Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 7

Nice one Shona........👏 loved ur couples😃

Looking forward for D-S and V-S next meeting.😛

Before Continuing i'd liek to say i wont be able to update after 6th march as im on vacation for a month

will miss u guys but for now here the next part

Shona

ok ab ageh:

Dharam looks shattered...

DV in Dharam;s room later that nite

Veer: maharaj se baat karo

Dharam: nahin kar sakti...woh maharaj Samar singh ko vachan deh chuke hai

veer thinks for a while

Veer: dharam tum rajkumari Saanvi se kyun nahin milte

Dharam: hum toh usse jante tak nahin

Veer: accha tum yahan rooko mein abhi kuch deer mein aya

Dharam: veer kahan ja rahe ho

Veer: mein baas abhi aya...tab tak sia ke sapne dekho

Veer leaves n goes to nivritis room

n hugs her from behind
Nivi: veer...mera bacha

Nivriti sits on the bed while Veer lies down with his head in her lap

Veer: maa ek baat pochu

Nivi: hmm bolo

Veer: ye...rajkumari Saanvi se ap khabhi mili hai

Nivi: haan abhi kuch din pehle hum Sunaiya gaye teh...Devi maa ke darshan karne

Veer: kaisi hai woh

Nivi: tum kyun jaan na chati ho?

Veer: maa samja karo...abb Dharam tumse pochni tode aye ga...woh sharma jaye ga

Nivi: ohhh haan ye toh humne socha bhi nahin ke Dharam toh Saanvi se mila bhi nahin

Veer: wahi toh...Dharam Rajkumari Saanvi se kaise shaadi kar sakta hai...usne toh Rajkumari ko dekha bhyi nahin hai

Nivi: tumhara matlab hai ke...

Veer: haan...dharam haan kehne se pehle Rajkumari Saanvi se mil na chahta hai...app kuch kijiye na

Nivi: hum abhi maharaj se baat karenge

Veer gets up n is abt to leave

Nivi: arre kahan ja rahe ho

Veer: Dharam se milne

Nivriti laughs to herself n turns

Nivi: pagal...

Veer comes back n gives her a hug

Veer: mein abse bahat pyar karta hoon aur app dunya ke sabse achi maa hai

she kisses him on the forhead n leaves

V goes to D's room again

Veer: ho gaya

Dharam: kya tumne pitahji ko maana liye ye rista na karne ke liye

Veer: nahin mujhe maar na thode hai...tumhari aur Rajkumari Saanvi ki mulkat ka intazam kar ke ah raha hoon

Dharam: veer unse milke hum kya karenge

Veer: batamizi

Dharam: kya...

