.: ManVeer FanFiction - You can't hide :. Part Two - Page Eight

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Sadie

@..CountingStars

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Alright, I think I'm done with the posts. Do comment and share your thoughts on this! <3

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

interesting update
is that girl is manyata? 😕
why she is runaway?
it was bad idea that she went to drink
even if she is 20 but she is probably alone she should think abt herself
now who is that guy? 😕
look like he is uday
uff that guy behave like manhandle
look like the girl is in trouble
continue plz

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

a runaway girl...

fro whom she is running

and she is pissing the hell out of uday

i am hoping that guy is uday... or i might have missed something in the updates

its coming out pretty interesting

update soon

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ekra rahnuma zaman.

@wittydragon

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

wow, lovely update. thnks 4 the looong update.manveer fight is the thing i always enjoy. is uday playboy here? manyata is a spoilt brat, wants alcohol in 20. i think uday will b able 2 handle her well. waiter is afraid of his master. hehe😉😆
p.s update soon

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

haye sadiee first of all i m in love with your prologue such a deeply you write i know there is lot of things we want to change in dekha ek khwaab but unfortunatly we can't do it ... but i m glad in this forums we have alot of writes who written many stories on manveer and gave us a chance to read it thank you so much ... and i really want to read it futher so please PM me for sure and now i m reading chapter1 and chapter 2 after that i'll surly do comment

my name is kritika but everybody in this forums know me as a kritz ...

i really appriciate your work

god bless you 😳

Edited by -Kritika- - 9 years ago