*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P

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Sushmitha

@.sushmitha.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Smaggy
suchi...😆 😆 😆 😆
yr tu inte bade wali nautanki nikle haa.😆
suchi,,,i started to laugh from the title i read,

i laughed more and more when i read character sketches,😉 😉
and when i started to read actual update, i was not able to read properly yr..😲.i was laughing like full too pagal..😆 😆

🥳

u r super se be superrr writer..🤣...😉 😉

precap bhi assa ke mujhe weha bhi hanse aa gye...🤣

Awesummm Post Megha...👏😆

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megha

@Smaggy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Awesummm Post Megha...👏😆

thanks sush...ye sab suchi ke funny dose ka kamal hai...😆 😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ankusanu
Suchi meri jaan..yeh tu hi hai na🤗
U hv written such a wonderful chapter 😛
Yar i really bow to ur sense of humour 😆
Mazaaa gya yar..sum lines cracked me😉
Raghu antu was funny side dekhane k liye
Thanks😊😊😊 n yes its sunthing new n different fr
Me...i njyed it yar..sab k sab character ache h..
Ruku ka best h yar.😆😆so funny...
Thanks ..jldi se update krna😳😃 waitibg

Ps..main zinda hun yar.. 🤣 pad k..

priyu.🤗...haan yr main hi hun...🤣

thank u so much 😃.i was really scared n i ate up my so many nails after posting this update..😆

oh really.😛.i tried to make it funny n i am very glad that u liked it..😃

rukku will be more interesting..actually not only rantara bt theri family members r of different kind..🤣

i will try to update it soon...😆

oh mujhe jaankr bhut khushi hui yr ki tum sahi slamat ho.😃.jeendi raho😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Niyaz_Lover
HOW DARE YOU!!!!...
Don't u dare call yr work crap..😡
OMG..we discovered a new talent of yours..😊
Your an awesome writer..👏
perfect story..At least there are no villians...pheewww...
BTW I know who the "chor" are..😛
Hint : Abroad walay...😉
RIGHT???..😃

Anyway..Amazing story..😃
You should write ore often..YOUR AMAZING..😊
Mwahhh..KEEP ROCKING..<3 <3 <3..

i will call it..because it is a crap for me..😆

thank u so much ifs..😳

ya..its free of villans ..😆

u will come to know at the end..😆

i will try bt abhi ek hi pura ho jaye bs...🤣

thanks a lot again😛

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron
Suchi,
LAUGH OUT LOUD !! Tere FF mein comedy toh hona hi tha !! Jaaa aur Comedy Nights with Kapil mein Kapil Sharma ke saath compete kar... 😊 Tera FF mast hain !! Intro toh bole toh ekdum DHAASSSUU !! Mast tha. Bheje mein ekdum HULCHUL mach gayi 😆

thanks a lot prerna dear...😃

i am so glad that u liked it...😃

arey nhi yr..kahan kapil kahan main😆..he is comedy king i can't ever think to compete with him.😊.thanks a lot for suggestions...it means a lot to me that u thought i can compete with kapil...😳😛

thanks a lottt!!!!!.😃.aage aur hulchul machegi.🤣...luv u mwahh!🤗

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: nazi786
Lovely update made me laugh
Please continue soon

thank u so much dear..😃will try to do it..😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Suchi dear pehle tu many many congrates that you are writing your first story Im really happy 🥳

thank u so much nikki baba😆...aapke aashirwad se humne ek story likhna shuru kr diya😆...thank u so much nikki..it means a lot to me yr...🤗

Machmach: Really good as always, yedi behna ka yeda bhai 😆😆

yup..mm to aise hi bhut achcha lgta hai..😆
Geeta Kaul & Dr Kaul, sweet and cute as always 😃😃

yes they r... bt here u will see a drastic change in both of them...😆

Rasika more or less 😆 Acha howa woh us Aman ki wife ab mere Raghu pe line to nai mareygi 😡and makeup karna to uska janam se adhekaar hai 🤣
here..she is good lady and loves her bhaiya bhabhi a lot...makeup ki dukaan rasika..😆
Aman, ok ok character 😃
Antara Naik, aww thank God raghu ki wife hai 😆 Loves her husband aww 😳😳
Raghu, mera HERO 😳😳 loves her WIFE aww too cute 😳 Rasika ka bhai too good 🤣
raghu is very good n inocent character no gunda wunda😆
Rukhsana Naik, Hockey player 🤣 roz Satya ko hockey se mare to kitna maza aeye 😆😆
yes..hockey player..haan bda maza aayega..😆
Satya Naik 😡 sorry but uska naam sunty hi gussa ajata hai 😆 Not so daring mast as always PHATTU kahi ka 😆😆
koi baat nhi😆..here he is very good n as i said not so daring//bt u will surely like him..😆

Daya Naik aka Daya Dayaan 😡😡 acha character pure punjabi 😆😆
Buntiya Naik

God too much hai yar Buntiya Daya ka pati parmeshwar I can't control my laughter Suchi yeh tune kya kiya 🤣🤣
kya krti yr...😆 yr badi tammna thi buntiya n DM ki jodi bnanae ki..to bna di...🤣

Dont call your story crap kitna acha likhty hai KEEP WRITING yedi 😆😆

Love you 🤗

thanks a lot nikki fr giving special review fr CS😃...i am super glad yr..will do😆

aww luv u too baba...🤗😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Firstly I am really glad that RANTARA are married and they are celebrating their 1st Anniversary 😳😳 Thats Amazing

Rantara ki nok jhok Love, Hate aww Love them so much 😃😃

Itni raat ko ghar mein kon aaya hoga 😲 I have a guess Machu hi hoga or yeh kya face covered with monkeycaps itne zyada thand thy mujhe bhi thand lagne lagi 😆😆

Raghu to full on kumkaran ki tarha soya kitna uthaya utha hi nai yeda, or Sheru 😃😳

yeh kya Raghu chuha what was he saying, chor chuhe ko khana khila deygy 🤣

Aww Happy Anniversary too cute, but yeh kya yeda phir sogaya 🤣

Ruku ne Satya ko zor se push God Im so so happy hockey player apna jalwa dekha rehe hai 😆😆

Continue soon
Thankxx for pm 🤗

yup..their first WA...😆

thanks fr rantara convo...😳

haan raghu is like a kumbhkaran only..sheru dogy is new character introduced..😆

neend mein aisa hi hota hai yr...😆

rukku will show her jalwa..😆

will do..😊

mention not...thank u so much fr such a lovely review...i am so happy 🤗

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Smeera123
res😆

tum unres kab karogi..sam...🤣

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata
ha ha...suchi kya story likhi hai yr...🤣
DM punjabi n Buntiya hubby of DM...rofl 🤣
raghu doing warm up at 2 a.m...lol...that reminded me of a scene of dil dosti dance...🤣
it was superb yr...abhi tujhko danda nhi marenge but agar jaldi update nhi kiya toh definately marenge 😈
update soon 😆

thanks swagu..😃

yes..hubby of DM😆

raghu is like this only.😳..oh okay...😆

ye kya baat hui..next update ke liye danda!!!🤣

will try to do it..😆

thanks fr superb comments..😛