Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 10

Originally posted by: arshuaar

Awesome ..
beautifully penned...
Loved it. ...
thank you for the wonderful writing...
... thanx for PM ...😊

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Zoyaaa 🤗
I'm late

I've read while I was half sleepy - half awake...I mean after getting ur PM & then forgot to comment!

Now have read it again...it worth reading hundreds times...this is sooo good

And update jaldi jaldi...can't wait... 😳

Originally posted by: indranigupta

Zoya😳😳

I loved it...what an awesome alternate ending...kaash aisa kuch hota...Dil ko sukoon milta...Par nahin...hamara show his ajeeb tha...aur hum usse zyaada ajeeb😃😆

Absolutely loved it...

Originally posted by: noexcuse

Beautiful Zoya. Loved every bit of it. ❤️

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

Wow! 👏 Amazing ..loved the way u added towel scene ,🤣 ShraMan fight over 😆 Was laughing while reading this part ..🤗 for PM

Originally posted by: nancynair

Wonderfully written

If only this could have happened

Originally posted by: Sunain

Woaw...tht was sumthng i was waiting for...u just nailed it..completly
The way u potrayed their predicament was outstanding..n the bathroom part along with the towel one were fabalous..Zoya Zoya Zoya...love u yar..u hav done a stupendous job so a tight one for u.. 🤗
Plz continue soon cant wait...its lifeline

Originally posted by: Rikta97

Shravan saying "todha piche ho jao aur ye todha sahi kar lo" cracked me up 🤣

Originally posted by: muskiii

Woww that was an amazing one. A complete mixture of romance, comedy, friendship, fights, innocence, ego and what not. I was smiling the whole time and my mum was staring at me weirdly😆. Plsss continue soon ab EDKV k bina din nahi guzarta😔

Originally posted by: dmg2c

awesomest!!!!👏