Veer: hmm taki woh tumse shaadi karne se mana kar de

Dharam: nahin ye hum

Veer: teekh hai dosti karke saab kuch Sia aur tumhare bare mein baata dena

Dharam: abb aisa he kuch karna padeh ga



~~~~~~~~New Entry~~~~~~~~

The sun shone brightly through thr round window adding a mezmerizing glow to the pool of water but what made the water so beautiful was that it was surrounding one of the most beautiful girl in the world. Her giggle filled the chamber with a buzz of happiness. As she splashed water and moved her mid waist long hair out of her face her hazel eyes,pearly white teeth,pink lips,rosey pink cheekys,long lashes and fair complexion were revealed

"Rajkumari Saanvi" a dasi called

"boliye Prabhali" said Saanvi n her soft voice

Dasi: apke liye aryanagar se sandesh aya hai

Saanvi: kya

Dasi: arre ap toh sharma gayi

Saanvi: kya apko lagta hai woh humare liye teekh hoga

Dasi: Rajkumar Dharam se kabil koi ho hi nahin sakta apki liye

Saanvi read the letter:
Rajkumari Saanvi,
Hum jante hai ke apne humare bare mein apke pitahji se suna hoga aur humne bhi apke baare mein kafi suna hai par hum apse kudh milna chahteh hai...humme vishvas hai ke app bhi humse milna chahti hai....toh kya humari mulakat ho sakti hai...kaal sham ko Sunaiya ke bahar Devi mandir hai wahan...

Ummed hai ke hum kaal milenge

Rajkumar Dharam


Saanvi: humare jaane ka intazam karo...hum apse milne ke liye zaroor ayenge Rajkumar Dharam


Enjoy

Shona

AmAzInG SHoNa
ThE FF iZ AWesOme
tHaT Was so QUiCK ShONA 😆

thank u rekha,ppiyu,megha and bhuvana 🤗

gud part shona
it would be great if shera was shona there would be a great twist in the story
wat say everyone wouldnt tht be cool

oh wow.. its superb👏 👏 .. i just loved dharam;s letter 😳

hi everyone

well heres the next bit

Dharam: aacha toh hum unse milkar unse

Veer: woh kya tumhari pati hai jo tum uska naam leene se bhi sharmate ho 😆

Dharam: nahin par izaat toh deni he hogi na?

Veer: Rajkumar Dharam ap shayad bhool rahe ho ke app unse shaadi karne nahin balke tode ne ja rahe ho

Dharam: ye sab humse nahin hoga....aur pitahji humme jaane kahan denge

Veer: lagta hai yojna badalni padeh gi

Dharam: veer...humare paas ek yojna hai...tum kyun nahin rajkumari Saanvi se Dharam baan ke milteh

Veer: mein...nahin nahin Dharam ye yojna bilkul na kaam ho jaye gi

Dharam: veer socho kitna maaza aye ga

Veer: nahin nahin...uss bichari ke sapne toot jayenge

Dharam: tumhe bohat fikar hai unki...Shera ko choodh Rajkumari saanvi ko pakad liya

Veer: nahin nahin

Dharam: tum kya ek Rajkumari se daar gaye

Veer: abb toh mein hi Dharam baan ke sanvi se milne jaunga...chalo


the boys leave for the Devi maa's mandir to meet Sanvi

On arriving there they look around for her

a dasi approache sthem

Dasi: app mein se Rajkumar Dharam kaun hai?

Veer: hum hai

Dasi: rajkumari Saanvi apka intazar kar rahi hai...bageche mein

Veer: teekh hai...

Veer turns back n gives Dharam a smile as he goes towards the bageecha


on the other hand a young girl around teh age of 14 goes to Shera

Shera: kya samachar layi ho Shikha

Shikha was the daughter of one of the men in Shera's tabila n she was wanted to be just like Shera. She was a little younger than Shera but was a brillient spy.

Shera had sent her to spy on Veer

Shikha: Shera didi kabhar hai ke Rajkumar Veer ek Rajkumari se milne ja raha hai aur milne ke badh unki shaadi uss rajkumari se paa ki ho jayegi

Shera: kya?

For the first time Shikha had the wrong information for she had only bits of the news

Shikha: haan

Shera: ye hum hone nahin denge...Ye kaun Rajkumari hai jisne Shera ke Veer ko dekhne ki himmat ki hai

Shikha: ye Sunaiya ki Rajkumari Saanvi hai...suna hai ke woh bohat khoobsurat hai aur woh baki rajkumariyon se kafi alaag bhi hai...agar Veer,Sanvi ko pasand karle toh un ki shaadi

Shera: NAHIN!...hum isi waqt Sunaiya ja rahe hai....pitah ji ko bol dena ke hum wasuli karne gaye hai

Shikha: par didi suniye toh zara

It was too late Shera was off on her horse towards Sunaiya

on the other hand Saanvi has a bow and arrow in her hand and is marking her target when Veer arrives...for a minute he stops n looks at her marking her target n then she shoots

n

BullsEye

Veer is exceptionally impressed but

Veer: nishana kaafi badah tha isliye sahi laga

Sanvi turns n looks ...and stays looking for a while

dasi comes up to her

Dasi: ye he toh hai rajkumar Dharam

Sanvi walks up to him

Sanvi: agar apko humari nishaane bazi achi nahin lagi toh app kudh kyun nahin nishaana lagate

Veer: soch lo ve...Dharam ka nishaana aaj tak nahin chuka

Sanvi: zara hum bhi toh dekhe

Veer is given a board with a smaller target marked in it which is hanged onto the tree

Veer takes aim and shoots and

BullsEye

Veer: meine kaha tha...Dharam ka nishaana khabhi nahin chookta

Sanvi: Rajkumar Dharam pehle hum Devi maa ke darshaan saath karle phir baki baaten hoti rahengi

Veer: tum keh ti ho toh teek hai

Sanvi: Prabhali(main dasi),vanita,vaishakha,sunita aur kanya app sab humare liye bhojan ka prabhandh kijiye

Dasis: ji rajkumari ji

Sanvi: shukriya...abb chale Rajkumar Dharam

Veer: hmm...ekk baat poochun...app apni dasiyon ko un ke naam se kyun pukar ti hai aur tumhari seva karna unka farz hai toh is mein shukriya ki kya zaroorat hai

Saanvi: bilkul zaroorat hai kyun ki hum nahin maan teh ke koi chota ya badha hai...humari tarah ye bhi insaan hai aur humara ye maana hai ke kisi mein farak nahin karna chahiye balehi woh sevak ho ya tumhara sab se accha dost...sab ko izaat deni chahiye

She smiles n walks a few paces while veer remains thinking

Veer: aryanagar ko Saanvi jaisi bahu ki zaroorat hai jo Shramik aur aryavarth mein koi farak na dikhaye...kaash Dharam Sia se pyar na karta

Saanvi looks back

Sanvi: abb chale ya yahin rook ne ka maan hai

Veer: app chaliye....mein kuch deer mein ata hoon


Shera comes there after Sanvi leaves n pulls veer to a side

Shera: kyun ki tumne aisa...agar iske saath shaadi karni thi toh mujhe itne sapne kyun dikhaye...Kyun

Veer looks at her unable to answer


enjoy Shona

nice story. if DV serial goes like this it be treat to it daily 😃

awwww me back with my next set of comments 😳

I love Veer's dialogues -

u have both beauty and brains veer knows exactly what he wants doesn't he? 😆

he thinks in his mind about shera....only if you read the sparkle correctly you can see the heart?awwww 😳

and that there is not a reason why i shudnt love u - double awwww 😳

I like the way how Veer is convincing Shera that she must go to her father once.. 👏

Shera mein nahin jaanta ke ye pyar hai ya dosti par itna jaanta hoon ke agar tumhe choot ponch ti hai toh dard mujhe hota hai 😭

Veer se mile bina koi kaise reh sakta hai 😛

mein baas abhi aya...tab tak sia ke sapne dekho 😛

woh kya tumhari pati hai jo tum uska naam leene se bhi sharmate ho 😆

Dharam's dialogues-

agar Sia ko aram chahiye toh aram hum karenge 😳

tumhe bohat fikar hai unki...Shera ko choodh Rajkumari saanvi ko pakad liya 😆

scenes

Your archery scene is tens of thousands of times better than what was shown in the lame pratha samar scene… 👏

omg the entire pretext of veer going as dharam brings such a biggggggg twist in the story… 👏

Oh my Saanvi is better than Siya lol…!

ab kyaa hogaa kaaliya.. 😛 dekhna padega..

lovely update keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