Baby ( fan fic).. Do read Plz - Page 9

lol..cant figure out what to keep as a surprise for ridz..hmm..any ideas?
aur armaan ke parents kahaan se aarahe hain?

bt bythway whre r all sonia,sheena,sara nd ya prapti jisne ye ff shuru kiya hai wo madam kaha hai koi dhundo unhe..........

we'll have to PM them and ask.."where are you guys?!" lol..kaunse knukkad mein chupe heu hain?

ARE YACHNA FIKAR KYUN KARTI HO SONIA IS HERE N AS I STARTED D SURPRISE STUFF I'LL POST IT
sry yaar i had to study kal xam hai maths ka buh i have 5 mins 2 rite d next part
btw awesum continuation guys waah waise full mornin scene ws awesum
here i go wid d next part
armi goes 2 d washroom n is taking lot of tym to get ready while ridz has prepared d breakfast n is waiting 4 her husband jo neeche ytarne ka naam nahin le raha...
she goes upto her room leavin d kids wid kaka(dere servant an old one ramu kaka)
R:shouting 4m outsde d washroom:Armaan 9:30 ho rahe hain tum abhi tak washroom mein ho..baahar bhi aaoge yaa nahin.
A:from inside...nahin i wont cum out
R:baahar aao (angrily)
A:nahin nahin nahin(talkin lyk a baby)
ridz gettin all angry opens d door n finds armi all dressed up buh still inside d washroom before ridz can say anything armi grabs her from her waist n pullss he rtowards him
ridz melting
R:tum tayaar ho toh yahaan kya kar rahay ho
A:mein oth kab ka tayyar tha woh toh bas apni JAAN ke saath few tym paas karne ke liyaya wait kar raha tha aur jab tumhaare aane ki aawaaz suni toh ander washroom mein aagay...lyk d plan???wid a naughty smile
Ridz bursts out laughin gives armi a kiss on d cheek n says:bas ab chalo jao tum ne mom dad ko lene jaana hai
A:oye hoyeeeeeee....saas aur sussar ka itna intizaar ho raha hai
kabhie mera toh aise intizaar nahin kiya
n sum more fun stuff happens n after all d romance armi leaves at 10:15
now he goes to d airport n meets his parents n brings em home n while cumin home he tells his parents abt d surprise dey both r very happi k armi has become so responsible n is in love....
Well dey all reach home n armi's parents go in ridz is standin dere wid a pooja ki thaali in her hand
all d religious stuff happens n den dey all sit
AR n armis mom dad r sittin in d lounge wid d kids n r all talkin abt everything u know...
n suddenly armi's phone starts ringing
armi excuses every1 n says i'll jus cum
ridz is sort of confused to c his behaviour coz he has never talked on d phone lyk dis i mean to say he has never talked on d phone secretly
......
soooooooooooooooo who is armi talkin tooooo?????
ok guys i know is part mein itna maza nahin aaya
buh i promise after abt 5 to 15 mins i'll post d nezt part
luv sonia

ok guys reply karo
sana u have been askin 4 it naaaaa..???????
n yachna aap toh offline ho gayi 😭
ab comment karo guys
luv sonia

aww gr8 part sonia.. would love to read more... n m so sorry that i am not continuing as i have got some assignments to hand in so my mind is full of htat so i don't think i'll be able to do justtice to the story so m refraining from writing

next part here.....
OMG em riting too much today
khair its fun doin dis!!!!!!!!!!
here....
armi jus talks very secretly on d fone n also says:ok honey..talk 2 u laterz n gives a kiss to d person on d fone....
ridz notices dis n gets all angry when armi cums she asks yeh kiska fone tha?
A:woh atul....
R:unmm acha(n she is angry k y wud armi lie to her he wont call atul honey)
armis parents r so happi k ridz cares so muc abt armi
khair den....
armi drops ridzi at her mehka at 5:30 in d evening wid d kids n makes sum excuse k he got a call form d hospital
meanwhile ridz gets dressed at her mehka as she has taken her clothes wid her muski is also dere n sapna tooo
now armi goes at atul's place rahoool is also dere n all 3 boys talk now
A:aray tum logon ki bhaabhi toh aise jal rahi thi jaise mein sach mein atul se nahin balke kisi ladki se baat kar raha tha...n all laugh
R:toh ridheeema.....armi gets angry
R:acha baba ridheema bhaabhi nay poocha toh kya kaha kaun tha fone per
A:atul aur kaun mein apni wyf se jhoot nahin bolta
At:ohhho per phir bhi ridz ko teri honey ki wajah se toh yahi lage ga na k koi ladki thi....
hehe
all laugh now as dey know k now dere plans gonna b tooo damn gd...
A:acha toh tum donon ki practice dekhein
ATUL n RAHOOL show him n he says i luv it
dekho ab wahaan tum log yaar bedagark na kar dena
n dey all aggre
At:yaar tere surprise ki saari tayyariyan toh ho gayin hain na?
A:ofcourse...thts not a big deal
ab aage aage dekho JAAn tumhaara armaan kya kya karta hai(murmerring to himself)i promise jaan u n our kids will b soo happi wid my surprise(murmerring to himself)

ok guys
10 mins baad next part
luv sonia

Originally posted by: pari0706

aww gr8 part sonia.. would love to read more... n m so sorry that i am not continuing as i have got some assignments to hand in so my mind is full of htat so i don't think i'll be able to do justtice to the story so m refraining from writing

no prob yaar buh do continue when ever u get tym to

n read d next part n comment

luv sonia

hey guys...
...been following dis ff 4 a while...n must say sum v.nyc parts r written here!!

hi yachna...dint knoe u r here too! 😆 😆

n sonia ji...ur on a writing spree!! 😆 😆

cant wait 4 ur next part though...do cont. soon!!


Marisha 😳

nice part sonia.. luved reading it .. abt time ya definately but not this week atleast as i have 2 assignments due this week n i haven't finished them 😆 reading also takes time but can't resist agar likhne bethungi toh toh gayi kaam se 😆

-Pari 😳