Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 11

shona atleast let us know the precap aage kya hoga cant wait 😆

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Shona........... what a lovely, dreamy love story between Veer-Shera...... Par this Saanvi......... omg she is a girl after my own heart........ She is brave, sofisticated, kind, well-behaved, sensible....!! I love her 👏 Dharam ........... poor dear........ u dont know what u are missing . Poor Dharam..... he is a clear case of 'Love is blind' But I love his love story with Sia 😳 ..... And plz plz plz, meri Saanvi ko vamp mat banana 😭 else Minnie will go bananas😆I read your FF after a long time and thank God I did.... 👏 Other wise I wudn't even know what I missed. Now me waiting for some serious plots , entwined in the love story off-course 😳 aagey kya hoga...... me waiting patiently........ actually not too patiently 😍 😉

Thoda 'precap' is garreb ki jholi mein daal detey toh achcha tha .......😛

hi minnie

thank u for reading n liking my ff!

dont worry i love saanvi's charecter too but the thing is i dont know weather veer shud have her or Shera...im confused too

as for making her a vamp...i can never do that

ok for u i will try to give a precap regularly 😳

Originally posted by: meghaparti

shona atleast let us know the precap aage kya hoga cant wait 😆

actually i did yesterday's part in a rush so its somehow messed up n never thought of adding a precap but from now i'll try to give a precap on regular basis 😛

too good 👏

do continue soon😃

ok next part:

Dharam walks into Veer's room the following morning to tell him to hurry up n meet saanvi today n get things sorted but he got shocked at seeing Shera in Veer's room

Dharam: veer! utoh!!

Veer: huh? kya hua

Dharam: Shera tumhare kamre mein kya kar rahi hai Veer

Veer quickly replies: meine kuch nahin kiya...mein sirf...woh kuch nahin hua

Dharam: agar nivriti bua ko khabar ho gayi ke ek ladki puri raat tumhare kamre mein thi toh iss baar tum toh gaye kaam se

Veer: nahin maa ko paata nahin chal sakta

he rushes to shera

Veer: Shera ootoh...jaldi ooto

Shera opens her eyes

Shera: hmm...itni acchi needh humne aaj tak nahin ki

Veer: tum yahan se abhi chali jao...mein tumhe badh mein milta hoon

Shera: apke mehal mein nashta nahin milta

Veer: agar maa ko paata chal gaya toh khabhi nashta karne layak nahin rahenge hum...jao

Dharam just watched the too amused

Shera on the other hand was enjoying this mocking n cheedh chad with veer

Shera: hum yahan se nashta kiye bina nahin jayenge...woh bhookh peet kuch kaam nahin hota...kyun Rajkumar Dharam

Dharam: haan bilkul bilkul

Veer: Dharam mein tumhe jaan se maar dalunga

Shera: ohfo...tumlog yahan behes karo tab tak ke liye hum rani maa se mil kar ateh hai...akhir woh bhi jaane ke hum yahan kya kar rahe hai

Veer: nahin...Shera chali jao...yahan se abhi...agar kisi ne dekh liya toh gazab ho jayega....

Shera: ladki mein hoon aur fikar tumhe itni kyun ho rahi hai

Veer: woh.... woh...izzat meri bhi ja sakti hai. 😆

Shera: accha mein yahan se chali jaungi par pehle ye bolo ke tum mujhese pyar karte ho

Veer: Shera...ye kaisi zind hai

Dharam: puri kardo veer

Veer: mein kaise

Dharam: hum humare kaan badh kardenge

Dharam covers his ears n trys to not laugh

Veer: mein...mein

Shera: tum kya

Veer quickly says

Veer: meintumsepyarkartahoon

Shera: woh jaldi mein sunay nahin diya

Veer: mein tumse pyar karta hoon

Shera: mein bhi

n with that she exits through the balcony but Nivriti enters

Nivi: Veer

Veer turns to her

Veer: maa

Nivi: Veer wahan kya kar rahe teh tum dono

Dharam: woh bua kuch nahin

Nivi: abb jald he apki shaadi ho jayegi Dharam aur maharani ko bahu mil jayegi...hum soch rahe teh ke Veer ke liye bhi hum koi achi si Rajkumari dhoondh na shuru kare

Veer: nahin maa.....

Nivi: kyun? humne apki dulhan dekh ne ke liye kitne kwab sajaye hai...ek khoobsurat se rajkumari hogi jo tumhe sambhal sake...jo tumko bhi pyar karna sikha de

Veer: maa mujhe bada ho jaane do...ladkiyan kahan bhagi ja rahi hai...aur waise bhi pehle Dharam ki shaadi ho jaane do

Niviriti soon exits

Dharam lets out a laugh

Veer: haas kyun rahe ho?

Dharam: woh humne kaha tha na humme uss din ka intazar hai jab tumhe pyar ho jaye ga...aur aaj dekho tumhari haalat pyar karke

Veer: sach mein tumhari maut mere haathon hai

the boys laugh n goto meet Saanvi

at the place where Veer last met her Saanvi was waiting for him agen

Veer: Saanvi

Saavi thought to herself how nice her name sounded when he took it....

Saanvi: Dharam hum apse...

Veer: saanvi ap humse kuch kahe usse pehle hum apko kuch baata na chahte hai

Sanvi turned her back on Veer because she thought he wud confess to her he loves her and she wanted to tease him for a while...not show the happiness taht it wud bring to her

Veer: Saanvi hum apse...

Saanvi's face grew into a smile she whispered to herself

Sanvi: bohat pyar karte hai

But instead Veer sed

Veer: aur jooth nahin bolna chate....hum Aryanagar ke Rajkumar Dharam nahin balke unke choote bhai Rajkumar Veer hai...mein yahan Dharam banke tumse milne aya tha ke tum mujhe dharam samaj ke mujhese nafrat karo aur iss shaadi ke liye inkar kardo kyun Dharam kisi aur Rajkumari se pyar karta hai...aur woh maharaj ko paata sakeh usse pehle tumhara rista aya...aur maharaj kisi bhi kimat par ye shaadi kar ayenge...sirf tumhari Naa he shaadi ko rokh sakti ti...mein ab aur tumhe andhere mein nahin rakh sakta

a tear trikled down Saanvi's cheek


Precap: Dharam n Sia hug wen Harsh sees n Bang more Drama to follow

Enjoy!!


Shona

thanks for the lovely fanfic update sona pls. do continue & haa aaddd some more romance of veer & shera in next part pls 😳

good one Shona 👏 👏 .........kahaani poori filmi hai 😉
Now......I'm waiting for some action packed plot.........
kuch teer, talwaar, horses( and horse-riders too 😛 ), royal villains...... etc. etc.

its soo cool 😳 and shera and dharam teasing veer 😳 its so chwet..... 😉 plzzzzzzz doo continue soon...
shyad sagar's be ese rake 😕

OMG !! shona .. hear d alot abt ur script .. couldnt stop myself from reading ur very recent part .. n i must tell u .. its amazing .. ... kaashi aisi hi development Dv serial main hue hoti tu kiya hi baat hoti ...

keep it up !! 😊

acha i forgote to ask .. who is saanvi??? sorry yaar i havnt read ur previous parts ... sop have no idea abt her ?? is she in luv with veer ??? 😕