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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: hiri

it was proper good i loved it thanx.


❤️hiri❤️



thanks...me glad u liked it 😛


Originally posted by: bhuvana3

aww Shona.. My dear dear shona.. I loved this dialogue the BEST ...
Veer: Shera ko Veer ki kasam..Veer bhi dekhe ke shera ki liye woh kya mayne rakhta hai 😍😍😍
I would like to see a more helplessly in love, confused, heartbroken Shera.. 😳 n I like the flirt Veer a lot 😳
Waiting for the next update... 😛



thank u bhuvana 😛
lagta hai ke ye sab ka fav dialogue hai 😆

there is a huge misunderstanding which will involve a heartbroken shera for sure
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ash_rajat00

👏 great
do continueeeeeeee



thank u

will continue 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: **Shona**


thank u bhuvana 😛


there is a huge misunderstanding which will involve a heartbroken shera for sure

I would love that heartbroken Shera and Veer trying to convince her n she not getting convinced n he pursuing her with determination 😍

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
Thanks for the update pls. do continue its a lovely fanfic 😉 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
do cont soon plz bocz it's lovely ff 😃 👏 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
thank u all!!! for ur kind comments...i love u all

nways heres the next bit


Veer: ye tum log kya keh rahe ho meri kuch samaj mein nahin ah raha

Dharam: tum ne Dharam baan ke Rajkumari Saanvi se shaadi ke liye kyun haan bola


Veer: meine koi shaadi ke liye haan nahin ki

Shera: aacha toh undar ho kya raha tha zara hum bhi jane

Veer: Shera kam se kam tum toh samjo...tum ek ladki ho zara socho ke Saanvi ne kaise armaan aur sapne sajayenge aur agar mein ahh kar usse keh du keh Dharam kisi aur se pyar karta hai...usse milna taak bhi nahin chahta toh uss par kya guzre gi

Dharam: toh jo tum kar rahe ho woh kya hai

Veer: mein kuch samja nahin

Dharam: tum uski ashayen aur bandh rahe ho Veer...zara socho agar woh tumhe Dharam samaje kar pyar karne lagi toh anjam kya hoga aur iss mein agar ye shaadi nahin hui toh woh bikhar jayegi

Veer: woh..mujhe se pyar...kaise

Shera: kyun...tum mein kya buraye hai...koi bhi tumse pyar kar sakta hai Veer

There is a pause in which Veer thinks about all that has been said

Veer: teekh hai mein Saanvi ko agli mulakat mein hi sach baata dunga...

he turns to Dharam

Veer: tab tak tum Sia se milne ki tayaari karo

Dharam: hum parso ja rahe hai...tab tak Bholenath ki kripa se yahann Saanvi aur iss shaadi ka mamla khatam ho jaye ga...Veer hum ghodoon(horses) ko dekh kar ate hain

Dharam walks off...knowingly leaving Shera n Veer together

Veer: mein chalta hoon

he didnt even look at Shera

Shera: Shera ko maaf kardo

Veer: abb kis baat ke liye

Shera: woh shera ne galat samja ke tum aur woh Rajkumari

Veer: baas!!!Shera ek mein hoon jo tum par ankhen bandh karke vishwas karta hoon aur ek tum ho ki mujhe par ek choti si baat ka vishwas nahin kar sakti...Shera jab humari riste mein vishwas he nahin toh ye rista he shayad nahin

Shera: veer aisa maat kaho

Veer: jo kehna aur sunaa tha woh ho chuka ab kuch bhi nahin baki

With that he storms off

Shera is left there in tears

Veer n Dharam come back to Aryanagar

on arriving Nivriti corners Dharam

Nivi: kaisi lagi apko Saanvi

Dharam: ji bua woh...

Nivi: acha baata ye ke apki taraf se haan hai

Dharam: bua humme aur Saanvi ko toda sa waqt chahiye ek dusre ko samaj ne ke liye

Aryavardhan enters

Arya: teekh hai hum apko waqt dene ke liye razi hai

Dharam walks off before they can ask any more questions


Precap: Shera climbs through Veer's bedroom window 😳

enjoy

Shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
Loved this part shona.. esp the angry veer 😳 n Shera coming in thru Veers bedroom window tomorrow OMG.. I cant wait for tomorrows part 😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
it was lovely and veer's gussa haila!!!! 😳


❤️hiri❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Hey Shona!!!
ur story is (shona) simply superb just like ur name.👍🏼
⭐️
plz continue the story. its really romantic n all the matter which is missing in DV(real story)⭐️

Waiting 4 the continution........

me tooooo...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
thanks for the update sona pls. continue cant wait 😉 😳

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