Baby ( fan fic).. Do read Plz - Page 10

Originally posted by: nix nd soni

ok guys reply karo
sana u have been askin 4 it naaaaa..???????
n yachna aap toh offline ho gayi 😭
ab comment karo guys
luv sonia

*Eeep* good thing I didnt post my part..or else confusion ho jatha..lol

the whole time I had been typing my part ..haha..but I like yours way better..

good going sonia! (man..that was a close one..good thing I didnt post the story)

wowow! jaldi karo sonia..(lol..I so want to read how raool and atul propose to muskaan and anjali..and RIDZ KA surprise!)
goodness..! Im so impatient 😉
😆 armman called atul..honey? 😆 😆
that was so funny!

Plz send it fast can't wait any more. 😊

sonia yaar..where did you dissapear? 😕

ok folks Im writing the next part..just gimme 5 mins..
seems like everyones offline

no, sana i am still online to read the next part
Plz send it soon.

hey even i m waiting 4 de next part...pls continue..........

me 3!!!

lolzz...do cont. soooon!!


Marisha 😆

aight..but Im leaving out the surprise..sonia is gonna complete that part 😊 . Here goes

They are at Ridhimas house now.Its evening, ridhima is upstairs with the twins and anjali is with her.
Atul,armaan and raool..are downstairs, dicussing final tactics IF something goes wrong at the last minute (like atul and raool chicken out from proposing.. 😆 )

Raool-yaar atul,mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha hai..ithni jaldi ithna sab kuch hogaya..meine tho socha bhi nahin tha ke mein..aur muskaan ko, ithna jaldi--

Atul-are tu fikar kyun kartha hai yaar! hamare saath armaan hai na! the expert..kuch nahin hoga dude!

Raool-haan..expert, isleye ridhima jaise sweet si ladki is langur ke jaal mein phans gayi.
they laugh (giggle) silently

Armaan hears them- kyun hans rahe ho tum dono? huh?
Atul-nahin armaan ,kuch nahin..hum tho bas teri tareef karahe the...
Armaan-acha beta, mujhe kya bewakuf samjha hai? yaad rakho tum dono mujh pe depend ho..
Raool-(a bit of old raool coming back) are ja ja, teri zarurat kise hai...

Armaan walks toward him-abe oye kan khajure, muskaan bilkul theek kehti hai,tu na kabhi nahin sudrega..
Raool-oye, tu muskaan ke bare mein kyun bolrae tujhe to--
Armaan cuts him in the middle "kyun..jalan ho rahi hai?" armaan laughs (the way he laughed remember when raool had been told by dr.kirti that he had to do 2 weeks rectal examinations..oh boy! 😆 😆 )

Atul-are guys tum dono lad kyun rahe ho..please armaan mujhe bohot tension horahi hai..kcuh kar yaar..

Armaan-are tu..atul tu pagal hogaya hai kya, koi jung ladne jaraha hai kya? sirf propose tho karna hai.."

Atul-tere leye woh "sirf" hosaktha hai armaan, par anjali mera sab kuch hai. He gets all dreamy eyed

The girls all come downstairs...

Anjali-"what the hell is going on? tum log sab aise position mein kyun ho?..atul?

Atul-straightens immediatly, "uh..sorry anjali"
Armaan hits his forehead

Atul-I mean, anjali..erm mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.."

Atul is getting extremely nervous..

Raool is biting his lip, and staring at muskaan who looks at him..then suddenly looks away.
Raool tries to hide his smile

Armaan is encouraging atul, silently.."chal mere champ!, you can do it!"
Anjali is standing with her hands folded, and ridhima is silently laughing at atuls facial expression

to be contd...
(or anyone can continue, or gimme 15 mins more.. 😛 )

*btw..what to keep as the surprise, I think sonia knows..let her write that part* 😊

awwww...cute part!!

nw sonia plz cont.!!

ur suprise is makin me crazy!! 😆 😆


Marisha