Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Hey zoya, thanks for the pm and trust me I was waiting for this since the day u posted that suggestions thread, I even mentioned it in my post. This piece was worth the wait👏, my bloody biased mind literally imagined Namik in the shirtless scenes😳. I am really waiting for the next update. Update soon and pls do pm me. 👏

Originally posted by: Safire

The write-up was realy wonderful👏 i look forward to your update! For the past one week i am watching and researching the last episode! Ab all of yours os/ts yehi tho hain mere liye ek thalli!!!!!

Originally posted by: krutish22

simply fabulous
Beautifully written
Plz Updt soon

Originally posted by: khadz20

Zoyaaa ! 🤗

This was so good !

Died laughing at the towel scene , imagined it actually happening 🤣

Aditya ki toh ... anyway , I wanted him to come talk to Sumo in the show and that happened here aur bhaga diya usko sumo ne in true sumo style !

Contimue sooon , PM bhejio !

Can't wait

Khoob saara pyaar to the ShraMan in your head .

Aur thoda sa for you too xD ❤️

Originally posted by: evaviego

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT... !!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

CVs should have hired you as the writer instead of those idiots...!!!! 😡

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: -rhythm-

Alternate ending ...😃 lovely Zoya..

🤗

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Zoya!!!

Ameesha!!

Omg!!

What a storyline and u know what i had a lot a lottt fun reading this specially the morning scenes

I had a lot of fun writing them...

Loved the way u brought out the truth about shravan

And night was a bit hectic but then everything was resolved in the morning with a fresh sunlight!!

Thank you!

That scene where shravan yells!!

The hell is wrong with you woman! Bacchi nahi ho, control karo!

🤣🤣

That was something!

I just couldnt control my laughter the whole thing when she was rubbing his bare chest and his eyes went there... Ahem! 🤪

Well the last update of alternate ending will have his eyes going a lot more places😆

Awesome

And that part too where he asks ab nai jana ya tumne bed pr hi apna kaam kar diya!!!

Sumo ka kya hai, kar bhi deti😉

Ohh god all in all im still smiling hard and laughing remembering these scenes 🤣

Awesome piece zoya!!!

Thank you!!!

Do pm me next time u update! 😳

Positively!

Love

Ameesha⭐️

Originally posted by: an_chau

DEMANDING PART 2... NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Aditya's first sentence got me in the laughter maniac mode - "Bhuka sher." lol 🤣

And then he was throwing stones at their window. Man! 😆

That's all you can expect from that fool😆

Then ShraMan nokjhok just... 🤣 🤣 The entire conversation was hot and so funny at the same time. ☺️

I know right😉

Want next updt soon. Take care.

I I ma'am!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Zo I'm terribly late ...sowieee

Priii.. I know ya, exam hai na tere...

Maafi milegi na?

Maafi deneke liye pehle naraaz hona padta na😉
Coming to the update.

Humara super sanskari shravu ...bhookha sher 🤣 🤣

Sumo ko kha jayega☺️
Looks like aditya knows him better than sumo🤣

No wonder usko jagane ke liye pappi wale aawaz kar ra tha😆

Shravu's mood switches from irritated to concerned within secs hearing aditya's name.

Itna prem jo hai!
Sumo threatening him to pee on his bed was damn hilarious 🤣
Sumo ka koi bharosa nahi😃

Chhoti ungli se angootha dabao amd return of pushpa 😆 ...wo bhi kya din the ...sigh!!

Sacchi yaar!
Punch se heart attack 😲 ...sumo beta tu dhakkan hi rahegi 😆
Never!

Looks like shravu ke hormones functional ho gye 😆
Ya, maybe he's on medication😆

N his dhakkan biwi is still clueless what this proximity is doing to him 😆
That vishesh tippani dialogue was epic !!!

Once a dhakkan always a dhakkan!
Tum nange kyun ho 🤣
Because 😎

By god Zo tere dialogues ekdam seeti mar hote hai 🤪
Arey thank you yaar! Mai bohot filmy hoon na iss liye😉

Ab itna kuch likha hai to do i need to tell you that I loved the chappy ❤️
Ekdam jhakkas!!!!!!

Shukriya!
Love you to the moon and back ❤️