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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
REEEEEEEEELLY NICE SHEENA..
guys every1 has done a gr8 job
dis ff is gonna go a long way...lolz
i'll cont...
now d day is over n every1 is packin up in d locker room rahoool is not dere...
armi asks muski:abay muskaan tune rahoool ko kai dekha hai woh darasal subha ladaai hui thi uske baad kahin mila nahin
M:pata nain yaar..mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi...i mean k woh kahaan hai...i mean...nuthin
ARMI NOTICES THT MUSKI IS SORT OF SHYIN HE SMILES TO HIUMSELF n as he is leaving d locker room he says bye to every1 n as soon as he opens d door he bumps into rahoool
A:abay tu......he stop lookin at raoool who looks sort of tensed
HE SAYS TUUU TU... TU.. TU THEEK TOH HAI NA?
R:unm haan tu tu...tu kyun pooch raaha hai..woh kuch nahin...
every1 says bye n leaves n armi stays dere wid rahool sayin he needs to tke sumthin from d locker..
when every1s gone n only armi n rahoool r in d locker room amri is sittin on d bench n rahoool is packinup n thinkin of sumthin
Ra:tu ja nahin raha?
A:nahin woh meine socha tujhe meri madad chahiyay hogi...
R:kyun..unm mein kyun tumse madad maangoon...???lil confused as to wht armi is talkin abt?
A:wahi tujhe muskaan k baare mein meri madad ki zaroorat hai
rahoooooool shcoked
sum1 continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

ok i cud'nt keep it in my tummy toh em gonna continue my own part
lolz
here it is.
Ra:wht?????tum..i mean tu...tu yeh kya bol raha hai..mein aur muskaan..(rahool is sweating)mein ... mein...mere aur muskaan ke beech aisa waisa kuch nahin hai....
A:aray tu itna tensed kyun ho raha hai?meine toh abhi kuch aisa waisa nahin bola!!!kyun?tune kya soocha?aur yeh le roomaal paseena poch le(gives him a hankie)waise agar tere aur muskaan ke beech kuch hai toh bata mein sahi karta hoon...he is abt to burst out laughin
Ra:nahin nahin ... mera matlab...nahin..tu chod na...
A:acha chal banaana band kar....mein...mein jaanta hoon k tu muskaan se pyaar karta hai...n goes upto him n says...tu usse pyaar karta hai toh abhi tak bola kyun nahin..??????

Rahool is blank as he hasnt told any1 yet n is lost in his thoughts when armi cums n snaps his finger infront of him

A:abay ai kahaan kho gaya?

Ra:per meine toh abhi tak kisi ko nahin bola phir tujhe kaise pata????

A:yaane tu pyaar toh karta hai

Rahool at last admits n says:Acha sun tu..unm woh..tu...(bends down n says)pls pls plsssss armaan meri madad kar use propose karte huay bauhat ajeeb lag raha hai aur phir pata nahin woh kya kahe gi

armi says lyk a king:theek hai bacha hum teri muraad zaroor poori karein gay avashhei!!!

n starts laughin n rahoool gets up n says mujhe patra tha tu kabhi meri madad nahin kar sakta (upset) armi cums upto him turns him towards him n says:abay aiiii mein teri madad kar raha hoon aur tu mujhe hi suna raha hai...acha ab hatah mila

rahool doesnt shake hands instead he hugs ami nd ey both hug

lolz unki dosti bhi zaroori hai

A:chal ab tu ghar chal mere saath

Ra:per kyun?

A:abay tujhe [ractice karni hai na kal tu party mein use propose kare ga na

rahol aggrees n is damn hapi

as soon as dey reach at nani's place to pik ridzi

when ridzi cums she is lyk so abt 2 faint to c em together

armi: aray jaan mein iski help kar raha hoon muski ko pataane ke liyay

RI:KYAAAAA????????

