RANTARA-THIS IS NOT THE END (FF)EPILOGUE PAGE 47

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I HAVE GOT THE PERMISSION FROM THE aakritisri1111 WHO WROTE THIS SS .

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SO HERE IS THE START

He was waiting impatiently for her at Cafe. Looking his watch
again and again seems like Time has stopped from passing. Waiter has comethrice to take his order but every time he said "After Some time". A strong Dilemma going in his mind. How will he going to tell her about the reason he called her? What will be her reaction? Will she be able to bear wat he's going to tell her? But its good for both of them. Its better to solve it now inspite
of suffer due to this in future. Afterall he has full right to think of his Happiness. He thought. He was facing a war between his mind nd Heart. His heart is stopping him to do wat he's going
to do but his mind is asking him to go ahead nd think of his Happiness.



He was going through all dis when he saw her coming through
the door. She was wearing White Suit wid light matching jewellery. She wears no make-up as usual but still looks beautiful.

"How she managed to look like an Angel always" he thought
wen he saw her but den suddenly he came out from his thoughts realizing for wat he has came here for. By the time she came to his seat finding him lost in his own thoughts

Antara: Hi Raghu

Raghu: umm Hi Antara

Antara: Wat happen? U were lost somewhere

Raghu: nothing Antara. Pls Sit.

Antara takes her seat

Raghu: Wat took you so long to Come

Antara: Wo.. I got stuck up in traffic

Raghu: ok let me order something

By saying dis he calls d waiter nd places d order. After thewaiter goes Raghu again gets lost in his trail of thoughts. He was not sure fromwhere to start the conversation. He never felt uncomfort before Antara but todayhe don't know hw he's going to tell her. Antara notices his uncomfortableness.She can easily Guess wats running in his Mind through his Facial Expression.

"Someone has to broke dis silence" She thought nd decided to break d silence

Antara: Raghu, wat Happen?

Raghu(coming out from his Thought): Ummm nothing Antara

Antara: Raghu, I know u very well. Tell me wats bothering you. Since last few days I was noticing a change in you. U were not the Same Raghu whom I met. Wats Wrong? U wanted to say something to me? Don't hesitate Raghu u can tell me.

Raghu(To himself): Hw she always Read my mind? (den to Antara) yes Antara u r rite. I wanted to say something to u. Antara, wat I m going to say might hurt you. May be u'll never wish to see my face in future but Antara its important. I cant keep u in darkness anymore. Antara I cant continue this Relationship. In last few days I realized that the feeling between us was not Love. It was just an Attraction which I had towards you. U were saying na that I have changed. Yes Antara I changed because I realized that I don't love you. We cannot be happy in future nd it'll good to stop dis relationship here only. Lets break-up nd move on in our respective lives. It'll be good for both of us. See we'll always be good friends but not more den dat.

He said all in once without looking at Antara once because he knows if he looks at her then he'll again get distracted nd he dont want dis. After completing he looks at Antara who was looking at her silently wid no reaction. Raghu has expected that Antara might Shout at him, she may Cry after hearing dis but Antara did none of dis. infact he listened to him patiently nd den smiled slightly which makes Raghu more surprised.

Raghu: Antara, wat happen? Y r u not saying anything? Atleast React once

Antara still didn't said anything

Raghu(getting restless): Antara, ur silence is killing me. Pls say something

He waited impatiently for Antara to speak

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INDEX
PART1 and PART 2=page1.

PART 3-page 3

PART 4-page 4

PART 5-page5

PART 6-page 6

PART 7and 8-page 7

PART 9-page9

PART 10-page-10

PART 11 and 12 -page-12


PART 14-page-17

PART 15-page-18

PART 16-page 20

PART 17-page 21

PART 18-page 22

PART 19 AND 20-page 24

PART 21 and 22-page-26

PART 23 ,24 AND 25 -page 29

PART 26-page33



PART 29-page 44

PART 30-page 45

EPILOGUE-page 47

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its something different.. raghu trying to get away from her because of some reason and antara trying to prove to him that he still loves her by keeping silent and showing him how it disturbs him ...
waiting for next part..
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i will update th next part after editing tonight
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here is part 2 of the os

He waited impatiently for Antara to speak

Antara was about to speak something when waiter came wid their Order

Raghu's monologue:

Damn! This waiter has to come nw only wen she was about to say something. But y she is so silent. She is never like dat. O God! Did I did something wrong? Is she OK? Her silence is more dangerous then her screaming nd shouting. C'mon Antara speak something. Shout at me, Yell at me but don't sit like this. Say something Antara.

