*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P

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Haya Khan

@hayakhan5

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Suchi yeh jo bhi hai mast hai...
Hahahhhahhaah...Loved ur idea.....
buntiya naik hahaha...
ur post ka hero... daya mai ka love of life...
Satya an rukku...
great pair...
hahahahah its amazing when i read she keeps hockey stick...
sahib toh gaya...
rasika ka intro was mast...
Raghu is funny...
and antara is still antara...
Tooo goooddd...
U were amazing...
thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

suchi yaar this is height man...😆

i don't know what to comment i sm laughing like hell... and rolling on my bed...🤣

okk okk let me take a breath...😆

it was just tooo goooddd👏👏👏

never read so much funny story for so long.. it actually made my day,,,⭐️

sorry for being late i was out of town...

love dm's punjabi and buntiya ji...😆

sattu and ruku too funny.,.

and raghu... uske dialouges ne to hasa hasa ke pet dard kar diya...🤣

aur ye MAN1 nd MAN2... sorry to say but they were my fav in this chapter...😆

it's a gr8 story yaar thx for sharing it with us..

sorry for being late i was outside town...😆

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rima4ever
wow suchi
so u finally started a story
keep up the good work

thank u so much rima...😛

i m happy that u liked it..😃

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
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unres

Yes finally!!!

And it's not bad ok... stop thinking like that!

It's actually really good ok

And it's funny 😆

Thank you for writing this ❤️

yup!! finally...😆

i know it is!...🤣

thank u so much...😳

oh that good...i am glad..😆

mention not ji,..😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: hareem27
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Unres
Okay...hahahahahahaha 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Sorry..I just can't stop rofling 🤣
This was hilarious... Lol..
I loved it 😳
-rukhsana hockey player 🤣
-DM Punjabi 😆
-buntiya is finally DM's husband yayy 😆 😃
-finally satya got a good role
-Mrs.kaul..filmy mom lol
-rasika married to aman..okay
-why didn't you get a gf or wife for MM?? 😆
-monkey cap..Haha "thand ziada thi" 🤣
-both men1 and men2 seems crazy 😆
-chohe ki family..Haha ..Aww my Raghu is so funny and cute 😳
-chor chohe ki family ko khana khila den ge..Haha
-Raghu doing pushups at 2o'clock in the morning 😛
-satya and rukhsana part was also funny
Suchi( I hope I've spelled your name correctly...if not then I'm sorry 😳 )
This is just mind blowing..this is not a crap..
I love it yaar..
And you've to continue this.. No matter what..and that too very soon..pleaseee its a request as well as blackmailing Lol 😆
itni achii story k lye ek tight wali jhappi and pyari wali pappi 😃 🤣

omg!!! hareem.😃...thanks fr such a long n lovely review dear😛

dm is punjabi lady...n buntiya n dm ka rishta purana...😆

geeta maa..😆

mm aisa hi theek hai yr...😆

han bhut jyada thi..😆

yup..they are...😆

raghu will be somewhat funny n very cutie in this story.😉.

rukku n satya will be more interesting in further updates..😆

yes u spelled absolutely correct.😊.well my name is suchita bt all buddies call me suchi..😆

i know it is a crap..😆

ohh another blackmailer.😲😆.okay will continue this..😆

thanks for jahppi n pappi.😳.thanks a lot fr lovely comments mwwaahh!!🤗

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..Happy..

@..Happy..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

loved it

antara and raghus love hate talk -loved it

continue soon

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey suchi🤗
Wow a story from you
That too on Rantara
love the CS and first You are so good girl
So waana read more
so do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

aww thank u so much geet..🤗

yup..blackmailing ka asar...😆

thank u 😳..u r a very good girl geet.😳

yes will sure continue this..😆

mention not..😆

take care u too...😃

luv u mwaahh!😛

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: kantared1
Nice yaar suchi...very well written. ..I liked the rantara conversation ...awesome yaar
please continue soon 😃

thank u so much sanjini..😳.

loved ur comments dear😃

will continue it..😆

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Sushmitha

@.sushmitha.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Oye... Abh yeh kya kar rahi hai tu... Story likh rahi hai... plz yaar... aakhir hum kab tak bardaash karenge yeh sab uh... pehle tumhara crazy posts aur abh story... ohhh god... forum wasiyon ko koi bachao...🤣

Okayyy fine... jokes apart,,,, sach kahu toh, ua update is really awesummm... Especially that character sketch... i enjoyed it yaar...

U r different leve... teri brain ko museum main rakhna chahiye... Hatzzzoff tsuchi...👏

Waiting fo ua next update...😉

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megha

@Smaggy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

suchi...😆 😆 😆 😆

yr tu inte bade wali nautanki nikle haa.😆

suchi,,,i started to laugh from the title i read,

i laughed more and more when i read character sketches,😉 😉

and when i started to read actual update, i was not able to read properly yr..😲.i was laughing like full too pagal..😆 😆

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u r super se be superrr writer..🤣...😉 😉

precap bhi assa ke mujhe weha bhi hanse aa gye...🤣