti tu Shravan ki bolti tu Sumo kay samnay khulti hi nahi..teasing tu buhat door ki baat hai aur Sumo ki Sumogiri peak par hoti.

Sumo read Nirmala's msg..woah..Shravan realised she was here which made a smile appear on his face.
Shravan ki nazrwin jissay talash kar rhi hain woh madam tu Adi ko tips denay mein busy hain😆...Shravan tu jealousy say lal tamatar ho gaya ho ga..Woah tht Vidhi seems soo soo soo much fun😆...Finally koi tu aya Sumo ko jealous feel karanay..one thing i badly missed in EDKV😔
Party tu ab shuru hoi hai...

Woah Sumo burstup at Shravan..tht was fantastic n cute..her anger.
amazing..their car convo ❤️...Finally their MUs got cleared..Adi has a GF..yaay..now i like him😛
Shravan told Vidhi to sit on the other side just for Sumo..awwhh
She slept on his shoulder while he himself holding her protectively..she was sleeping peacefully..
Shravan said [I]"main haun"[I]...just madr her more comfy..awwhh
Woah Vidhi is intrested in Shravan..Nooo..
Cant wait to knw wht happens nxt specially eagerly waiting for Beach romance😳

All in all Piya u did a stupendous job..as always😉
Love u lots n lots of mucj🤗

Hy i hav a sugesstion of two songs...1 Ore piya from ajaa nachle n 2 Hasi from hamari adhoori kahani..
thy r perfect for Shraman..if u feel okay so u can add thm too..just a sugesstion😉
Love ya.
Take care❤️
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Wow Great update
ur an amazing writer
keep it up the good work
thank you👏

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Too gud. The story is really keeping me hooked. Thanks for this
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piya you are amazing writer... luvd each and every part and its gud that you hadnt stretches beach part cz this one is way more beautiful!!! thank you so muchh for thisss
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Originally posted by: cdshah

piya you are amazing writer... luvd each and every part and its gud that you hadnt stretches beach part cz this one is way more beautiful!!! thank you so muchh for thisss


ThaNks yaar
But there will be beach scene again...

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