Heyyy girl!!!!🤗Yess u updated sorry for the late reply came bk really late yesterday from prom and fell asleep while reading😆😆
Coming to the chapter Mashallah!👏
The detail in this chapter is superb every line was amazing.❤️ It made me sink in to the text 😆
The words perfectly used in the text, *claps* love ittt❤️
That one line that I love the most "Who the hell was throwing these little demons at me" 😆 loved that line. ❤️Great use of word "demon". 😈 😆 I love how u portrayed the rock as the demon it shows how much it hurt her to an extent Hey Uday isn't nice is he 😆 EVIL!!😈 aha 🤣
I'm guessing Manyata is homeless poor girl
Am i right becuz that's what I think😕
The dialogues of both Manu's and Uday's is funny 😆 Jerk describes Uday best since he's such a player 😆 Naaa Manyata went in called him a "arrogant turd" 🤣 *Shots fired*🤣
Damn girl I'm in love with this Manyata. 😆
Arghh Uday's intense eyes Another line which i love:
"Every word was like hot lava, flowing from my mouth and landing on his arrogant face."
Damn that's deep girl 🤣
Naaa that has to be Uday following her🤣 HE;S turned out to be a creeper now 🤣
TBH yeah I LOVE THIS!!!😆
@Thanks for the PM😆
Pleaseee do update soon otherwisee😈 Mujsi bhuara aur nahin hoka 🤣
(My Hindi is crap so if u don't understand i'm fine with it )
P.S btw if u don;t mind shall i do ur banner for ur story 😳 😆
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Haha yes you are a genius! 😆 Oh gosh I wish i could say this was my first time writing, but no it's not. *hides face* I've been writing for years now, like a flop artist or something! 🤣 And yeah i mean over the years I've had plenty of ideas that i was never able to use, it sucks really. But i'm glad i acted out on this one, phew! 😆 Aha, aww babes ur so kind😆 Hey we all go through that stage😆 I remember when i wrote my first story oh ffs it was a flop 🤣 (LIKE wth was i thinking🤣*facepalm*) Years!!? 😲 😆😆 Yeah that explains why ur such a master in writing now 😉 Yeah, as i said you should let the ideas flow, because it makes the books you write more interesting. Its good you let ur idea out. 😆 It surely does. Acha hain bacha ji 😆
Ooh you're a writer too? Aha yep😳 😆 Do share your work, i'd love to check it out 😳 Aha naa i'll just PM it you now i've wrote loads of new FF but don't wanna upload it now i have past works but they ain't good 😆And noo i'm definitely not that great of a writer, i'm just forever learning haha! 😆 I see well I think ur better than me trust 😆 😉
LMAO! 🤣 Oh god that made me laugh so hard haha!! That was the aim babes😆 😉 and (P.S i was warning you😈😆)
Whaaat? *gasps* don't be surprised 🤣 theirs more surprises to come Seriously, you're just like Udayveer! 😆 Oh reallyy!? Oh thank you that's such a sweet compliment 😆
I'm hoping i can complete the update in the next 2 days, or before that if i get really lucky. Will be waiting!! Right here😆 So hopefully the update will be published before Thursday arrives 😳 = 😲😲😲😲Hey its THURSDAAYYY babesss come on baby updateee!!!!! 🤣(what a great time to reply na. See what i did there😆)
I see EXACTLY what you did here! 😆 Aha good GIRL😆😆 I'm in the process of formatting the update, will be posted in a bit. 😳
Aww, that's good to hear. 😉 Yeh sometimes it could be hard but hey we readers understand the pain so doesn't matter even if u didn't 😆 😉
LOL! I mean, i will try to balance out his character so that there's enough of everything in it to make for his overall character or rather his personality actually. And also, so that he doesn't, you know, look absolutely evil because damn that would be horrible. 😆 True that! 😆 Don't want our hottie to be pure evil now 🤣
Bahaha exactly! 😆 But how will the story proceed if the hero isn't evil😈 🤣
Already preparing myself to hide if that ever happens! 😆
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Aha,well babes you can't hide from me 😈 😆
I love how you perfectly referenced that to the title of this story! Bravo! 😆 And of course, i shall try and hide even if it is futile..haan nai toh! 😆 🤣 Hey i'm glad you noticed☺️😆 {P.S i didn't know that was the title tbh 🤣} 🤣 well it'll be pointless but go ahead I aint gonna stop you, but let me warn you no one has ever escaped from me😈 🤣
LMAO!! 🤣 Okay who are you and what have you done with the lovely Madz? Udayveer, is that YOU??! 😲😆= 🤣 WHO do you think!?😈 Madz was never lovely 😡 🤣
Could be you never know😉 🤣
Aha aww your welcome, Sadie its nice to see'ing'(stupid error i hate when i spell something wrong😆😆} you here🤗
You too?! Oh man it bugs me when i make errors too uff! 😆 *High five* 😆 It's annoying i tell you 😆
Haha yup! *high fives back* we srsly need a high five emoji😆
You'll have a blast don't worry😆 Main hoon na😆
Phew! 😆 🤢 what would u have done if i wasn't here 😆
Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 10 years ago
