*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P - Page 4

Originally posted by: Smaggy

suchi...😆 😆 😆 😆

yr tu inte bade wali nautanki nikle haa.😆

suchi,,,i started to laugh from the title i read,

i laughed more and more when i read character sketches,😉 😉

and when i started to read actual update, i was not able to read properly yr..😲.i was laughing like full too pagal..😆 😆

🥳

u r super se be superrr writer..🤣...😉 😉

precap bhi assa ke mujhe weha bhi hanse aa gye...🤣

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Awesummm Post Megha...👏😆

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Suchi meri jaan..yeh tu hi hai na🤗

U hv written such a wonderful chapter 😛

Yar i really bow to ur sense of humour 😆

Mazaaa gya yar..sum lines cracked me😉

Raghu antu was funny side dekhane k liye

Thanks😊😊😊 n yes its sunthing new n different fr

Me...i njyed it yar..sab k sab character ache h..

Ruku ka best h yar.😆😆so funny...

Thanks ..jldi se update krna😳😃 waitibg

Ps..main zinda hun yar.. 🤣 pad k..

Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover

HOW DARE YOU!!!!...

Don't u dare call yr work crap..😡

OMG..we discovered a new talent of yours..😊

Your an awesome writer..👏

perfect story..At least there are no villians...pheewww...

BTW I know who the "chor" are..😛

Hint : Abroad walay...😉

RIGHT???..😃

Anyway..Amazing story..😃

You should write ore often..YOUR AMAZING..😊

Mwahhh..KEEP ROCKING..<3 <3 <3..

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Suchi,
LAUGH OUT LOUD !! Tere FF mein comedy toh hona hi tha !! Jaaa aur Comedy Nights with Kapil mein Kapil Sharma ke saath compete kar... 😊 Tera FF mast hain !! Intro toh bole toh ekdum DHAASSSUU !! Mast tha. Bheje mein ekdum HULCHUL mach gayi 😆

Originally posted by: nazi786

Lovely update made me laugh
Please continue soon

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Suchi dear pehle tu many many congrates that you are writing your first story Im really happy 🥳

thank u so much nikki baba😆...aapke aashirwad se humne ek story likhna shuru kr diya😆...thank u so much nikki..it means a lot to me yr...🤗

Machmach: Really good as always, yedi behna ka yeda bhai 😆😆

yup..mm to aise hi bhut achcha lgta hai..😆

Geeta Kaul & Dr Kaul, sweet and cute as always 😃😃

yes they r... bt here u will see a drastic change in both of them...😆

Rasika more or less 😆 Acha howa woh us Aman ki wife ab mere Raghu pe line to nai mareygi 😡and makeup karna to uska janam se adhekaar hai 🤣

here..she is good lady and loves her bhaiya bhabhi a lot...makeup ki dukaan rasika..😆

Aman, ok ok character 😃

Antara Naik, aww thank God raghu ki wife hai 😆 Loves her husband aww 😳😳

Raghu, mera HERO 😳😳 loves her WIFE aww too cute 😳 Rasika ka bhai too good 🤣

raghu is very good n inocent character no gunda wunda😆

Rukhsana Naik, Hockey player 🤣 roz Satya ko hockey se mare to kitna maza aeye 😆😆

yes..hockey player..haan bda maza aayega..😆

Satya Naik 😡 sorry but uska naam sunty hi gussa ajata hai 😆 Not so daring mast as always PHATTU kahi ka 😆😆

koi baat nhi😆..here he is very good n as i said not so daring//bt u will surely like him..😆

Daya Naik aka Daya Dayaan 😡😡 acha character pure punjabi 😆😆

Buntiya Naik

God too much hai yar Buntiya Daya ka pati parmeshwar I can't control my laughter Suchi yeh tune kya kiya 🤣🤣

kya krti yr...😆 yr badi tammna thi buntiya n DM ki jodi bnanae ki..to bna di...🤣

Dont call your story crap kitna acha likhty hai KEEP WRITING yedi 😆😆

Love you 🤗

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Firstly I am really glad that RANTARA are married and they are celebrating their 1st Anniversary 😳😳 Thats Amazing

Rantara ki nok jhok Love, Hate aww Love them so much 😃😃

Itni raat ko ghar mein kon aaya hoga 😲 I have a guess Machu hi hoga or yeh kya face covered with monkeycaps itne zyada thand thy mujhe bhi thand lagne lagi 😆😆

Raghu to full on kumkaran ki tarha soya kitna uthaya utha hi nai yeda, or Sheru 😃😳

yeh kya Raghu chuha what was he saying, chor chuhe ko khana khila deygy 🤣

Aww Happy Anniversary too cute, but yeh kya yeda phir sogaya 🤣

Ruku ne Satya ko zor se push God Im so so happy hockey player apna jalwa dekha rehe hai 😆😆

Continue soon

Thankxx for pm 🤗

Originally posted by: Smeera123

res😆

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata

ha ha...suchi kya story likhi hai yr...🤣

DM punjabi n Buntiya hubby of DM...rofl 🤣

raghu doing warm up at 2 a.m...lol...that reminded me of a scene of dil dosti dance...🤣

it was superb yr...abhi tujhko danda nhi marenge but agar jaldi update nhi kiya toh definately marenge 😈

update soon 😆