Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl100

Zoya Superb 👏 I loved this kind of ending its so much better ... you are a gifted writer and I love reading your works yaar ⭐️ ...Keep writing more dear...will keep popping in between...Till then take care.

Swati 🤗
Thank you so much!
Yes will do!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sahiba402

res
thanks for the PM zoya.

unres.
oh it was so good yar.
romcom😃
dialogues were superb zoya😳
pm me next part too🤗

Thank you so much Sahiba!
Yes I will!!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

AMAZING
I Love the fact that you used the scenario of the scene we would have got and at the same time added your touch to it!

Thanks hon!!
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhilashaM

Ooopsi 😵 !

I forgot to comment!
Sorry!
Its okay ya!
Well, anyone can forget anything after reading this.😆
Kuch bhi chotu!
I am short of adjectives at the moment to describe it.😛
But will try.
Let's see...
It was beautifully penned.
So, well written.
Super Cute.
Amazing scenes.
Everything was carefully handled.
Dialogues were wonderful.
Execution was fabulous.
Too lighthearted one.
Overall It was AMAZING.👏
Aww man! Thank you so much!!!!!
It was totally a Shravan-Sumo thing.
We got a glimpse of their real friendship here.
After all friendship is the foundation to any relationship.
Agreed ya!
A great hug to you for this.🤗.
Hug right back to you 🤗
I just saw that you told that we might not have this much fun with next update.
But don't worry whatever you write is absolute fun to us.
Well I really hope so!
Giving rest to my words now,
Abhi

PS: You haven't read my update yet.
I haven't?
Shizz..
I will shortly...

@Bold!
Thank you so much Abhi...
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Running to check!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Res
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Unress
Sorry,Sorry for being this late but never the less here I am.
Arey aap der se aa lo, par aao zaroor!
Oreo,dil jeet liya wapas,you did magic!
ooi maa!
You laid out all emotions be it sad,pain,physical proximity,care,concern and the fun elements with utter perfection.
I loved it so much that I lack words to say how much I loved it.
That gives me such happy feels!!

I loved how Sumo did not care about treating Shravan while he sans any shirt and how she didn't give a damn about him yelling Ber y!
So Sumo na!!!

The best would be when she is like 'Heart attack'? And he is like what? And then she says ke 'Dil ka Daura aya hai tumhe' LMAOO!
This was epic.
Ya her Sumoness came back...

First went high on emotion then high on concern and then loved how both melted for each other.

Over all it was mind blowing.
Thank you so much!!

Update Soon haan?
Arey weekend gift, shaam ko hi upload kar ri mai😛

@Bold
Psycho 🤗
Thank you oh so much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yayayaa!
Waiting *grins*
Thoda saa motivation hume bhi dedo, ek idea saalon see ghoom raha but too lazy 🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Yayayaa!

Waiting *grins*
Thoda saa motivation hume bhi dedo, ek idea saalon see ghoom raha but too lazy 🤢

Forum pe promise kar de ke kuch likh rahi hai...
That keeps me going...
Ke I've promised now i have to write 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
I miss EDKV even more after reading, I have got a cool writing style girl!

Sumo is a package a purrrfecct amalgamation a complete package :P

waiting for story to go forward:)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.
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Unres.
There is nothing I can say to describe how much I freaking loved it. This is just on a different level of AWESOMENESS. It's the EDKV we fell in love with that somewhere got lost in the middle. You captured everything in it. AAHMAZING!!!!!

Aww dude!
Thank you so much!!!
The towel scene- something we always wished for, never came onscreen but I can bet you created more feels with it than the writers could probably have.
Bas chada de tu phir channe ke jhaad par!
Bechara shravan. Kaise control kia khud ko 😆
Karna hi tha.. Abhi bohot problems solve karna baaki hai... Yeh sab hota rahega😉
Punch se heart attack 🤣
Only Sumo!
And those deep dialogues between between fights It got everything. Comedy, intensity everything. Do I need to say again that I LOVED it.
I'm glad you did
Now undate the next chap soon. Love ya 🤗
Love ya too!! 🤗

Resh what a time for you to unres!
When I was posting the new chapter!
I must say, made it in time bro!
@Bold Thank you so much!

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