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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shukriya doston for ur kind words...im simply loving writing this ff n i hope u enjoy reading it
ok without making u wait longer heres the next part

Shera sitting at a river bank tears trickling down her cheeks

Shera: kyun Shera hamesha aise kuch karti hai jise Veer ko choot ponch ti hai...kyun Shera uss par vishwas nahin karti...kyun Shera usse baata nahin sakti ki woh Veer se kitna pyar karti hai

she crys more

Shikha enters n sits next to Shera

Shikha: didi app unse kyun mafi nahin mang ti

Shera: woh gusa ho kar chala gaya

Shikha: app agar unse sache dil se kuch kahengi toh woh mana nahin kare ga...app unse kal mil lena

Shera: kya woh sach mein meri baat ko samje ga

Shikha: haan

Shera: toh kal kyun humme Veer se milne abhi jaana chahiye

Shikha: abhi? kaise?

Shera: woh hum kar lenge baas tum humme kal subha durga maa ke mandir mein milna

Shikha: teekh hai

Shera goes towards the back side of the palace

Veer comes to Dharam's room where Dharam is looking out of the window at the stars and moon

Veer: usse milne ki betaabi hai

Dharam: hmm ab intazar nahin hota un badi badi ankhon ko dekhne ka jin mein hazaron kwab sajaye hai aur har ek mein humara naam hai...un gulabi hoton ka jinse ab sirf humara naam niklega aur... abb ye do din kaise katenge aur humari aur sia ki mulakat hogi

Veer: itna pyar karte ho toh toda sabar bhi karlo

Dharam: veer humme maaf kardo...aaj jo hua..

Veer: woh sab choodo aur aram se soo jao...aur sia ke kwab dekho

Dharam: Veer

veer runs out of there n goes to his room n to sleep keeping Shera way out of his thoughts


Shera on the otherhand easily mansges to get to the bottom of where Veer's bedroom is...now she had the task of climbing up the tower to get to his window

It took alot of effort but she got there and finally swung herself over the balcony and entered his room

She had come here for the first time and looking at it she cud tell it was Veer's room because of the colour schemes and the way everything was laided out.
There was a big painting of DV and there was Veer's sword

Shera walking in further towards the bed in which lay one of the two most handsome princes ever born
He was sporting a cute smile in his sleep and seeing this bought a smile to Shera's face
Shera wanted to kneal down and give Veer a kiss on the cheek but as she knealed Veer opened his eyes

Shera wuickly covered his mouth and indicated him to keep quite then removed her hand

the following conversation is in an undertone

Veer:tum! tum yahan kya kar rahi jo...chali jao

Shera: pehle tum humme maaf kar do

Veer: nahin...chali jao

Shera: nahin veer

Veer: ye kaisi zind hai

Shera: dekho Veer hum sab kuch choodh kar yahan aye hai tumhare paas ab agar tum humme nahin apna teh toh hum apne app ko katam kar denge

Veer: ye kaisa pagalpan hai

Shera: jab tak hum baba ke saath rehte hum khabhi tumare layak namhin baan pate..

Veer: kyun kiya aisa Shera

Shera: kuch waqt pehle tumne kaha tha ke tum nahin jaante ke humare bich dosti hai ya kuch aur par aaj mein janti hoon ke meri taraf se ye pyar hai...agar tumhe kuch hota hai toh taklif mujhe hoti hai...Veer aur ek baat mein tumhe kisi aur ladki ke saath nahin dekh sakti....mein tumse pyar karti hoon

Veer: Shera mein...


Precap: Veer: hum ek kamre mein raat saath nahin guzar sakte

Shera: teekh hai mein chali jati hoon

Veer: tum nahin ja sakti


enjoy

Shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
Another great update shona.. 👏 Loved the scene between Dharam n veer n Shera n Veer.. but why did Shera admit that she loves veer sooo soon ??


Precap: Veer: hum ek kamre mein raat saath nahin guzar sakte 😍😍 😍 Me already day dreaming abt it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Another great update shona.. 👏 Loved the scene between Dharam n veer n Shera n Veer.. but why did Shera admit that she loves veer sooo soon ??


