Baby ( fan fic).. Do read Plz - Page 11

Originally posted by: yachna

hiiiiii sakshi my deer how r u yaar i am totaly tird tody bcz lots of wrk yaar waise try kar rahin ho jab achi si practice ho jaygi tab WAHA PAR BHI TRY KAROONGI WHT SAY....... waise itna bura bhi nahi likhti na🤗

di bura?????r u joking bahut acha likhti hai aap waha par bhi jaaroor likheye!!!!1

plz sonia we r waiting continue soon!!!!

hey guys..may i proceed? lol 😛

yea...plz go ahead!!

i hv no idea where sonia has disappeared...her 10 mins r still nt ova!! 😆


Marisha 😆 😆

muskaan....raool ko chata na m are to accha hai 😆

ok here goes *still waiting for sonnia btw*

Armaan- tu boltha hai ya mein bolun? he grins wickedly to atul
Atul-chee..sharam kar, teri saali hai woh!
Armaan-par champ,tu kab se sirf "anjali" pe atka hua hai!

Atul-ok yaar,ab bolunga..tum..tum ek kaam karo na, ridz aur muskaan ko leke kahin jao na, woh log distraction banege mere leye, concentration chahiye yaar in mamlon mein!

Armaan-(getting irritated) abe tu! distrac--champ ab bohot hogaya , jaldi kar warna--"

Atul-theek hai theek hai.Tumhein mere poudon ki kasm armaan, agar ye plan flop hua na tho dekh!"

Armaan-tu jatha hai ya! he reaches out to hit atul"bada aya..(imitating atul) paodon ki kasam! hmph!

Next Scene--
Anjali is coming out from the kitchen, walking towards dining room.Atul is running towards the kitchen.Both collide

Atul-Anjali! tum theek tho ho?

Anjali-tum dekh ke nahin chal sakthe kya? shes angry
Atul-magar main tho--

Anjali-whatever! abh hato mujhe jana hai,party ka time horaha hai,guests aane hi wale hain

saying this anjali moves forward,but atul grabs her hand and forcefully pulls her back(wow! atul?...when did this happen?! 😛 😉 )

Anjali is way too surprised at atuls behaviour to say anything

Atul-tum hamesha mujhe ithna attitude kyun dethi ho anjali? jabhi mein tumse kuch kehna chatha hoon,hamesha meri baat kaat dethi ho.

Anjali-(shes feeling flustered for the first time in her life 😆 ).At..Atul mein --"

Atul-mujhe bolne do! why anjali? tumhein kyun lagtha hai ke ye duniya sirf tumhare charo aur ghoomti hai?!
akhir baat kya hai? mein ithna bura tho nahin hoon anj.

Anjali is too stunned to say anything, she just keeps staring at atuls straight face,bewildered!(way to go atul!)

Inside Atul is thinking and jumping with joy "are armaan! tera plan perfect hai yaar!..I love you mere dost!"
Anjali is feeling nervous,sorta 😉

Anjali-Atul..mujh..mujhe jaana hai,hato! tum na pagal ho gaye ho!
Atul-haan anjali,pagal tho mein hogaya hoon..he walks closer to her and whispers in her ear "tumhare leye"

Anjali is staring at him wide eyed! (omg! just imagine atul doing that! hahaha..lol kind of funny and too cute!)

atul summons up all his courage and says "zyada se zayada tum kya karogi? na hi kahogi na? sirf mera dil hi tho thotega, aur usse tumhein kya...hena anjali?"
atul inside is doing cart-wheels inside..hes soo happy to see anjalis stunned expression.

Anjali-At..Atul, ye..tum,*god* atul tum kya kehna chah rahe ho.." tryng to remain cool
Atul-going on knees "Anjali..I love you, kya tum mujhse pyaar karthi ho?

CONTINUE GUYS...! 😊

haha..guys imagine and continue next someone.. 😊

ithne sare ache writers he yahan par..think of something good..lol
Im imagining anj's face! 😆

hmmm nice part i liked it
keep it up
and plz someone continue
but i have a request plz write armaan riddzz and babies scene more.
sry if i said something wrong
but this ff is gr8

"I AM EXTREMELY SORRY EVERY1 I AM SOOOOOOOO SORRY"
"PLZZZZZ FORGIVE ME FOR KEEPIN U WAIT FOR SOOOOOOOOOO LONG GUYS
N SANA YAAR THANKU SOO MUCH 4 CONTINUING"
ACTUALLY GUYS I HAVE MY MATHS XAM 2MORROE N WHEN I SAID K I'LL B BAK IN 15 MINS MY TUTOR CAME N I HAD TO GO....N NOW AFTYER FINISHING I AM HERE
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRRY
OK NEXT PART DEFINITELY CUMIN IN 15 MINS
LUV SONIA

wow...wat a part!!!

saw Atul in a totally diff. view!!!

gud upd8!!!

n waitin 4 urs Sonia


Marisha 😳