*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P

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.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Capucine
Suchita,

Sweetheart, what have u made?
Just can say than i ... Loved it! its so funny and cute
Kiret and Hina shld have blackmailed you before
It's really good
I liked the character sketch and everyting else
Please continue
Thanks for the PM
🤗❤️

thank u so much audrey...😃

i tried to make it lil funny bit becoz..its my first story..n i was hell nervous😆

thanks a lot again..😃

will do it..😆.

mention not..😊

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset
OMG...FINALLY SUCHI started writing a story...😊
Yaaayy...I'm so happyyy 😃
The character Sketch was very impressive 😳
Finally Buntiya got promoted as being DM's husband 😆 😆 😆
Loved Rantara's chuha fight 😆
On the whole,It was a mindblowing update for me.. 👏
I'm so proud of you Suchi 👏 👏 👏
Now I can't wait to read more..
Pls do update soon.
Loads of love and wishes...Mwah 🤗

han yr i was scared of hina n kiret...😆

thank u so much.😃

yes..dm n buntiya ki jodi bna dali...😆

i am so gald that i am getting such a response from one of the talented writer😃

u have to wait..😆

will try to do..😆

thank u so much purple..fr such a lovely comments..luv u too..mwahhh!🤗

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: hayakhan5
Suchi yeh jo bhi hai mast hai...
Hahahhhahhaah...Loved ur idea.....
buntiya naik hahaha...
ur post ka hero... daya mai ka love of life...
Satya an rukku...
great pair...
hahahahah its amazing when i read she keeps hockey stick...
sahib toh gaya...
rasika ka intro was mast...
Raghu is funny...
and antara is still antara...
Tooo goooddd...
U were amazing...
thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...

i loved ur first line"ye jo bhi hai mast hai.."😆

yahan sab hi hero hain...😆

she keeps HS very carefully...😆

thanks fr awesome comments haya..😃

mention not.😊

will try do..n i will pm u forsure.😛

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ifians
suchi yaar this is height man...😆
i don't know what to comment i sm laughing like hell... and rolling on my bed...🤣
okk okk let me take a breath...😆
it was just tooo goooddd👏👏👏
never read so much funny story for so long.. it actually made my day,,,⭐️
sorry for being late i was out of town...
love dm's punjabi and buntiya ji...😆
sattu and ruku too funny.,.
and raghu... uske dialouges ne to hasa hasa ke pet dard kar diya...🤣
aur ye MAN1 nd MAN2... sorry to say but they were my fav in this chapter...😆
it's a gr8 story yaar thx for sharing it with us..
sorry for being late i was outside town...😆

RIA!!!...haan yr is baar kuch jyada hi hogaya..🤣

roll krte krte bed se gir mat jana...🤣

haan lelo lelo...😆

thhaaannnkkk uuu sooo muucchhh!!!!!!🤗

is that so?😲i can't believe u😆...by saying this u made my day..😛⭐️..

alright..y to say sorry?..i am happy that u liked them..😆

thanks a lot again..😃

its okay..no problem...😊

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.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.
Oye... Abh yeh kya kar rahi hai tu... Story likh rahi hai... plz yaar... aakhir hum kab tak bardaash karenge yeh sab uh... pehle tumhara crazy posts aur abh story... ohhh god... forum wasiyon ko koi bachao...🤣

Okayyy fine... jokes apart,,,, sach kahu toh, ua update is really awesummm... Especially that character sketch... i enjoyed it yaar...

U r different leve... teri brain ko museum main rakhna chahiye... Hatzzzoff tsuchi...👏

Waiting fo ua next update...😉

sahi boli sush..ek tu hi hai jisne mujhe shai samjha 🤣...pta nhi mere bheje mein chemical locha ho gaya hai😆...kya karun?..😆..sahi hai yr..bardaash krne ki bhi hadd hoti hai..koi to bacha lo masumoon ki...🤣

loved ur comments alot!!!😃

thanks fr loving CS...😛

museum mein mera brain.😆..is layak nhi hai yr..chota sa hi hai...aur ek hi hai..🤣

thanks alottt!!! sush...fr such funny comments..🤗..luv u yr...😊

okay...😆

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.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: amfi123
loved it
antara and raghus love hate talk -loved it

continue soon

thank u so much amfi.😃

will do it dear..😛

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Smaggy
suchi...😆 😆 😆 😆
yr tu inte bade wali nautanki nikle haa.😆
hi yedi...haan yr is baar to too much hogaya🤣
...suchi,,,i started to laugh from the title i read,

thank u so much..randomly topic bheje mein aagaya..🤣

i laughed more and more when i read character sketches,😉 😉 ..

thanks fr loving CS..it means alot to me😃..bt aisa kya likh dala apun ne...jo tu itna hasreli hai...haan🤣

and when i started to read actual update, i was not able to read properly yr..😲.i was laughing like full too pagal..😆 😆

🥳

arey babare!!!!!😲.aisa bhi hosakta hai kisi ke saath?...😆

u r super se be superrr writer..🤣...😉 😉
hayee yedi...main to marjawa gud khake🤢..inne badiaya comments de dale re...😆...sab tumlogon ne bnaya hai...😆
precap bhi assa ke mujhe weha bhi hanse aa gye...🤣

oh...usmein bhi😆...mention not yr...😃

megha..i am so glad i can't tell u😃..ur comments are always..superb 👏n i am not a good writer bt u r a very good person.😊..ur comments are always special n unique as u.😃.it means a lot for me!!!!😳

thanks a bunch yr...luv u...muwwahh!!🤗