Precap: Veer: hum ek kamre mein raat saath nahin guzar sakte 😍😍 😍 Me already day dreaming abt it



shes admitted it already coz she fears losing him to sanvi n like she sed she cannot bear to see veer with another girl 😃

and as for the precap well wait n watch 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: **Shona**



shes admitted it already coz she fears losing him to sanvi n like she sed she cannot bear to see veer with another girl 😃

and as for the precap well wait n watch 😳

oh I see that.. 😆 Shera is soo possessive abt veer 😳 n me waiting for tomorrow.. 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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TATA AWESOMEE!!!!!!!!
PLZZZZ GIVE US MORE STORIES! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great story shona....keep up the awesome work..cant wait for the next part...Pls. post it soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u all for reading n leaving comments 😉
heres next:

Veer: Shera mein....Shera mein kya...Shera tum ek achi dost ho

Shera: Shera iss ka matlab samaj gayi

Veer: abb Shera tumhe chal na chahiye

Shera: hum itni raat ko kaise ja sakte hai

Veer: par ek kamre mein hum raat kaise guzar sakte hai

Shera: teekh hai hum chale jate hai

She turns to leave but Veer holds her hand and moves closer to her

Veer: tum nahin ja sakti

Shera: kyun

Veer: bahar barish ho rahi hai aur tum bheegh jaogi

Shera: hum ek kamre mein raat kaise guzaar sakte hai veer

Veer: tab ki tab sochenge...

Shera: kya matlab

Veer: dikhata hoon

Veer walks out onto his balcony n gets wet in the rain

Veer:chalo

Shera: nahin nahin humme nahin bheegh na

Veer: soch lo shayad veer ke saath bheeg ne ka moka phir na milee

Shera goes over to him n gets drenched with him
slowly the two look at one another in the eye n stay looking for a long while

Veer: Shera mein bhi ...mein bhi tumse...tumse pyar karta hoon

Shera: itna hich khicha kar toh bol rahe ho

Veer: Shera mein tumse pyar karta hoon

Shera advances to hug Veer n veer hugs her back

They broke apart and look into one another's face

Veer was moving towwards Shera to kiss her when he came to his senses that at this moment in time it was wrong...he didnt want to hurt Shera in anyway

Shera backed off n goes back into the room

when Veer follows her she without looking at Veer says

Shera: abb Shera ko chalna chahiye

Veer: tum palang pe soh jao mein yahan soh jaon ga...aur kal subha chali jaana

Shera: par

Veer: mein aisa kuch nahin karunga jisi tumhe khabhi koi mushkil ka samna karna padeh ya tumhe taklif ho

There is a pause

Veer: aur ek baat...jo haath Veer ek bar thamle usse zindagi bhar nahin choodh ta...mein tumhe beech raaste nahin choodunga...soh jao...

Shera: hmm woh tumhare rajgharane mein kya kehte hai...shubh raatri

Veer: haha...tum bohat jaldi sikh gayi

Shera: saath chalna hai toh barabri toh honi he chahiye

with that they both give each other a smile n go to sleep

with shera in the bed n Veer on the sofa kinda thing


shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow that was just mindblowing keep up the good work shona dear.



❤️hiri❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aweee that was cho chweet...keep up the good work sona 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Shona........... what a lovely, dreamy love story between Veer-Shera......
Par this Saanvi......... omg she is a girl after my own heart........ She is brave, sofisticated, kind, well-behaved, sensible....!! I love her 👏
Dharam ........... poor dear........ u dont know what u are missing . Poor Dharam..... he is a clear case of 'Love is blind' But I love his love story with Sia 😳 ..... And plz plz plz, meri Saanvi ko vamp mat banana 😭 else Minnie will go bananas😆

I read your FF after a long time and thank God I did.... 👏 Other wise I wudn't even know what I missed.

Now me waiting for some serious plots , entwined in the love story off-course 😳

aagey kya hoga...... me waiting patiently........ actually not too patiently 😍 😉

Thoda 'precap' is garreb ki jholi mein daal detey toh achcha tha .......😛

Edited by minnie2308 - 17 years ago

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