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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
lovely update pls. contimue...waiting for what veer will tell shera 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
Woww great partt 👏 waitinnn 4 next one..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
ok sorry everyone for the delay and a BIG thank u to everyone who read the last parts 😛

heres the next part

Veer stands there unable to reply

Shera: kyun Veer...bolo

Veer: shera tum yahan se abhi jao...mein tumhe badh mein milta hoon

Shera: hum humare sawalon ka jwab liye bina nahin jayenge

Veer: tum bohat zindi ho...bahar joa wahaan Dharam tumhe mile ga...woh tumhe sare sawalon ka jawab dehga

Shera: nahin shera nahin jayegi

Veer: Shera ko Veer ki kasam..Veer bhi dekhe ke shera ki liye woh kya mayne rakhta hai

Shera looks irritated but leaves while Veer goes to Saanvi

Saanvi n Veer both pray

veer finishes praying before Saanvi so opens his eyes n looks at thinking....she is a perfect princess...she seemed to be a perfect bahu for aryanagar

Saanvi: Rajkumar Dharam aap kya dekh rahe hain

Veer: ji mein...kuch nahin

Saanvi: Prabhali bhojan ki tayari hogaye...

Prabhali: ji Saanvi

Saanvi: teekh hai khana lagao humare kaas bhojan kaksh mein...hum aur rajkumar Dharam abhi aye

Prabhali: ji


on the other hand Shera is going out the garden boundaries where Dharam spots her n goes over to her

Dharam: Shera idhar ao

Shera: Ye ho kya raha hai...undar Veer kya kar raha hai uss ladki ke saath

Dharam: kya! kya Veer kuch galat kar raha hai?...humara matlab hai ke woh kar kya raha tha

Shera: tum veer ke saath reh kar shayad uski tarah baan gaye ho...Veer kyun uss rajkumari se shaadi kar raha hai

Dharam: KYA!! Veer ne shaadi ke liya haan keh de

Shera: haan...woh uske saath puja kar raha hai...kyun

Dharam: Veer ye tune kya kiya...mein saach mooch gaya kaam se....

Shera: ye ho kya raha hai

Dharam: woh pitahji chahte hai ke Rajkumari Saanvi Aryanagar ki bahu banne par hum ye nahin chahte iss liye usse milne aur inkar karne yahan aye teh par Veer ne haan kar di

Shera: aisa nahin ho sakta

Dharam: Shera hum Rajkumari Sia ke paas ja rahe hain...Veer ko khabar kar dena...

Shera: nahin...app kahin nahin jayenge Veer ke aneh tak


on the otherhand Veer n Saanvi are dining

Saanvi: toh boliye...kaunsi zaroori baat apko kehni thi

Veer is unable to refuse her for the marriage proposal n trys to think up something

Veer: Rajkumari Saanvi

Saanvi: nahin apke liye sirf Saanvi

Veer:nahin app rajkumari hai hum kaise aise

Saanvi: aise waise kuch nahin sunn na chahte hum baas ye humara aadesh hai aur agar adesh ka palan nahin hua toh appko hum keedh khane mein daal denge

They both laugh

Dharam n Shera see this from a distance n are troubled for various reasons

Veer: acha jaisi apki marzi...toh Saanvi hum keh rahe teh ke...shaadi saat janmo ka saath hai aur iss bandhan mein bandh ne se pehle hum ye jaana chahte hai ke ap humare liye aur hum apke liya saahi saathi hai ya nahin aur is ke liye humme apke saath waqt bitana padehga...toh kya hum apse do..tin badh aur mil sakte hai

Saanvi: Rajkumar apne toh humare mooh ki baat cheen li

Veer: app baas apni pitahji se ye keh dena...aur maharaj aryavardhan ko hum sambhal lenge

Saanvi: jaisa app chahen

after dinner she bids him farewell n goes back into her room

She is looking into the flower petals in a water bath in her room recalling Veer and laughing to herself

Prabhali: woh apko kaise lageh Rajkumari ji

Saanvi: woh dikh ne mein teekh teekh teh par awaaz kitni kharab teh aur chaal...aisa laag ta hai ki kamar toot gayi ho aur khane ka tarika....

