*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Suchi,
LAUGH OUT LOUD !! Tere FF mein comedy toh hona hi tha !! Jaaa aur Comedy Nights with Kapil mein Kapil Sharma ke saath compete kar... 😊 Tera FF mast hain !! Intro toh bole toh ekdum DHAASSSUU !! Mast tha. Bheje mein ekdum HULCHUL mach gayi 😆

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nazi786

@nazi786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Lovely update made me laugh
Please continue soon

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Suchi dear pehle tu many many congrates that you are writing your first story Im really happy 🥳

Machmach: Really good as always, yedi behna ka yeda bhai 😆😆

Geeta Kaul & Dr Kaul, sweet and cute as always 😃😃

Rasika more or less 😆 Acha howa woh us Aman ki wife ab mere Raghu pe line to nai mareygi 😡and makeup karna to uska janam se adhekaar hai 🤣

Aman, ok ok character 😃

Antara Naik, aww thank God raghu ki wife hai 😆 Loves her husband aww 😳😳

Raghu, mera HERO 😳😳 loves her WIFE aww too cute 😳 Rasika ka bhai too good 🤣

Rukhsana Naik, Hockey player 🤣 roz Satya ko hockey se mare to kitna maza aeye 😆😆

Satya Naik 😡 sorry but uska naam sunty hi gussa ajata hai 😆 Not so daring mast as always PHATTU kahi ka 😆😆

Daya Naik aka Daya Dayaan 😡😡 acha character pure punjabi 😆😆

Buntiya Naik

God too much hai yar Buntiya Daya ka pati parmeshwar I can't control my laughter Suchi yeh tune kya kiya 🤣🤣

Dont call your story crap kitna acha likhty hai KEEP WRITING yedi 😆😆

Love you 🤗

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Firstly I am really glad that RANTARA are married and they are celebrating their 1st Anniversary 😳😳 Thats Amazing

Rantara ki nok jhok Love, Hate aww Love them so much 😃😃

Itni raat ko ghar mein kon aaya hoga 😲 I have a guess Machu hi hoga or yeh kya face covered with monkeycaps itne zyada thand thy mujhe bhi thand lagne lagi 😆😆

Raghu to full on kumkaran ki tarha soya kitna uthaya utha hi nai yeda, or Sheru 😃😳

yeh kya Raghu chuha what was he saying, chor chuhe ko khana khila deygy 🤣

Aww Happy Anniversary too cute, but yeh kya yeda phir sogaya 🤣

Ruku ne Satya ko zor se push God Im so so happy hockey player apna jalwa dekha rehe hai 😆😆

Continue soon

Thankxx for pm 🤗

Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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swagata

@sweetieswagata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

ha ha...suchi kya story likhi hai yr...🤣

DM punjabi n Buntiya hubby of DM...rofl 🤣

raghu doing warm up at 2 a.m...lol...that reminded me of a scene of dil dosti dance...🤣

it was superb yr...abhi tujhko danda nhi marenge but agar jaldi update nhi kiya toh definately marenge 😈

update soon 😆

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Capucine

@Capucine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Suchita,

Sweetheart, what have u made?

Just can say than i ... Loved it! its so funny and cute

Kiret and Hina shld have blackmailed you before

It's really good

I liked the character sketch and everyting else

Please continue

Thanks for the PM

🤗❤️

Edited by Capucine - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

@nikki...u didn't unres till now?

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
@nikki...u didn't unres till now?

Suchi I just came to home now really tired Will unres soon 😕

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Suchi I just came to home now really tired Will unres soon 😕

okay...no problem do unres when u get time :)

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

OMG...FINALLY SUCHI started writing a story...😊
Yaaayy...I'm so happyyy 😃
The character Sketch was very impressive 😳
Finally Buntiya got promoted as being DM's husband 😆 😆 😆
Loved Rantara's chuha fight 😆
On the whole,It was a mindblowing update for me.. 👏
I'm so proud of you Suchi 👏 👏 👏
Now I can't wait to read more..
Pls do update soon.
Loads of love and wishes...Mwah 🤗