.: ManVeer FanFiction - You can't hide :. Part Two - Page Eight - Page 2

Originally posted by: simi.k.

hey dear welcome to the forum 🤗

Aaww thank you so much for the lovely welcome! 🤗
And I must say amazing start..
love the way you describe everything.. the choice of your words... superb

Thank you so soo much! That means a lot 😳
so manyata is trapped and Uday is like her second shadow.. wow!!

Yes, sort of speaking. He's the unnecessary shadow in her life who refuses to leave her. 😆
pls continue soon and pm me if possible pls

Sure! I'll PM you as soon as I update :)
btw I am simi and every one calls me late lateef 😆.. 🤗

Hi simi 🤗 Or should I call you late lateef? People call me that too as well! 😆

Originally posted by: wqadf

Welcome to the forum

and all the best for ur ff

Originally posted by: ..CountingStars

My replies in RED. Thank you cho much for the lovely comment! 😳

Mention not!😆

Originally posted by: ..CountingStars

Replies in BOLD. Thank you so much for the lovely comment.😳

Originally posted by: Ana..

Well. . .Welcome to the forum ! :) Aaww thank you so much for the welcome! ^_^
Fantastic prologue...it is giving mysterious feeling...loved it...last lines were awsomisticc ... :) Thank you so so much, that really means a lot. 😳
update soon ! :) Will do :)

Originally posted by: ekra101

at first, welcome 2 the forum🤗😃. Aaww thank you! 🤗

nice start, liked manyata's thinking abt uday. wanna 2 know wht happens next. Thank you so much 😳

and plz continue soon. add me 2 ur pm list plz😳 Sure thing, i won't keep you all waiting :) ^^

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Interesting prologue

Continue soon

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Where have u been all this time!?!😆 😉

You wouldn't believe me if i told you! 😆

😆 Try, you never know😉

LOL! You got me haha! Well, the first time I watched DEK was around a year and half ago and instantly i wanted to write something. I sort of visited this forum (also added it in "my forum" because i was so bloody determined! 😆) but never got the opportunity to formally do anything about it because, well life is just so unfair to me *shakes head* lol. So yeah, it went away for a while until i watched the show again a few weeks ago.. and this time i was really determined to put my story out there for real. So here i am now! 😆

Good girl u better update soon then😆

Haha I will! I'm super looking forward to writing this story, i've already started on the first part.

Yeah I thought so, that's actually a great idea. Oh I'm sure u can pull it off and give justice to his character 😉 So Uday brings more torture for her oh noUday can't be mean to his princess😲

Aawh i will try my best! 😳 I mean..he does have a temper so, i don't know..i'll try to make him less mean then. 😆

Haha awww! I will update real soon so you won't have to murder me. 😆

Lol, good otherwise..*Evil smirk*😆

Already preparing myself to hide if that ever happens! 😆

Aha aww your welcome, Sadie its nice to see you here🤗

And it is freaking awesome to be here! 🤗

Originally posted by: Abcd8900

First of all, welcome to the forum,

I'm Amna

Loved the prologue

Ur word choice is amazing

And your writing style is awsome

Add me to your pm list