Edited by nix nd soni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
CONTINUED
SORRY IF EM POSTING 3 PARTS IN LINE BUH YAAR KYA KAROON BARDAASHT NAHIN HO RAHA...LOLZ
SO HERE GOES
Ri:is shocked :tum..tum donon..ek saath...must b a dream n she asks armi 2 pinch her...
A:aray jaan yeh koi khwaab nahin hai i am seriously helpin him get muski when armi's cell rings n guess wht its atull
At:aray dost bauhat mushkil mein pada hoon wph anji ko propose karna hai kya karoon
A:tu foran mere ghar pauhanch
Ri:humaaray ghar per kya ho raha hai
ARMI: PRACTICE IN DONON KI CHALO AB HUMEIN BAUHAT KAAM KARNA AHI
dey all leave for armi's place
when d reach dere atul is already standin dere waitin for armi
A:waah bhai aashiq guru se pehle pauhanch gaya
chal ander chal
at:yeh rahool tere saath(V.SHOCKED)
ARMI TELLS HIM EVERYTHING N RIDZI TOO WHT HAPPENND IN D LOCKER ROOM WHEN DEY GET IN
SO NOW ALL R READY N REHEARSALS FOR ATUL N RAHOL START
atul proposes to armaan n den its soooooooo bad he asks rahol to do it
rahol says mein ridheeema ko propose karoon ga
A:abay ab woh teri bhaabhi hai ... ab toh line marna band kar(all angry)
Ra:abay mein mazaakh ka rraha hoon per ladki ko poropose karoon ga toh behta hoga aur theek hai mein isse bhaabhi hi kahooon ga ab theek
ridz bursts out laughin at dere behaviour
well ridzi goes to sleep wid d kids n all 3 guys practice all nite
ridzi knows tht rahoool n attul r practicing wht she doesnt know is tht even amri is planing a biiiiiiig surprise for her
NEXT DAY AT SANJIVANI..............
now u guys got to continue n d next day is d party
so keep tht in mind n whts d surprise????????
sum1 cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
wow guys lage raho sare or ache prts do guys u all wre amazng yaar ridz ko kya shock laga hai..........
sum1 cont.......

yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
arey yaar sonia u did really well but
mujhe samajh nai aaraha k party mein surprise kya hoga
m confused 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
one more thing just 2 remind u all

whoevr gonna cont. nxt remember tht Armaan's mom n dad r goinna cum in the morning.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
plz update next part soon waiting immpatiently.
Yachna,at least tell when there will be the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
awesome update guys awesome
muaaaaaaaaaaaaaah 👍🏼
a big hug 4m me 2 all of u
🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
hv sum patience guys nxt prt wll be soon bt now plz sum1 else cont.......plzzzzz bt i am also confusd wht wll be the surprise......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70

ok i'll go on wid the next part
itz 5'o' clock in the morning atul n rahul r back 2 their house n armi is really tiered n sleepy .he goes upstaire see tht ridz n the kidz r sleepin she goes n kissed his childrens on forehead n then goes 2 ridz n kisses her on her lips.......ridz opens her eyes n c tht armaan is sittin beside her on the bed starin at her
R:armaan itni jaldi uth gaye
A:mein soya hi
R:kya matlab
A:abhi toh gaye hai atul aur rahul
R:omg yane tum log poori raath........armaan ab sanjeevini jaana hai phir shaam mein p[arty bhi hai tum kaise karoge sab kuch
A:dont worry jaan meine doc keerhti se permission leli hai aur aaj meri chutti hai n m gonna sleep but only till 9'o' clock
R:yea i knw tumhe mom dad ko pick karna hai na air port se........ok ab so jao mein fresh hojati hun
A:arey tum bhi so jao na........mujhe akele neend nai aati(with a noughty grin on his face)
R:armaan......waise tum akele nai ho tumhare donon bche bhi so rahe hain tumhare saath aur ab tum bhi so jao
A:par meri gudnyt kiss
R:itz already morning armaan n she moves 2 the wash room before he cud catch her
Armaan smiles n go 2 sleep
R cums out of the wash room n watch three of them sleepin she thinks how cute they look while sleepin
itz 9'0' n time 2 wake armaan up
she goes 2 him
R:armaan utho 9 baj gaye tumhe mom dad ko laane jaana hai
A:sone do na jaan
R shakes him
R:plzzzzz.....armaan jaldi karo varna late hojaoge
n is 2 get up wen he holds her hand n pull her 2wards him
R:hmmmmmmm.........uthgaye aap
A:gud mornoin jaan
R:gud mornin......now chalo get ready soon
A:meri gud mornin kiss
R:woh toh tumne leli thi na subah jab tum room mein aaye the n gets off him
A:jaan this is not fair
R:armaan get ready
A:nai jab tak mujhe meri kiss nai milti i wont get ready
R:armaan late hojoge
A:i dont care
R:armaan........she stares @ his innocent puppy face fr few sec n goes 2wrds him n kisses him on his cheek
A:thtz beeter n hold her through her waist
R:ab jao jaldi
A:no n leans frwrd
R:armaan joa
A:no n leans more frwrd n ridz leans bck wrds
R:armaan
hez about 2 kiss her lips wen suddenly one of their child starts cryin
A:bas issi ki kami thi
R laughs a bit n moves 2wrds the child while sayin armaan
R:r:ab jaldi se jaake ready ho jao mein break fast lagati hun....hurry up
R(2her child):nai mera bacha mamma aagayi aise nai rote
armaan hugs her frm behind
R(getz a li'll angry):armaan jaaaaaaao late hojaogae
A:ok jaan gussa kyun horahi ho n kisses her on her cheek
n goes 2 washroon 2 get ready

plzzzzzzzz comment

Edited by sheena_12 - 17 years ago

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