(Raghu's Monologue ends)

Antara's Monologue:

So Finally he said wat was in his heart. My worst Nightmare has came into reality. The thing for which I scared for so long has finally came true. I felt like my Heart is ripping Apart from my Body, like somebody is snatching my soul away from my Body. He has said all dis without any hesitation. Not thinking twice hw it'll affect me. Thank God! The waiter has came on tym. Atleast I got sometym to absorb wat I heard from him. He is right. We had no right to ruin each other's Happiness. Dnt cry Antara. Be strong

(Antara's Monologue ends)

Raghu: Antara'..

Antara came out from her trail of thoughts

Antara: yes Raghu

Raghu: u OK na

Antara(calmly): yes Raghu I m fine dnt worry. U r rite there is no need to continue dis relationship if anyone of us is not happy. Thanx for Telling all dis atleast nw none of us in d misunderstanding that the thing between is Love

Raghu: Look Antara I m Sorry But...

Antara: No need to say Sorry Raghu. U havent done anything wrong. I m used to of it

Raghu's monologue:

Is she really OK? Hw can anyone be so calm after hearing such a Harsh reality. She's definitely not Normal. Y is she not Yelling at me? Y is she not punishing me? Hw can she absorb it so easily

(Raghu's Monologue ends)

Antara's monologue:

I knw Raghu wat u r thinking? I know that u had expected me to cry, to yell at you, to scream at you. But I'll not do any of these. Antara Kaul is not dis much Weak that she cant face dis Reality. If I had faced so much Hardships in my lyf den I can Overcome from dis also. I'll not let a Single tear out of my eyes

(Antara's Monologue ends)

Raghu sees Antara taking out something from her Handbag nd to his Surprise he takes out the things which he has least expected. He takes out the Ring which he gaves her wen she has accepted her Proposal nd Teddy Bear which he has gifted her on their ! year Anniversary

Raghu: Antara, wats all dis?

Antara: Raghu these r the Things that u had given me. These were the Souvenir of our Love. But now wen dere is no Love between us den I don't have any Right to keep these things wid me. So I m returning it to u

"So Does it Mean she already had an Idea that today this Relationship is going to end." He thought

Raghu: Antara u dnt have to return me all dis. I mean...

Antara: its ok Raghu I'll not ask u to return my Gifts (she said while smiling) u can keep that wid u because I had given it to u because I truly Loved u. but now wen I came to know that u never Loved me I cant keep dis wid me.

Raghu: But Antara...

Antara: Raghu, Gift dis to the Girl wid whom u Truly fell in Love, not to every girl u met nd get attracted den later realize dat it was not love

Antara's Words Pierced Raghu's Heart. He don't know Why but he's not liking the way Antara returning his gift to him.

Antara: Tym for me to Go Raghu. Bye

She said nd kept her share of bill on d table. Dey always use to fight for dis thing. Raghu wanted to bear all expenses alone but Antara Believes in Sharing everything whether its their expenses or their joys nd sorrows nd today also she did the same thing but Raghu has not stopped her. he was still in shock by Antara's Behaviour. He came into senses wen he realized that Antara gets up to leave. . he don't know y but he wanted to stop her

Raghu: Antara, wait...

Antara stopped instantly nd turned to face him making sure that she didn't get weak

Raghu: Antara, we r still friends nd will always be. This thing will not affect our friendship.