Prabhali: baas baas Saanvi...apko woh bohat ache lagi ye saaf saaf likha hai apke chehre par

Sanvi blushes and covers her face with her hands

She slowly brings them down

Saanvi: saach kahen toh woh humme behadh pasand hai aur woh humme lag ta hai ke usska naam likha hai humari haathon ki lakiron main

on the other hand dharam n Shera corner Veer n take him to a deserted place

Dharam: Veer tumhe humari peeth peche kunjar maara hai...humme yakeen nahin ho raha ke tum iss tara humara vishvas toodh sakte ho aur kisi ka dil bhi

Veer: Dharam ye tum kya keh rahe ho

Shera: aur nahin toh kya...tumne shaadi ke liye kaab haan ki hai

Veer: tum log kya keh rahe ho meri samaj mein nahin ah raha


hope u liked it
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Shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
👏 great
do continueeeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

i liked the following line a lot .. 😳

Veer: Shera ko Veer ki kasam..Veer bhi dekhe ke shera ki liye woh kya mayne rakhta hai

but.... omg what a confusion with this saanvi thing...


Saanvi: aise waise kuch nahin sunn na chahte hum baas ye humara aadesh hai aur agar adesh ka palan nahin hua toh appko hum keedh khane mein daal denge and they laugh

😭 why they two laughing like a couple?

Veer: acha jaisi apki marzi...toh Saanvi hum keh rahe teh ke...shaadi saat janmo ka saath hai aur iss bandhan mein bandh ne se pehle hum ye jaana chahte hai ke ap humare liye aur hum apke liya saahi saathi hai ya nahin aur is ke liye humme apke saath waqt bitana padehga...toh kya hum apse do..tin badh aur mil sakte hai

Saanvi: saach kahen toh woh humme behadh pasand hai aur woh humme lag ta hai ke usska naam likha hai humari haathon ki lakiron main

oh no... me feeling a bit nervous now about this ... 😕 veer saaf saaf kyun nahin bolta... he was almost flirting with her....... waaaaaaah... main shera hoti tho usse wahin maar deti.. 😆

i know this mess is only going to become messier with what Veer is doing.. do teen baar milnaa .. hai Raaam... ab is jhanjhat se kaise chutkaaraa paayegaa.. 😆

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
^^^^fistly lashy di thanks for the comments

i know its confusing but like Veer doesnt wanna break Saanvi's heart straight away

n they're laughing like a couple coz like he isnt able to laugh liek this with Shera n all coz she a lil too serious

the charecter of Saanvi will be a cameo but will affect Shera n Veer alot

also this confusing mess will all be sorted soon

shona 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: **Shona**



i know its confusing but like Veer doesnt wanna break Saanvi's heart straight away. n they're laughing like a couple coz like he isnt able to laugh liek this with Shera n all coz she a lil too serious. the charecter of Saanvi will be a cameo but will affect Shera n Veer alot. also this confusing mess will all be sorted soon

yayyyyy me happy 😆 me was getting very involved like asal main aisaa kuch ho rahaa hai.. 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
it was proper good i loved it thanx.


❤️hiri❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww Shona.. My dear dear shona.. I loved this dialogue the BEST ...
Veer: Shera ko Veer ki kasam..Veer bhi dekhe ke shera ki liye woh kya mayne rakhta hai 😍😍😍
I would like to see a more helplessly in love, confused, heartbroken Shera.. 😳 n I like the flirt Veer a lot 😳
Waiting for the next update... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy


yayyyyy me happy 😆me was getting very involved like asal main aisaa kuch ho rahaa hai.. 😆



lol 😆 😆

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