Antara(smiled faintly): Good Bye Raghu! Take care always

She said nd turned to leave. Raghu watched her go outside d Cafe. He instantly followed her. he wanted to make sure that is she really ok. He saw her taking Taxi from d road. He quickly gets into his Car nd followed her making sure that she reached home safely nd don't do anything stupid during her way to home. He had heard many cases where people suicides after their failure in love nd he didn't want Antara to be Part of it.

Raghu's Monologue:

Y is she Behaving so strangely? Nd wait wat is she taking out from her Handbag. O gosh! The gifts that I had given her. she had brought dem wid her. but y? does she already knew about it. Hw she always reads my mind. But y is she returning it to me? I havent asked for it. I agree that the feeling between us was not love but the feeling behind giving dese gifts was Genuine nd nt fake. Y is she not understanding it nd y does it affecting me so much if I don't love her. y it pierced my heart wen she says that I should gift these to the girl wid whom I really fell in love. She is going now but y I want to stop her. Y I m having dis feeling that I will not able to see her again? I wanted to stop her I don't know y but I dnt want to let her go.

I stopped her. she stopped nd turned her face towards me. I saw her struggling hard to control her tears. Y she cant cry in front of me? Anyways I have to stop her. I had to tell her that we r still friends. But to my surprise she didn't react infact said Good Bye nd gone. Y is she doing dis? I can clearly See d pain in her eyes nd Voice wen she was saying Good Bye to me nd she left. I instantly ran Behind her. I saw her taking Taxi nd without thinking twice I get into my Car nd followed her. what if she do something to her? No Raghu, she wont do anything dnt get scared. Wait! M I getting Scared? But y? Y I felt that something is breaking inside my heart? Y m I feeling my soul going away from me? Y m I feeling that I lost something very precious? Anyways I kept all dis thoughts aside. Dis tym all I need is to make sure that she reached her home safely nothing else. This is not The End of my care, my genuine care for her

(Raghu's Monologue ends)

Antara's Monologue:

I had d Feeling that sooner or Later dis Day will come nd today since morning i was having intution about the result that will come after our meeting. it was Obvious from Raghu's Odd Behaviour from last few days. Somewhere in my heart i knew that Raghu has called me today for dis Purpose only therefore i brought all dose things which i thought belonged only to me. his Gifts . but nw Its tym for me to return all his Gifts to him, the gifts which I considered as souvenir but was nothing more den a thing to him. I'll not ask him for my gifts because my feeling were true, my love was True behind those Gifts. But yhe'll not understand it. He never understands anything. But its of no use nw. I handed his gifts nd was about to leave wen he stopped me. Y he stopped me nw? o god! Pls Help me I don't want to be weak in front of him. I know if I would be there in front of him for 1 more minute I couldn't be able to control myself. Pls Raghu dnt say anything which hurts me more. I cant take it anymore today. But to my surprise he asked me to be Friends forever. I know y is he saying dis so that I wont feel bad but I dnt needs anyone's Sympathy. I just Bid him Final Bye nd came outside.

I know may be this is the Last Tym m Seeing Him, last tym m talking to him because after dis we both move to our respective Directions. May be after sometym he'll forget that he had met someone named Antara nd found a new girl for himself. But hw will I forget him. But I had to be strong. I took Taxi nd headed towards home. I know many youngsters of my Age do something stupid after their failure in Love but m not in one of dem. Because my Life is not only mine, its also of d people who were close to my heart including Raghu. I know today I matter nothing to him but for me he'll always be in my heart no matter hw far he goes away from me. No matter if he doesn't loves me but I Love him nd its enough for me to be strong. Good Bye! Raghu Naik. I wish u gets ur True Happiness nd True Love very Soon. for me there's no hope left. This is The End for every feelings in my heart.

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Nice concept i do love it please update fast i need to know antaras reaction
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i have update second part in the first page
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woww...
it's beautiful and quite different..
luvd it..
thanks for pm..

will read second part tomorrow..
kinda busy today..
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omg i was listening to the song judai when i read this and now i have tears in my eyes
pls cont soon
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OMG this is so heart wrenching ...i loved it ...so different n unique...cont soon n pm me ...

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